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Reviews for Memories of Shadow and Light

By : Lechan

From ANON - rosie on January 09, 2007
its interesting, please update soon. good luck
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From ANON - Dara on January 07, 2007
Sorry for late review. I'm glad taht Yugi have undursted that he love Atemu and Yami. I really hope that in next chapter will be Atemu/Yugi lemon scene, and dance. Will Yugi live now in Atemu chamber? I hope so. Please when you will kill Yugi, make him come back to Yami, to future, of course with memories about love for him - Yami. And make Atemu kill Prago-man, when Yugi will be dead.
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From ANON - Anon on January 07, 2007
I enjoyed spending my winter break reading Memories of Shadow and Light. Thanks for writing such an interesting story.

I really hate the Romans. Damn you, Prego-man! That nickname makes me laugh every time Yugi uses it.
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From ANON - PotionsPet on January 06, 2007
Hey next time you add to this, you think you can send me an email with the web address to let me know?
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From ANON - my opinion on January 03, 2007
I have just sat here and read your fic for 3 hours.

What a great job you are doing! I haven't enjoyed fanfiction for such a long time becasue of the lack of good reads lately. This isn't even a fandom I like. I don't even know what made go to Yu-Gi-Oh fiction in the first place..let alone pick your paticular fic. All I know is I am so glad I did!

I will have to commssion you some pervy pictures for this! P.L Nunn would do a great job of this I think.

In case you haven't heard of her...and I doubt that since everyone knows of Pam...here's the link to her site.

http://www.bishonenworks.com/

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From ANON - ReaperRain on January 01, 2007
Oh. My. God.
I would physically BEG you to continue this story if we were in person, but I'll just have to settle with pleading. PLEASE update quickly, because this is undoubtably THE best YamiYugi pastfic I've ever read, and I've read just about all of them. This had me hooked from the beginning, and now things are really starting to heat up, I'm on the edge waiting to see what will happen next. I've left my email address, so if you would be so kind, could you possibly alert me when the next chapter is out? Sory if that's asking too much. I really, really want to keep reading, because this story is, and I rarely give such a compliment, PERFECT.
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From ANON - No10ne on December 30, 2006
so good, I think my toes are stuck on curl! Oh you've got to finish this!
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From ANON - Sanni York on December 30, 2006
I can't tell you how happy I was when I first found this. I love the Ancient Egypt theme and Atemu's and Yugi's relation in them. Too bad there aren't so many, and if there is someone, it's too fast... too swift.
I stayed up all night to read this, I know, I'm a slow reader, but I truly enjoyed it. Your technique of writing. It's all so living and describing and yet not too much.
Oh, and the heated moments between them *shakes heads with a smile*, you really had to quit there, hadn't you? Yes, most evil of you. I hope you'll update soon and that it will qontinue where you left it. ;P

About your notes, do you write them with detail or do you just write the idea? I sometimes have a hard time to continue a fic, which I am disappointed with. I get an idea, start writing a few sides and then it dies. Have any tip? Love your story!

P.S. Sanni York is my pen name... Are one supposed to write one's true name...? *embarrassed*

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From ANON - dragonlady222 on December 30, 2006
This is an excellent story. I am so gald I found it. I just read the whole thing and can't wait for an update.
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From ANON - Sekre on December 29, 2006
I almost fainted at the last paragraph - Atemu is baaaad!! Poor yami, at home worrying about his light while his former self is on his way to getting himself a lap dance!!! -giggles- And the so called 'non-existant' relationship between Seth and Jonoh coupled with said lap dance just made my day. I'm usually just a SJ and BR reader, but this fic has me so into YYY that I wish there was more fics with the same kind of intensity between yugi and yami as you've presented.

Merry belated Christmas - and a happy new year!
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From ANON - Yuugi25 on December 29, 2006
@ Help Please:
Are you being serious? Or did you accidentally review the wrong story or something?
Because this story DOES have paragraphs. Every single chapter does. And it's quite possibly the best fanfiction i've ever read.
Don't get me wrong, i'm not against people who give constructive criticism, but are insults really necessary? "You can't write" is hardly a nice or a helpful thing to say. It can be hurtful for an author/authoress to read something like that, after they've put hard work into their writing.
Please try to consider other people's feelings if you're going to make negative reviews.

