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Reviews for I Could'nt Let You Die

By : alistersangel
  • From astracindel on July 10, 2005
    PS...just cuz I'm from Kentucky doesn't mean I don't know my grammar and what-not....LOL....just felt a need to defend myself there. :)
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  • From astracindel on July 10, 2005
    I just tried to email you...but it came back as undeliverable. I was wanting to offer my services as a beta. I do have a series here, just check out my profile. I haven't had the time to devote to writing that I want since the birth of my son. I think you have talent if it is nourished. I had the same problem when I started...ideas without a detailed story. You have a great start and wonderful ideas...they just need expanding. I looked for help and found a wonderful beta who was full of the descriptive part I was lacking. I would like to offer the same to you....someone who can take you're ideas and help you expand on them.

    I have a 17mo son so my time is limited to evenings after he goes to sleep...but I would love to help. I see what I was in you and want to help you find the inner story-teller that I'm pretty sure is there. Email me if you want...the REAL addy is attached to this review. And keep working on it, even if you get flamed dont give up. No one is a perfect writer right out of the gate. (LOL im from KY hence the horse race joke) :))
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  • From ANON - subjunctivity on July 09, 2005
    Whoa! Slow down and put some spaces between the paragraphs.
    This could be a great fiction, but try to put some more effort into it before you post it. Start a new paragraph when a new person speaks; put a space between each paragraph; don't rush; make a chapter at least 600 words long. Edit it slowly and carefully with a spell check.
    You have wonderful ideas, but try to make it easier for people to read. I'll definitely read it after you've fixed those things to some extent. ^_^
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