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Reviews for Memories of Shadow and Light

By : Lechan
  • From ANON - AngelViper9 on September 15, 2005
    Baaaad Yami....Poooor Yugi!!!Oh please do update soon.
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  • From ANON - ramona on September 13, 2005
    darn typos...
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  • From ANON - ramona on September 13, 2005
    Reviewing again. I told you I would, lol. I'm not rushing you or anything...I just really want to read more! At first, I wasn't sure what to expect, considering it's a time-travel fic (sort-of). I always suspected that Yami had a bit of a cruel streak like Bakura and Marik (I mean, look at how he duels, utterly ruthless sometimes). I could see Atemu with an 'I'm the pharaoh, and I can do this just because, well, I can' attitude. You made him very interesting, a bit scary because of the power he weilds, but attractive because of that hidden vulnerable side. Okay, Atemu-fangirl moment over. Your scenebuilding skills are excellent, your characterizations are decidedly above average, and yu have a great deal of talent. I guess that's why the next chapter will be worth the wait.
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  • From ANON - Sutashii on September 12, 2005
    Wow This is absolutely one of my favorite fanfics ever I cannot wait till the next chapter Your doing such a great job! Please continue soon And keep up the great work You are simply amazing!
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  • From ANON - ramona on September 11, 2005
    I'll review for you every day for the next two weeks if you post another chapter.I'm completely serious; I'll review so much you'll get sick of me. But it's your own darn fault for being such a great writer lol.
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  • From ANON - Selene on September 10, 2005
    Aww poor Yugi, oh and are Tristan and Bakura going to show up later. Or Mai and Serenity. I hate those, well I hate all the girls in the show. They either made them sluts or too dramatic goody goody´s. If I ruled the show the girls would all die, be replaced by better ones with better names and you would see blood. But sadly I don´t. Anyway great story, can´t wait till the next chapter and youre going in my favorites
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  • From ANON - MysticMaiden18 on September 10, 2005
    great job man you made me cry as yugi was wipped , good luck in your job by the way
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  • From ANON - LadyGrey on September 09, 2005
    Interesting, I like your story so far. It's cute to read a story beginning with Yugi questioning if he and Yami can have a relationship or even if he's gay, since most of us are so used to them being a cannon couple we don't think about it anymore. The few tiny inconsistancies I've noticed aren't really even wrong, just a different take on the way the soulrooms work, and that's okay. I /have/ noticed a few typos, however, and I'd be happy to correct them for you or do a quick proofread on your next chapter, if you're interested. Email me. Ja ne! ~LG
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 08, 2005
    this fic is ssssssssssssoooooooooo good it hurts >_0 pleaaaaaase finish i'm dying here =3
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  • From ANON - catti-dono on September 07, 2005
    KAMI...Waaaayyy too depressing....LOVE IT....I actually had to use half a box of Kleenex....so I hope you keep your promise and not make the next chapter so angsty...is that a word? I am really enjoying this story....it is so well written and you can tell that it is well liked...keep up the good work...I look forward to the next chapter...(by the way, can I have a double whopper with cheese? LAUGHS)....catti
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  • From ANON - Aryax on September 07, 2005
    Amazing chapter!!! wow! I wish I could write like you.
    Poor Yugi, and *poor* Jono when the Pharaoh finds out.

    I have been reading your story from the very beginning, and each time I find that I get even more attached to it. I'm addicted and making you entirely responsible for it!
    Though I suppose there are worse things to get addicted to, especially in the place I'm from.... Colombia.

    Anyway I just wanted to let you know you have some awesome Yu-Gi-Oh! fics.
    >>Please forgive the grammar mistakes, English isn't my 1st language (if you ever need help with Spanish don't hesitate to ask).
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  • From ANON - Draza on September 07, 2005
    yay! chappie!! *dances around showering author with cookies* thankyou!!! Poor Yami and yugi!! Hope they get through this alright!
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  • From ANON - Dara on September 07, 2005
    Chlip, chlip poor little Yugi. He don't know that yami love him and Atemu will lust for him. But I am mean I want that Atemu will have little Yugi che che che. Please write quicly next chapter oh please, please ... chibi puppy eyes
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  • From bluesun on September 07, 2005
    well its about time please hurry with the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Grey on September 07, 2005
    Ow, ow, ow. You have ripped out my heart and stomped on it, and yet I feel the urge to give you a hearty round of applause. Because really, we *know* this is headed towards nakedness and such, and it's so much more satisfying when things are in-character at the first meeting, and... (...oh, screw it. I want Yugi to be okay! Help! Save him! Medic!)

    ...yeah.

    At the same time, your writing continues to be wonderful. There's a *reason* why my checking of this category went from once monthly to twice daily, and it rhymes with 'Kechan'. I love the two timelines, I love Yami's guilt for doing things we haven't even gotten to see yet, and I love the fact that it can make me this miserable. Argh. Thank you, and I'll be keeping an eye out for the next chapter. (Will I ever, man. Eek.)
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