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By : Kugatsu

From ANON - Ghost Dragon on June 25, 2005
I say Mouba and Mako... never seen that before, But I still like m/J.... but hey your story you pick. I love how Yami actted in this.. I don't know why. But I like it, update soon, got to go later days
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From ANON - Zoe on June 25, 2005
It'd be really weird if Malik and Otogi broke up (;_; Nuu!) and Mokuba fell for Malik...XD

Oohh, I loved ze Yami/Yugi ness! ^^ And the fight...XD That was awesome. ...*sniffles* I feel bad for Malik though...Otogi all wrapped up in his work...XP Meanie! ^^ But I'm glad Dartz went to see Ryou...he needed to...*throws Ryou plush at his head* o.o;
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From ANON - Velvetina on June 25, 2005
MOST AWSOME DUDE! loved it, have to admit every chappie I am getting mroe and more fond of Rapheal and Peggy, tehy are just too cute. And Go Raphy, he was proper molesting Peggy, not that he seemed to mind lol. The water fight was hysterical and the aftermath too just pure genious, to make it all the funnier my friends and I just finished a water fight almost identical to that one! Great fun ^__^ I have to admit though I still feel kinda sorry for Ryou, there was no excuse for Dartz to do what he did so he'd better aplogise soon or any warm fuzzy feelings I have for him may dissapear, btu not for this fic cos it rocks. Can't wait for an update soon Velvetina xx
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From ANON - ShadowofLight on June 24, 2005
woohoo!!! mokuba and mako, yes yes yes plz!! that would be totally original!! i'm glad malik and otogi are working it out; i like dartz's secretary ^^ she should do that more often! oh another cute hat to add to ryou's growing collection :D so rap is on top? and here i thought it was the other way around *snickers* i love this. lemons plz! but u know, um waht about hte others couples u haven't mentioned? like mai *snarls* (greatly despite her), anzu, um shizuka (bitch). jsut wondering what's going on wiht them. heh for a minute i though dartz bounght ryou another cat ^^ no another demonic kitty!!
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From Kugatsu on June 24, 2005
I'll review my own fic because I often re read my chapters after I finish them. This chapter was boring and without excitememnt. I feel horrible for chopping off the lemons and I feel that my writing is tired.

Sorry for not updating so often, I was going to update around 12 lat night but I started talking to a friend of mine...

It's tired. I'll do my best to make it better nextt time. I promise.
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From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on June 24, 2005
WAY 2 GO!! Schwazie!!! You are amazing! keep going! YOU ROCK!!!
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From Wicabeth on June 24, 2005
Oh! And I'm cheering for Bakura for kicking Espa's ass *whoot!*
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From Wicabeth on June 24, 2005
Poor Malik *give him cuddles* And that water fight had me giggling

*chuckles some at your notes* That will be if I ever finish with the piles of papers I have from my summer class ^^; Feel free to write a story if you'd like, I won't feel offended or overshadowed or anything *^-^*
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From ANON - BlacKat on June 24, 2005
Thank the Gods! I actually thought I was going to go insane until the next chappie being updated! T.T such a relief but it felt like forever till u updated! Sahh ne...so wat's up? You don't update as frequently as u usually do! T.T I think i missed a note or something...

^_^ So anyways back to the reviewing...I hella cracked up on the water fight :P especially at the end with how Jou, Ryou, Mokuba, and Yugi showed their victories...:P hehehehe...when Kaiba walked in to see the chaos i cracked then and there :P especially when Bakura soaked him at the crotch :P

Yippie! More ppl going to the beach trip/vacation!^_^

I demand to see more and longer lemons!...PPPLLLLLSSSSSS! T.T Your stopping at the REALLY GOOD parts and it makes me want to cry T.T -> :P -> ^_^

Sooo...with Mokuba as a single person now...weird suggestions with the Ryuzaki and Mako thing...I got to say Mako cuz ur rite about them going to see and it would be the perfect setting for Mokuba and Mako to meet :P! ^_^ Hope Mokuba finds love out there cuz EVERYONE gotta have some lovin at one point in their life cuz if they don't...EVERYONE WOULD BE A VIRGIN!...j/k i mean common human instincts tell us to mate and have sex and junk and if we didn't the world wouldn't go round...ok that was way off topic :P sorry ^_^

So anyways great chappie again and can't wait :and do I mean can't wait: for the next chappie! ^_^ UPdate soon
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From ANON - Rachel Dracon on June 24, 2005
Mm, that was nice. My bastard internet went out so I missed a chapter, but hey, what can you do? Man, that noob thing... some people just suck. I like this chapter, it was more light hearted than the two that came before it, which made me smile. As a personal perference I tend to steer toward the more light hearted fics that don't sink into endless angst. You've written very good sad and depressing things, and you don't drag them out forever, so you're stories are great for me.

I liked the little thing you put in about Amelda being sick of hearing about Yugi, it's one of those little things that makes a story better, and it made me wonder if there was going to be anything connected to that later on in the story. I'm very anxious to see them comfront Dartz, and see if he actually has an excuse for the way he's been acting or not. I still have to say that any Marik/Yugi time is my favorite, but the Ryou/Bakuraness in the other chapter was cute, and I love how depict yami/hikari relationships, it falls well into the fucked-up category.

