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Reviews for Right in a Bad Way

By : stetsuntam
  • From ANON - nicky on June 30, 2005
    I like the ending!

    At first, after what you wrote i was a little worried that it might be... not enough to like it... (that sounds weird, but i really don't know how to explain it any better)

    But then, when i read the ending, I totally liked it. Because it fits... not only the characters but also the style of the story. so... YAY You!


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  • From ANON - charizardag on June 29, 2005
    you call that finished? matbe one more chapter ought to do it, don't you? still good man, keep it up
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  • From ANON - Chrono on June 27, 2005
    Well, I'm glad I could be so helpful! ^_^ Once again, another wonderful chapter. I also liked this new lemon more then the last one. The ending is slightly confusing however. I can't tell if the story is going to continue from this point, or if this was supposed to be the ending. In any case, I hope to read more of your works, be it more of this story, or another story that you may have written. If you plan on writing other stories, please let me know, so I can add your link in the Author Directory to my Favorites list. Some thing that I don't do very often.
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  • From nickylein on June 26, 2005
    I loved this chapter!

    Especially Kaiba, and how Mai kissed Jou in front of everyone. LOL. I can so picture Kaiba's face, hehehe

    And I think it's great that you let her save jou but also let her point out that she knows he doesn't need protection. That was the perfect mix.
    I almost thought she'd go for "I wasn't worried about you getting hurt... I was worried about them" ^_~

    And the two of them having sex on Kaiba's dining table????? Ok, now that is mean. Tell him at least, so he doesn't have to sit there not knowing it... Poor guy.
    Hey, you could actually make this a joke in the next chapter... letting Jou make some comment just before leaving or so... nothing distinct, but enough to let Kaiba know, loooool

    Yeah... so, i really loved this chapter... also because Jou feels it's more than just sex... and to some degree Mai seems to feel it too. that's sweet. ^-^
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  • From ANON - charizardag on June 26, 2005
    this was funny and great, there are not many joey/mai stories like yours. I have stories at the original Fanfiction.net (Pen name: charizardag) that are yugioh too, only crossovers with other cartoons, Check them out and reveiw them (if you like, I hope you will).
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  • From ANON - reviewer #34321 on June 26, 2005
    OMG! Honestly, this is a great story! I always look for Jou/Mai couples and I'm so glad I found this one! This is great. I love the characterization and the descriptions. Very well done. I look forward to more!

    Keep on Truckin'
    Reviewer #34321

    P.S. you rock at this stuff!
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  • From ANON - Lell on June 26, 2005
    ^^ Goooood chapter. Sex in dining room - oddly classy and dirty at the same time (and I just loved the way Pegasus forgave Mai, but said he never wanted to see her again XD) I'm also pleased with how fast you update - you're better than me *Looks sheepish* Anyway, good job!
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  • From ANON - T.D. on June 23, 2005
    Well, it wasn't exactly what I like in terms of lemons, but I really do enjoy this story. I envy you. Like you, the first fic that I posted on this site is one with a somewhat unpopular pairing, if only for the most part because I think that no one was really expecting it. Also like you, I've seem to have recieved good praise for my story, and to date, I've only recieved on flame. Thankfully though, the person who flamed me was a little more mature than the person who flamed you, if only for the fact that their grammer was correct. However, unlike you, I will not be responding to the flame as maturelly as you have. This is for two reasons really. One is because when someone insults me, it goes against my personality to not retaliate. The second is becuase the person was stupid enough to post under the name of the character that one of the characters in the pairing ended up with in the actual series. This signifies to me that the person who wrote the flame couldn't care less about the quality of the story, and is only angry about the fact that I did something original and didn't go with the norm. In a way, our flamers are kind of the same. However, because you have the maturity to actually respond in a dignified manner, I tip my hat to you. Or atleast I would if I owned a hat. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Chrono on June 23, 2005
    Well, I can't say that I found that to be much of a lemon, but it is a good story. I've got it bookmarked, and as I do with all of my B/Med stories (atleast the ones that aren't complete), I check on it almost daily. Please update it soon, ok?
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  • From ANON - Lina567 on June 22, 2005
    yay XD i feel the same way as you do , this pairing IS neglected and needs more love on AFF.NET. dont worry about that review, as i can tell you're not worried at all. Anyway i love your story ! very hot.. hehe and steamy etc. >_< please continue! i cant wait to read some more!
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  • From ANON - nicky on June 22, 2005
    Oh, I can so picture Jou's "What?" LOL

    And I loved his reaction to the things Varon said... especially that he's worried about protection (even though it's a little late for that)

    I was kind of annoyed by Yugi disturbing them and bringing in this whole Raphael plot line again, but i guess it's gonna be important and also it was kind exiting at the end of the chapter, when everything got more complex...

    About the flame... yeah, keep it in. It's the best thing you can do. I mean, really, how pathetic does a person have to be to write such a comment???
    The flamers don't even get that their lame little reviews don't really touch anyone, because to do so, they would require some sort of objective argumentation (which those people obviously can't come up with). And, after all... flames are so much fun to read! *is amused*

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  • From ANON - Lell on June 22, 2005
    Was I the only one who found that flame amusing? The person's ignorant for a start, not to mention sexist. It does make me giggle when I get reveiws like that (the pro-het ones are just as amusing) Keep your chin up!
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  • From ANON - koalared on June 21, 2005
    I too prefer Jou/Seto, but a 'good' Jou/Mai story is always a welcome read. Hell, Jou/Anybody is great! You are doing a great job
    with this story, probably the best J/M story I've read, I look forward to your updates.
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  • From ANON - TheJubilee on June 21, 2005
    Hey don't let the flames get you down. I and apparently a lot of other people like your story, so who cares what the flamers think. Personally I think your story is a lot of fun. It's got humor and an interesting plot. I like it when people use the existing Yugi storyline and not make up weird situations that would never happen. Plus, the Joey and Mai relationship is classic. You could always feel the tension between them in the show and I think you portray that nicely. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - YAOI lovr on June 20, 2005
    I HATE FUCKING JOUxMAI stories! They DON'T belong TOGETHER!! got that, freak?! Jounouchi belongs to SETO. YAOI rocks heterosexual ASS!!
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