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Reviews for Broken rose

By : akuchan
  • From ANON - Anon on April 16, 2009
    i absolutely loved this story
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  • From ANON - HavocTellenoi on January 26, 2006
    I think that 'beautiful', 'emotional' and 'delicious' describe this sotry to a 'T'. It was a wodnerful story. Lovely and sad adn blissful and the happy-ish ending, it was great. Kudos on another fantastic piece of fiction Akuchan!
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  • From ANON - LadyGrey & Lady Trelane on January 06, 2006
    *melts*

    Whoa, I was so happy to see this updated and finished, now I'm off to read more of your stories because I enjoy your writing style immensly. It was beautiful, and if you ever think of a sequel or continuation, you know I'll be right there to cheerlead you on. Oh, and as for the renovations..... -_-;;

    *Trelane smirks* It's especially fun when I surprise her and drag her in there... we can be out of touch for hours...

    *LG blushes scarlet and hangs her head* Umm... anyway... ah, great story, loved Jou's reaction when Seto came in during the epiloge, "Oh fuck me! Not again!" and umm, talk to you later!
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  • From ANON - LadyGrey on October 31, 2005
    Why aren't you updating?? You're killing me here.. here's a kitten to spur on your writing about the Kitten. =^..^= Update! ~LG
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  • From ANON - LadyGrey (again) on September 07, 2005
    Ah, that was the last thing, another review reminded me, I also wonder about the line "Jou's contempt for Seto"... Is that what Seto's thinking, or are you really going down a bad road now and Jou really isn't going to forgive Kitten? And I agree too that it might have been a touch too soon for Jou to introduce Yugi; although the revelation that they're in a similar situation is recent and they haven't discussed it yet, Jou could/should have figured out that would be another hard boundry, at least initially, for his Kitten. Okay, your story's kept me from working long enough tonight, ja ne!! ~LG
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  • From ANON - LadyGrey on September 07, 2005
    OMR... just read chapters 2 & 3... the first comment I had was wondering what the HELL could have been going through Honda's head, "Oh, hey, let's change what I've figured out is their signal and see what happens?" Flippin' IDIOT! Second, glad Mokuba's finally accepting their relationship, although it's a bit creepy that Seto started responding to /him/ as a Master... Third, Honda'd better get this obsession with Jou out of his head right quick... And holy wow, knew it was coming but /total mortification/ for Seto when he figured out who the second Master was! Oh, and I guess one more thing, my yami Trelane says "thanks," although I'm terrified to go into her soulroom now since she said she was 'redecorating' based on your dungeon description. -_-;; Why me?? Okay, please update soon, ja ne. ~LadyGrey (and an ecstatic Lady Trelane)
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  • From ANON - LadyGrey on September 06, 2005
    Wow.... I had my doubts at first, but OMR... I only have time for Ch. 1 tonight, but I'll definately be reading further and reviewing often. I seriously jumped out of my chair when Yugi and Honda saw him -- I even figured it was coming, but it was /such/ a jolt. Well written. Neat story. Of course, if my yami ever gets her own body, you've just given her the blueprint for how our relationship will change.. S'okay tho. Ja ne! ~LG
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  • From ANON - Morghann on September 04, 2005
    Definitely worth the wait. I do, however, feel sorry for Seto. Though, he does deserve punishment, I don't know if it's really a good idea to bring Yugi in on the game right now. Later, sure, but it's a little sad that all Seto can think about now is Jounouchi's contempt for him. And no safe words? I know they're hard-hitters, but it seems a little irresponsible of Jounouchi. But I look forward to the next part, 'cuz it really is very, uh, interesting.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 04, 2005
    Jou's contempt for Seto? He asked YUGI over??? NO! NO! NO! *scream muffled into hand* Poor Seto! *wail* I wanna kick Jou's shins in for this- he better have a damn good reason or Seto SHOULD leave him.
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  • From ANON - maggiemay on September 04, 2005
    *glomp* Oh...it was definitely worth the wait...now I'm waiting for the next part of it. Great work.

    Maggiemay
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  • From ANON - Jessica on June 22, 2005
    Whooooaaaa...O.O...Yugi...and a trussed up Honda...*crickets chirping..tumbleweeds rolling..fat lady singing*...THAT WAS TOTALLY UNEXPECTED!...AND FRIGGIN' HILARIOUS! I definitely wasn't expecting Yugi as the master, but it is strangely fitting...Anyhoo, I loved how you gave us extensive background on each couple and I just can't wait until the final chapter is posted! I hope Seto can get his act together before the two weeks is up! I'll be anxiously waiting for the results!...^_^...ooooohhhhh, I'm so excited...

    ...and I just can't hide it...

    ...I'm about to lose control...

    ... ... ... ... ...

    ...and I think I like it!... (if u don't know where this is from, then I feel sorry for you!...j/k, can't wait for chapter three!
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  • From ANON - JadedSoul on June 21, 2005
    I simply love that you made Yugi the dominant in his relationship with Honda. No one else really seems willing to do that, so great job on doing something different.
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  • From ANON - yaoi girl on June 21, 2005
    hi, this us one of the best fics that i ever read, but think thet kitten and his master can end split make´s me cryyyyyyyyy, please joey and seto must end toguether, pleaseeeeeeeeee. the kitten must come back whit his master.
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  • From ANON - Maggiemay on June 21, 2005
    *Scream of agony* This is the most gorgeous fic. I am so eagerly awaiting it's posting. I couldn't find it at the lair when I went back to review *damn it*. So PLEASE...post part 3 SOON. Oh gods I hope Seto gets his head out of his ass...sniffles...
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  • From ANON - Jessica on June 20, 2005
    Wow...O.O...that's about all I can say at the moment...VERY ORIGINAL! I LOVED IT! I can't wait to see what happens in their relationship next! I hope Seto gets passed this! Can't wait for the next chapter! I'll be anxiously waiting...-_-...^_^...
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