It was also nice to see Bakura kicking someone's ass to watch out for Mokuba, to me, that speaks volumes about how commited his is to Seto. Since Yami's group and Yugi's group still aren't getting along, I'm also wondering if there'll end up being another fight between them, and as for Anzu, she didn't seem to serve any purpose, and her absence hadn't even been noticed by me until you mentioned it. The ending to the chapter was nice as well, and even if it seemed boring to you, I greatly enjoyed it, and it acted as something of a breather in the story. Can't wait to read more, as always! ^.^
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From ANON - NJ on June 24, 2005
No, I don't think this chapter was boring at all. I really liked it. To tell you the truth, I wasn't all too fond of the pairing Yugi/Marik, but you make it so natural it doesn't seem odd at all... actually, all your pairings work. :D (Looks like Mokuba's got a new role model! lol) I can't wait to find out what the deal is with those balloons next chapter! :D
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From ANON - ShadowofLight on June 24, 2005
god yes n00b's are assholes and u know, u did hte right thing. they are so not worth the time. man this chapter is... well i'm kinda confused. the last cahpte, is it before th pool party? was hasn't dartz at least called ryou? and man what a mean cat! i feel like some couples are gonna be breaking up here. and yami should get over it. so yugi and marik are a couple. point being? i really love ur fics though :) and ur on gaia too? coolness! i'll pm u later ^^
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From ANON - Ghost DRAGON on June 23, 2005
Sorry I haven't Reviewed in along time, my net was down. But I loved your other storys, don't pay any mind to want people say about your story. If they an't got the balls to put thier name and not n00d or whatever it is then they and brun in hell.

On to a better note, I like how you had Bakura stand up for Mokuba when Espa tried to do that to him, that kick ass! But a pairing I think that would just mke Seto really mad, is a Jou and Mokuba. I mean what better way to get Seto from dumbing him for Bakura. Get the Little bro! Talk about drama.

Oh I kinda like Tea, only when she not bicthing about the friend ship things, so I can't say I miss her, but I would loved to see her dead! ^__^

Can't wait till i see the nect chapter....

Later days. Dragon,Ghost
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From ANON - Velvetina on June 23, 2005
Ahhh I loved it so much, my fave part was totally the last bit...Ryou is more evil than any of us knew...well I guess it couldn't all have been Bakura lol. Awww Mokies become attatched to Bakura that is just too cute and the way that Bakura defended Mokie was adorable. Btw I've reccommened to loads of ppl I know to read your work, I hope they review...but just incase they don't I have done it lol. I actually felt sorry for Jou in this chappie, all he wanted was for Honda to notice him, and did he ..NO. Stupid Honda, doesn't appreciate what he's got. Anyway Update soon!
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From ANON - BlacKat on June 23, 2005
Sahhh...hey don't worry bout the guys with the negative reviews and stuff, but i'd get piss too if someone screamed and said bull to me...:shrug: actually I ALREADY understand and know that!...don't worry about that i mean the world goes round and some people in the population DO have sticks up their @$$&$...and their are some ppl who are TOTALLY obsessive fanatics...u know what i mean rite?

So anyways back to the reviewing great chappie! I totally cracked when Malik compared the heat to "hotter than a fat woman's underarm" and i asked my sister if their really was something like that and i laughed at my sister's expression!^_^ Jeez Bakura and Marik scaring the kids in line, hehehehe even Yugi scared a girl cuz she pointed at his hair :P

I can't really say Honda, Jou, and Yami are bad guys in the story cuz i hardly ever seen them in the story, BUT then again they did acted like @$$&$ in the first story...^_^...:P hopefully they'll change soon rite?...and wat the heck happened to ANZU?...i mean to clear things i don't like the girl:i don't even like her in the anime/manga either...: but then i don't see much of her with Honda, Jou, or Yami...did somethin bad happen to her or somethin, cuz if thats the case... :mwahahahahahahaha...:^_^ So wats gonna happen to Yami/Amelda and Jou/Honda?...Are they gonna stay together or wat?:don't really care much for Jou/Honda, but wat i really want to know is the info on Yami/Amelda!^_^:

Poor Mokuba!...13 and almost doing that crap with ESPA:shudder...sadistic bastard:-_- Jeez Mokuba's going through an emotional rollercoaster that every teen goes through...welcome to the TEEN DRAMA club! Poor Mokuba...does he get no lovin in any of the stories? Sahhh ne...atleast Bakura helped him at the right time and Mokuba atleast is being nice to him...getting married to Kaiba :P lol...

Dude when Honda, Yami, Jou, and Amelda got to the pool i seriously felt the tension and hostility there between the rest of the guys! Jeez they might as well start WWIII...in the pool of course :P

So when in the hell are we gonna see Otogi, Kaiba, and Dartz? I mean i no they got companies to run but they got to have some vacations and day offs to relax rite? :P Poor them work and no play. If i went through that cycle in my summer vacation I'd probably consider killing myself then and there XP...j/k!

BALLOONS! ^_^ I got and idea on wats gonna happen next and hopefully i'm right...T.T I become bummed when i get something wrong...BUT u know wat they say :expect the unexpected"...I think :P...

At the end of ur story I read the part which said that u weren't getting any more real reviews so I hope my review makes ya feel better :shrugs: who knows? So this is the conclusion of my review and I can't wait for the next chappie!^_^ UPdate as SOON as YOU can! Ja Ne!

P.s. I go to GaiaOnline too and I was wonderin wats ur sn there? Reply if ya want to...its optional:shrug:
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