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By : Kugatsu

From ANON - Velvetina on June 15, 2005
*galres* whoever the hell has dared put you down must face my wrath!!! bastards. I hate it so much when people read a whole story then review bitching about it, I'm like why did you read it if you don't like it. Ah screw 'em theres loads of us out there who love you including moi. Thankies for the mention by the way. I feel so sorry for Dartz its gotta suck having your heart crushed, espesh when you're that you but personally I feel evem more sorry for darling Peggy...hehe Peg-chan! I mean Datz understandbly is biased but why can't he understand that some people need time to mature...AND what if he and Peegy had stayed together and he'd never met Ryou. Oh well I know that it'll turn out good in tehe nd, I'm sure that Peggy will end up with Rapheal and everything will be hunkeydory...thats a fun word. Anyways as ever I love you and you work and once again tell anyone who disses you in teh slightest I will be after them with my pet mokeys mwahahah...lol XX
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From ANON - Futitl Faith on June 15, 2005
I don't usually like Pegasus in fics because everyone makes him out to be some kind of peodophile(sp?) but in this fic he seems more real. And I felt so sad when Raphael broke him heart, I wanted to cry! I actually like Pegasus in this story!

And don't listen to those people who leave negative reviews. If they don't like the pairings then they should just leave and not read the fic, but since they took the time to leave a review (even if it was negative) then this story must mean something to them. Forget them. We all know the truth that you came back to us (YAY!) because all of your loving fans begged you not to leave (I know I did!) And the pairings are what make this story so loveable^_^
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From Wicabeth on June 15, 2005
*feels warm and fuzzy that she was included* And I'm glad that we finally got to learn about this back story with Dartz and Pegasus! Yikes, harsh. But at least now Ryou and Pegasus can find friends in each other. They seem to get along really well.

And, you are just killing me with these hats of Ryou's! So cute!!
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From ANON - BlacKat on June 15, 2005
Rejection bites for Peg-chan!^_^Atleast he and Ryou have an understanding and are friends!
Raphael! How could you hurt Peg-chan like that! :can hear the Pegasus-fan's screaming in the backround: Jeez how obsessive fans he has...lol sorta like him:P So anyways will you still have more scenes with Raphael and Pegasus again! Give Pegasus another chance to woe Raphael...more CHOAS! :evil laughter:^_^ Oh and we can tell Ryou and Dartz are happily together! Obviously! So what about the othe cast of Yu-gi-oh? Will we be seeing more or less of them? Or will we just mostly see Ryou and Dartz(maybe Pegasus and Raphael?). I get the feeling you'll only let them pop up in the middle of the story somewhere...yea...-_-
SO back on track another GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT and do I mean INFINITY GREAT chappie and I can't wait for the next one!^_^ Update as SOON as YOU can! See ya!
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From ANON - Zoe on June 15, 2005
You know...I really dislike those people who have such little of a life that they have to search out stories that they know they'll hate, just to pick on the author. They're bullies, there's no other words for it. If they need to down others then they're really sad. And I think you handled the situation very maturely. ^___^ And you know...yes, I'll admit, there are some really weird pairings in this story. XD But they're incredible, and very well written. I myself am a puzzleshipper (YamixYugi), and before this story, I wouldn't read anything that had them with other people. And yet...Kimi ga Iru was my favorite. And not only were Yami and Yugi not together, they were totally pissed at each other! And it's really hard for me to see Tristan and Otogi together because of what Tristan did to Otogi in your stories...

Eee, and I know this is totally irrelavent, but I am totally in love with a girly-insane-yet-still-manly-hyper-ish Malik! *squeals* ^___^ He's so funny...yet...not in an annoying way...and I've always liked Malik, but now he's my third favorite. @_@

