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Reviews for Yu-Gi-Oh!: Denial

By : NeonTiger
  • From ANON - willowrose12 on March 11, 2007
    That was an awesome story - and that doesn't even begin to cover how awesome it was. It was utterly amazing. I've read that story before, when you did The Uke-Seto Challenge, but I was far too young then to understand how well-written it was. I loved it. The end was a little sad though - I felt really bad for Seto. You should consider writing more YamixSeto again - there's not enough of it anymore. Please continue writing. I enjoy your stories of my favorite pairing very much, including Fallen Star. Thanks for this excellently written piece of work. ^^
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  • From sweetciel on March 07, 2007
    Woah! That was HOTT! *fans self frantically*
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  • From nixwilliams on February 13, 2006
    hot, and heartbreaking. and it had plot. and it had the word "buttox", which i found rather hilarious. very, very great - and i've added it to my recs.
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  • From BlueSeptember on September 13, 2005
    That was a real gem! I enjoyed it very much.

    Thank you for it.

    ~Blue September~
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  • From ANON - kiokukaiba on September 10, 2005
    Wow. . . Wonderful detail, descriptions, completely in character. . . beautiful! There aren't enough words to describe how absolutely gorgeous this fic is!
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  • From ANON - ... on June 23, 2005
    ...shit......it was all just a dream?.........wow.......that was so awesome!^^.......thank you so much for writing such a goddamn good story^^!..........Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Charlotte on June 13, 2005
    This has to be hands down THE best Seto/Atemu fic I have ever read! You got Seto's characterization and obsession with Atemu down perfectly (IMHO). And the sex was abolutely great and very hot, you manged to avoid the same generic lemon everyone seems to write. Many kudos to you and I really hope to see more of your work soon :)
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  • From ANON - yaoi girl on June 13, 2005
    hi , i read your fic and i like it, veryyyyyyyy much, but i want know, was just a dream or was really yami, and if was yami, will he come back?, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - yami phoenix goddess on June 13, 2005
    aw.. poor kaiba!!!! ;-; what happens next??? will atem cum back??? (whines) i want to know!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - yamisetolover on June 13, 2005
    omfg you guys are awesome write more plz!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Cookie on June 11, 2005
    Wow. I have to say that this is one of the best fanfics that I've seen for Yu-Gi-Oh! out there. It was a very sensual and vivid lemon that included a pairing that I greatly enjoyed, and you kept characters in character except for that particular instance where they weren't supposed to be. I must say it was enjoyable to find that a lemon fic that started out in character and seemed to slip to out of character like some fics (although most fics tend to start out of character and STAY out of character) actually got turned around and explained in a very believable and realistic way in the end (I hope that doesn't give away the ending too much), adding an unexpected plot twist that most writers (at least not most writers around here) don't think of. Reading it through a second time you can also notice all the hints that most readers would have been too distracted by the want or a lemon to notice, and it makes sense. That made it truly enjoyable to read. Thanks for giving those of us who read NC-17 fanfics that don't just jump to the lemon without giving the plot a second thought a plausible and pleasurable story.

    Also, thanks for not using terms like "dick" or any other derogatory slang that tend to ruin an otherwise good lemon. You've proven that very engaging and very arousing lemons don't need slang to be good. And you've also proven that they don't need to rape the characters' bodies or mind in order to get them to have sex in a short story. It was one of the hottest and most engaging lemons that I've ever read.

    The only real negative that I can find in your story is the need it creates for a follow-up at the end (or maybe that's just me who wants to see what would happen if Seto's problem ever gets resolved and he's in a position that he could actually do something about his thoughts), but even still it's an enjoyable stand-alone fanfic anyway.

    I'm looking forward to seeing your next fanfic or (hopefully) the NC-17 rated chapter for Aurora that you've been promising. That fic's another one of my all-time favorites.

    *sigh* If only the majority of fan fiction writers were like you two. Then I wouldn't go practically insane from mucking through so many bad fics to find any good ones.

    -Cookie
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  • From ANON - yukari on June 11, 2005
    holy tit fucking christ that was awesome!


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  • From ANON - Rayne on June 11, 2005
    That was brilliantly done. I loved the heat between Atemu and Seto. And the ending was unexpected :( But really well done in character. Thanks for sharing your work. Rayne
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