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Reviews for Summer Time Magic

By : Kugatsu

From ANON - NJ on July 05, 2005
*squeals at thought of lemon* Eee! Wonder if Yugi's gonna make good on that information Malik let slip? ;)
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From ANON - ShadowofLight on July 04, 2005
aaw how sweet. poor jou and mako and mokuba. relationships hurt... but i wouldnt know never been in one. nice but i need sleep nights!!
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From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on July 04, 2005
You didn't think I would leave you did you?! That chaper with Mokuba and Noa was WAAAY funny!!! Gods you are sooo hilarious lol anyway UPDATE SOON buddy!!
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From ANON - Anon on July 04, 2005
*cracks up* Man, the end to that chapter was funny! Gah, it's so weird to come back and find tons of updates. I remember 'back in the day' when I'd review every chapter... funny I had more time at school to do that then I have now that I'm on break. Maybe that's a bad sign.

Loving your writing, as usual and as always. Can't wait for Yugi/Marik next chapter, they're still my favorite pairing. I've actually had to go and do some digging to find out who some of the characters you keep bringing up are, since some of them are really out there. You're the first writer who's ever made me never watching this show something of a problem when it comes to characters. Luckily, you can find anything on the net. Nice to get more citrus, most of it was hot, though I really liked the Ryouta/Jou lemon. It wasn't particularly hot, mostly sad. It's nice to get more insight into Jou's character, he's becoming more important than I would have originally thought.

I also like seeing Seto, just hanging out and being around other people. It's a side to him most don't write, and many screw up when they do write. Then again, that seems to be your specialty, eh? I wonder what's going to happen with Mokuba, it's hard to see where you're going with that, and I'm also curious to see how Malik and Otogi will fix things, if they do. Peronally I hope they do, but whatever works is cool. Sorry 'bout the absence. ^.^
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From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on July 04, 2005
RD: *glomps Amelda* THANK YOU god thank u someone finally gave it to Yami straight up his god dam ass sheesh u pompous arrogant STUCK UP MORON OF A PHARAOH maybe if u DIDNT treat ppl to quote one the phrases Otogi keyd into ur car "like ppl are potato chips" then u WOULDNT BE IN THIS MESS U MORON BUT U MADE UR BED NOW U CAN DAM WELL ROT IN IT sheesh ok read my petite pink lips nimrod y-u-g-i LOVES MARIK end of story thats all she wrote period bye bye LATER STUPDID huh hehe nice touch with the bon fire and beach loving marik never thought u had it in ya hehehe and i see at least Kaiba and Katsuya can agree that Honda is a fucking piece of shit for trying to put the moves on Maliks lover of all people sheesh whats wrong unihair cant get enough on ur own so ya got go all prostitute on peeps and steal whoever u want to steal well not in this lifetime honda this time uve got me to deal with *grabs honda by his neck slams him into the wall and beats him to a paulp* that should do for now huh well Shwarz keep up the great work and update soon gtg now JA NE hehe and sry if me shouting busted some eardrums but im getting sick and tired of yamis pompous braine dead excuse for an attitude if he wants yugi to like him more in the hikar yami sense then hes GOT TO STOP BEING THE PHARAOH ND START BEING A REGULASR TEENAGER sheesh
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From ANON - Velvetina on July 03, 2005
WOOT cool chappie and I loved Yugi beating Marik with the flip flop, to funny. Yes I got the ArkLad, thing I'm smarter than folk think! Just so you know I'm going away for three days (mon-wed) so I wont be here to review. I havn't abandoned you!! Anyways as ever I am in awe of you and pray you never stop writing. Velvetina xx
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From Wicabeth on July 03, 2005
If this is starting to go how I think it is.. *twitches with happy glee* Because, even if Jou was an ass before, he still needs a happy ending of his own!
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From ANON - ShadowofLight on July 03, 2005
ROFLAO omg that was funny!!! hee you think marik would know better huh? oh short but good. i feel sorry for jou but it's like how that saying goes 'what goes around comes around' so shizu whatever is a dyke? well duh every guy she wants is either gay or taken. either way she's stilla slut. hmm what's next on the agenda? will jou find love? and it better not be mako! sorry i don't know all hte original names yet ;-;
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From ANON - BlacKat on July 02, 2005
Yippie! Another chappie UPdated! :YAY!:

