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Reviews for Right in a Bad Way

By : stetsuntam
  • From ANON - @_@ on June 18, 2005
    ohhhhhhhh finally a mai/joey fic! i know ppl dont like mai but i do! and ir eally DO think mai and joey would make a cute couple~
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  • From ANON - Lell on June 18, 2005
    I read your author's notes ^^ I think I'm in love with you - your ideas about her are along the lines of what I think about her.

    My views on Zaira...with any other character, she wouldn't work, but in tandem with Mai, it is pretty damn perfect ^^ Good job.

    As for the sex...oh geez; you had Jou's awkward lust and virgin-ness down to a tee.
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  • From ANON - nicky on June 17, 2005
    Awwwwwwwwwwww, even though it's all about sex she's so kind to him. She cares! I like that.
    He deserves a good first time! Let's see what comes next...
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  • From Kugatsu on June 14, 2005
    Just read it twice. Lol. Lip stick rumpled clothing! Woo!

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  • From ANON - Vapid B on June 14, 2005
    Well, I read the third chapter. It was...interesting, but not in a bad way. The female anatomy kind of grosses me out, so it was hard to read some parts. Still, I got through it and I think it was well written for your first explicit sexual scene. Even if it were not your first, it is still very good. I like the way Mai is 'breaking down.' What I mean is: I like the way her emotions are becoming overwhelming and she wants Joey the way he wants her. I hate it when authors make it seem that Joey is the only emotional or hormone driven character. Anywho, another great chapter. I look forward to the update.
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  • From Kugatsu on June 14, 2005
    It doesn't matter if it's popular. You write because you want to and don't let anyone bad mouth you!
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  • From ANON - nicky on June 14, 2005
    WOW! That was HOT!

    I can totally understand why Jou wanted to cry when he heard the knocking... lol

    My favorite line in this chapter was: Then... she broke. Sooooooooooooo coooooooool! First of all, I love ellipses (and am probably the only person in this universe who does), second: it's so short and still says all there is to say. It contains the complete atmosphere and emotions and hormones and thoughts and questions and everything there is in that moment in the shortest possible notion. I love it!

    Keep going like this. I can't wait to read on!
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  • From ANON - OliveraT on June 14, 2005
    hooohoh! Interesting outcome. Hurry up and put up the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Tinkerbell on June 14, 2005
    IT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!! I LOVE JOEY AND MAI!!
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  • From ANON - Lell on June 14, 2005
    If that was your first explicit section, it was very tasteful - you actually had (shock horror) emotion behind the sex! XD That's always good and it shows promise, wonderful promise in fact!
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  • From ANON - OliveraT on June 13, 2005
    I'm not much of a YuGiOh fan [despite that, I can't stop watching it], but something about this pairing just...draws me to it. And I must say, I am extremely disappointed with how few others feel the same way (especially how few there are on here). So I'm very relieved to find one that's actually well-written! Please hurry up and finish this fic, I want to find out what happens next...even if it seems obvious. =D
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  • From ANON - nicky on June 12, 2005
    I have to admit that i usually don't read Jou/Mai anymore, not because i don't like them, on the contrary I like them lots... I just prefer Jou/Seto...

    So, this review from a J/S yaoi fan really means something! ^_~

    I think you characterized them very well and made this fic a nice mixture of humour and cute hotness. I like it lots and want to read more!
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  • From ANON - Reigning_insanity on June 12, 2005
    LMAO! Poor Jou! I'm absolutely loving this fic so far! You write really well, and it has been so long since i've read a good JouXMai story! They are definately an under-rated couple ^^ I look foward to more chapters!
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  • From kepiet on June 12, 2005
    This is a really good story. You explain the relationship between Mai and Jounouchi well and realistically, with doubts and emotions. I really like this! Please continue.
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