Anyways, that aside, THANKS A LOT FOR THE CHRISTMAS CHAPTER LECHAN! ^-^ I was feeling a bit down before i came to check on this site, but when i saw the update and read your newest chapter, it really cheered me up. ^_^
I LOVE the way Yami lost his temper at Kaiba like that. It's such a Yami thing to do. *Is remembering Yami's duel against Haga on the train* I also like that Yami switched languages when he lost his temper. It really added to the situation, and made Yami seem that much more intimidating. Mainly because i didn't know exactly what he was saying until i read the notes at the end. So i felt a lot like Jounouchi was feeling while witnessing the scene. Speaking of which, i love the way you portray Jou. He CAN be silly and easily worked up at times, but a lot of writers forget that he can also be very mature and observant when it counts. I love how you manage to keep all the characters really in-character. Keep it up! ;)

I also love the way you're developing the relationship between Yuugi and Atemu. A lot of writers tend to make characters fall in love with each other, almost straight away. But i love how you're moving things at just the right speed. Fast enough that it's easy to see the changes, but slow enough that it doesn't seem at all rushed. So, great job on that part too!

Ati just needs to wait until Yuugi's ready, and Yuugi seems to be finally accepting his feelings. So it won't be long now. Hehe. ^_~ I love the way you ended the chapter and i can't wait to read the next one! I must know what happenes next! =D

Thanks again for this chapter, and i hope you had a Merry Christmas! ^_^
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From ANON - gizmo on December 29, 2006
this is a great story, it will be fun when its done, and if you add lemon would be nice.
//gizmo
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From ANON - Help Please on December 28, 2006
I don't think I can read this why? Well You can't write. Split it into Paragraphs. It would help a lot!
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From ANON - Eternal Nightshade on December 27, 2006
...*Glomps you * Sorry, but I couldn't help it. SQUEE! I'M SO FRICKIN' HAPPY YOU UPDATED! I. LOVE. THIS. STORY. SOOO. MUCH! I've been checking, you know. Back here. Many times. Hoping that your chapter number would change. *Purrs * I am HAPPY! HAPPY REVIEWER!

The grape scene was quite amusing, the comments you add are _very_ enjoyable, the �Oz thing� had me laughing the hardest, though�and the dance? *Nods * Definitely good. Very.

...*Stares * But...it's over...doggonit. Action! Action is good! That made me very, very happy! You got me to laugh, get all watery eyed, frown, feel pity, grin maniacally, AND blush. So, in short, I love it.

Unfortunately, I...have two errors to point out, (Forgive me, o' great Lady Le-chan, for you are amazing...)
And a question. *Giggle *

First, sadly�the minute corrections.

You said: �But� you, Yugi, I will stop.� �This definitely initially confused me. I mean, the story was totally and completely awesome, and I hung onto your every word�but I _did_ have to pause there, scratching my head a moment. �Stop him? Stop what? He�s not doing anything, you idio�OH!� So, I think you meant �+for+ you, Yugi, I will stop.� Right? (*Laughs at Atemu�s arrogance, a few lines down *)

And�oh. Oops. Found one I wasn�t even looking for. Umm. �All he could do was stare back at Yugi seemed to come to a conclusion even he had not been aware of.� �I�m not sure what, but there �is- something wrong with that sentence. �As� instead of �At�? *Shrugs *

�^^; �Um. And another, �The pr-aA obeys not mortal�� Mortal(s)?

But here�s the one I meant to mention: �Have I� please my pr-aA?� Pleased, right?

�Btw. The ending with our favorite pharaoh and his little hikari? Had me grinning like�well, like any of the YGO psychos before ultimate world domination. You rock. Out loud.

Oh! Right! The question�I almost forgot. *Clears throat * Okay, umm, I am adoring this story to the height of adoring any fanfiction out there, BUT�inquiring minds (or maybe just me, darnit all�) want to know! You know how you made Yami relive everything?

Well, thus far, he�s only relived the bad stuff�when IS he going to remember the good stuff? Like, this pretty little scene right here? *Points to Yugi straddling Atemu on throne * �Cuz if that wouldn�t lift Mr. Gumpy-pant�s mood, I dunno what the heck would.

On the other hand, perhaps you are intent on delaying the happiness of Yami so you can torture him and us, and make us (and him) squirm, as is a very good tactic for an author or authoress�a cruel one, but a very good one.

Sorry for this long-winded review, but even that is meant as a compliment, �cuz I can�t shut up about how awesome it is. *Duct tapes mouth to end review * Mmph umph mrrp muhuph!

(Which, in non-duct taped speech is: Please update when you can!)

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From ANON - Luna on December 26, 2006
WOW! you merry christmas too!!
such a great story!!! please update soon... and Happy new year and christmas (again^^")

bye bye,
Luna
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