Hope Mokuba can deal with Ryouta. You actually put Noa as Dartz cuz...cool! I giggled for awhile on there conversation :P

Poor Malik and Otogi! I'll support their relationship all the way to the end! :MALIK AND OTOGI 4EVER!:...-__-Hopefully they can work out their probs and be a happy couple again! T_T

JOU! He's been treated wrong his whole life! WILL HE EVER FIND TRUE LOVE!...:P Well hopefully he'll have a happy ending with someone! So I guess Ryouta is gonna talk to Jou for awhile...

Not to annoy anyone or anything but I like to point out again that Varon is still straight! Eghh...I just want to say that because I don't see him a lot in your stories :only once in awhile: ... so when will we be able to see him?

LOL! Again thanxs for the lime and lemon scenes! I laughed where Marik was trying to get Yugi! :P Yugi just threw Marik's flip flops into the ocean! hehehehe...

So anyways again great chappie and I can't wait for the next one! ^_^ Update as soon as you can! Oh and can't wait to see the next chappie for STILL! ^_^ Ja ne!
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From ANON - Velvetina on July 02, 2005
Aww truely awsome, although I'm not entirely sure about Mokie and the fisher guy after all he just came across as a bit too prevy this chappie...I'm not being mean just saying, eek I hope I havn't make you angry. Anyway the best part was the 'BUM' bit hehe poor starfish though, just too funny had me rolling around in laughter. Aww poor Jou, how could Honda do that too him? Whats Jou gonna do. Argh so many questions! Lol Love it! Velvetina xx
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From Wicabeth on July 02, 2005
Mmm, that was pretty hot on the boat. But man, Honda is a fucking asshole! *beats him*

And that thing with the starfish definitely had me giggling. *snirk*
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From ANON - BlacKat on July 02, 2005
Again another funny chappie to laugh about :P lol...nice title for the chappie too :P...I cracked on the part where there was a starfish on Ryou's bum :P

Wow some couples are going through a rough road rite now...hope they can make it through T_T especially Malik and Otogi T_T

Thanxs for the lime/lemon scenes especially with the Raph/Peg scene :will Raph mostly be the one on top when they're together?XP just wonderin...when can we see more of Peg-chan on top? XP:
I couldn't believe my eyes when I read the part about Mokuba and Ryouta, I thought it was hecka HOT! :P For a thirteen year old, Mokuba likes to talk dirty :P hehehe...and Ryouta :jeez: another pervert in the story... the more the merrier! the more perverts the more humor!...Again I wonder what will happen when Kaiba finds out and what the others will say when they find out WHO Mokuba's doing it with...lol ^_^

Oh wow Honda's gone...^_^:screams and shouts of joys in the backround: never really liked in the story since he abuses Otogi :looking for a knife to kill Honda with...j/k rather put him in a pit of rabid fan-girls of Otogi O_o now that's a horror...So what will happen to Jou now? I'm starting to like Jou now in the story since he isn't acting that much of an asshole and he actually asked Kaiba to throw Honda out :SIGN-YOU GO JOU!:! T_TSah ne what will happen to him now?...

May I remind the ppl that Varon is still probably the last remaining male that is STRAIGHT!...just wanted to point that out ^_^

Again great chappie and a hilarious one too :P Can't wait for the next chappie! ^_^ UPdate as soon as you can! Ja ne!
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From ANON - ShadowofLight on July 02, 2005
*squeals* ooh hot hot hot!! i seriously think mokuba found someone to treat him right ^^ so he's older point being? mokie's willing ;) bum starfish now i get it!! those things are cute and really something else :) i love ur fic i absolutely love it!! buy honda hope you get hit by a car! ... you know, i think i'm gonna go for a drive. *grins evilly*
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From ANON - NJ on July 01, 2005
*bursts out laughing* Hikaris on a sugar high! Priceless! :D
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From Wicabeth on July 01, 2005
JUST. DIES. LAUGHING....

I could hardly breathe a bit ago, I was laughing so hard XDDD
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