*worships...again* And, once more, I can't wait to read the next chapter! ^___^
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From ANON - Rachel Dracon on June 15, 2005
Gah! *falls off the bed* Man, I'm really starting to love Pegasus (a DEFINITE first with any fan fic I've seen him in), he's so fun! He was pretty harsh with Dartz, and it looks like Dartz never let it go, too bad. Perhaps soon Dartz and Rafael will see the light, and come to the one-eyed man... And Ryou is so sweet, must be really easy to be around, now that he's not programed to serve anymore. Sounds like he's got a good friend with Pegasus as well, I know I lurve anyone who cooks with me, and oddly enough, I get praise for my omlets as well. *hugs* Loved it, can't wait to read more, as always.
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From ANON - ~!~Adam~!~ on June 14, 2005
Wow..its been said before, the pairing are really weird, not natural at all, but wow, you make it seem natural and just so much fun, like it should be like that. It's really cool and breaks away from a lot of the hikari/yami fics. Not bashing them cause I love them to bits but it goes against the tide and you pull it off! I really want to see where the whole Pegasus/Raphale (I know I probably spelt those wrong) thing goes! Plus Dartz and Ryou seem really cute together! Keep going against the tides and claim the island everyone seems to be leaving as your own because you dominate the weird pairings! :p I look forward to more chapters and hopfully more stories!
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From ANON - ShadowofLight on June 14, 2005
ooh so that's what happened... ouch! >< what a way to break up. and hamster cap cute!! i want a bunny cap and ooh a bat cap! what? i want a baseball cap wiht bat ears! i can be bat kid! *giggles* or i could jsut tie kura's hair and die hte bands black *glomps him and seto happily* i love these boys!
on a serious note, i wish i had your level head. u have a point about thsoe that flamed ur story but u didn't lsoe your cool. i really admire that. but u know, they wanna be close minded ass holes let them. thanks for hte shout-out too. see we absolutely lvoe ur story! besides, the pairings in the pair are overused so muhc it's getting to be a damn cliche. urs is original and i like that :) keep up hte really great work ya hear?
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From ANON - Anon on June 14, 2005
You're a lovely writer, and I love how often you update. Please don't let complaints about stupid things like pairings upset you. Don't stop writing your sweet stories, please!
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From ANON - crimsoncoral on June 14, 2005
Don't mean to take sides but I think what Jell-O said was pretty much uncalled for. Well that's just in my opinion. For what it's worth I didn't think you did that on purpose, people just change their minds... that's life. Anyway, I�m going to read the new chapter now. So I�ll just tell you in advance: great chapter!! (Have a habit of reading the �authors' notes� before hand.)
Ciao-ciao

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From on June 14, 2005
I love this story! You are a great writer, I have nere seen Pairings like these and thier all so great! I hope to see more of your storys!
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From ANON - ~!~Adam~!~ on June 14, 2005
Yes, don't listen to people like JELL-O, you're every avid readers dream, great work without the long wait of updates! Keep up the great writing!

~!~Adam~!~
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From ANON - ShadowofLight on June 14, 2005
*staring at tv* tv good... LOL hey elast uupdate faster than anyone i know. hell u should get a award or trophy for being the fastest updater! did that make sense? anyway, so close so damn close! poor ryou. i would suggest he read the kama sultra book but i dunno... well there go a lot of question! gotta know more plz! *hugs tightly* i love you and i'm working on hte drawing since i jsut finsiehd one and clsoe to finsihing the other ^^
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From ANON - Velvetina on June 14, 2005
AHHH updateidge!!!! *runs around* sorry I'm on this medecation which makes me go hyper. I cracked up so much when Bakura was like 'I created a child'. and poor poor innocent Ryou...though not for much longer *grin*. le gasp right back atcha! Come on you have to tell us why does Dartz hate Peggy so much? Aww poor Rapheal is kinda caught in the middle, hes drawn to Peggy but is best mates wth Dartz, what a confusing predicement. You update early in the morning? The question is, is that your early morning or mine because I'm based in England. Anyway as ever I loved it and I can't wait for the next chapter. SQEEE! XXX
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From ANON - Rachel Dracon on June 14, 2005
AHAHAHA.... Man, Pegasus just cracks me the fuck up. Ah, funny, funny man he is. And I have no idea why. Can't wait to find out why Dartz hates Pegasus either. And dude, Bakura's still a possessive little fuck, ain't he? He and Seto have such a weird relationship, but it's enjoyable. Wish I could write more, since I love you so much, but alas, it's early in the morning here, and I wouldn't even be up this late if I wasn't trying to get a chapter of Unknown on the net. 'Night!
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