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Reviews for Memories of Shadow and Light

By : Lechan
  • From ANON - ReaperRain on April 01, 2007
    Oh, so sad! I almost cried (and trust me, it takes a LOT to get me to cry, so that's quite an achievement) especially nearer the end, and Atemu's reaction. I sincerly hope you'll make this story have a happy ending, since it would practically destroy me if it didn't. Oh, and I think it's good that you made Yugi deny he was gay at first, since it makes for better reading and it's more realistic then: 'Hey, I think I'm gay! Oh well' that seems to occur in a lot of fanfiction (my own included, I fear.) The plotline can be a little hard to follow at times, but I think it actually makes more sense than some of plotlines in the actual show!
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  • From tavia454 on March 31, 2007
    You killed Yugi! *sniff* That was sooo sad! Oh please update soon, please don't leave it like that, please?! On another note, I'm glad that little good for nothing Roman got what he deserved! If only his partner would have gotten his share of the suffering! Reallly great chapter!
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  • From catti on March 31, 2007
    Dear f@#king God...that was great...some spelling errors but that happens when one is rushed...you can blame me if you want...since Im always emailing, cracking the whip over your head to hurry up and update...laughs...man talking about needing the kleenex twice...shit that was awesome...cannot wait for the next update...man cannot wait....cannot wait...cannot wait...cannot wait...laughs...catti

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  • From ANON - Dara on March 31, 2007
    Two chapters? In week I have no time to revievs. I love love scene with Atemu and Yugi. Yugi have finally understend that he love Atemu and Yami. Poor Atemu he is so good king ho worry for his kingdom and people. I'm glad that Yugi is now for him. I know that he must go, but he will help Atemu and will be back with Yami, right? And Yami will love him very much - meant in bed - all night, to show his love, for his akhu. Please Yugi come back for Yami, he is daing without you. I hope that will you write when Yugi in order to show Yami that he love him will dominate Yami. I like that. When not in this story, in other story?. I hope that ceaser will die from Atemus hand. Can't wait for next chapter.
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  • From ANON - T-chan on March 29, 2007
    I love yooou ;.; write more please xD
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  • From ANON - no0ne on March 26, 2007
    Nope u did'nt over do it a bit , I am just sad that that will be their first and last time together.
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  • From kagomegirl on March 26, 2007
    wow poor yugi-chan!!! update again soon!!
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  • From ANON - lonelydove on March 25, 2007
    *sniff* whats gonna happen??? how r ya gonna leave us hangin like this lol hope u update soon
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  • From ANON - Sansi on March 25, 2007
    Way to go, Lechan! I thought that was a wonderful chapter and I didn't think the lemon was cut off or something. Still, I can't believe that this story is coming to an end. Though I'm really looking forward to the next one. I'd like to add one more thing: The translations at the end are a little bit confusing. When I read it in the chapter I have to go all the way down to understand what it means and then try to find the place I left off. It's not that bad, but maybe you could insert the translation in the text using (bla). This switching to the translations kind of kills the mood. But besides this: WONDERFUL work
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  • From LadyLaran on March 25, 2007
    gah!!!! Evil cliffy! Darn it, please have the next chapter up soon. I can't wait to see what happens. And to think, there's still followup as Yugi faces his yami when he gets back. *bounces* Can't wait!!!
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  • From ANON - cosmic clown on March 25, 2007
    Oh this just gets better and better....Don't change anything! the sex scene was well done and did show the feelings you wanted it too...Honda's still a jerk and you just gotta love granpa and his sneaky-ness ^__^ more please...
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  • From ANON - ReaperRain on March 25, 2007
    I don't think you killed the lemon at all. Ooh, I really really really really (you get the idea) wanna find out what happens! Pleeeeeeeeease update super-soon so I can read more! MY BRAIN SHALL EXPLODE FROM THE WAITING!
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  • From dragonlady222 on March 25, 2007
    This was so hot and sad. Poor Yugi, now that they have consummated their relationship he has to leave. If Fastosus can keep up with Yugi, he will die in a most painful way.
    I'm glad he didn't let Pragus out.
    I thought the lemon was really hot and good.
    I feel bad for Yami and I hope they do succeed in getting Yugi back and a body for Yami.
    Great chapter.
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  • From Sekre on March 25, 2007
    Ahhh I dunno what to say except I'm anticipating the next chapter!!! And wonderful lemon ^^
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  • From tavia454 on March 24, 2007
    OMFG! That was the best chapter yet! I am so happy to see that your writing again! Oh god, please, please continue? Don't leave me hanging. WOOOOOOOW!
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