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Reviews for Puppy

By : Moonwing
  • From ANON - maggiemay on June 14, 2005
    Interesting...so, who is really the master...if Jou was using his subservience as a way to get closer to seto's heart?
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  • From ANON - nicky on June 14, 2005
    I like this story much better than the other one... Maybe because it's written from Jou's POV. It's got much more insight to his thoughts and it's cute how submissive he is.

    I loved the scene when seto orders him to call him by his real name. Here, it was kinda good that you made no big fuzzy sentence around it all, you just let him say it and Jou thinks he knew this was going to happen. So, there's more to it than just some S/M kink... Good!

    Your chapters are kind of short though, and the last one (quite frankly) I have no clue as to what it's supposed to be good for. But maybe it's gonna be important for the next ones... I can't know, can I?

    Also: I highly apprechiate that you - unlike so many others - no not delete reviews that are not 100% positive. I've seen people delete constructive criticism and put up fake praising reviews instead. It's good to see someone who doesn't! Keep this honesty up ^-^


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  • From ANON - ... on June 14, 2005
    interesting......very interesting.......i do so hope that jou and seto end up having a better relationship, though.......i like it when they're sweet to eachother......with some bondage thrown in of course......but they still love eachother....... ^^.......still, pretty cool......... ja ne......
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  • From ANON - Jessica on June 14, 2005
    Ouch...this is just too painful to watch...an uber submissive puppy! This is really hard to read since I love Seto/Jou so much yet it's like a train wreck; I can't tear my eyes away! BUT THAT'S A GOOD THING!...'0.0...what I mean is, I really want to see where you are going to go with this story so I'll be hear waiting! As far as suggestions, I have none yet but I will let you know! Ja!
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  • From ANON - zombiedarkelf18 on June 14, 2005
    cool story update soon
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  • From ANON - person on June 14, 2005
    Ah, wonderful M&S *is in happy place* this is a brilliant story! keep it coming!
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  • From ANON - silverfox on June 14, 2005
    very interesting VERY good chapter keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - mofaf on June 13, 2005
    feel kind of bad for Jou due to the way Seto has been treating him until the last couple of chapters. I'm glad Seto has finally seen fit to let Jou call him by name and it is nice to see Jou enjoying his night with his friends. Hopefully things will get less painful for Jou and maybe more romance will be seen on Seto's part. It would be nice to see Seto finally make things official and show Jou that he is more important than KC in Seto's life and hopefully he and Mokie are both equally important for different reasons.
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