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Reviews for Night Walk

By : Kugatsu
  • From ANON - Missa on July 18, 2005
    Aw, the ending was sugary sweet. Maybe the relationship can work; there doesn't seem to be anything stopping them from being together. Oh, tell me there's some climax sometime. I'm paranoid.
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  • From ANON - koalared on July 18, 2005
    Sorry I need to amend my review. Jou deserves Better than to be at Ryou's, he doesn't need to be dissed by his "friends" like he was.
    That's why I want to see him move out and on to better things!
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  • From ANON - koalared on July 18, 2005
    *applause* Nicely done! Looking forward to their one shot........or maybe a whole story. I want to see Jou move out of Ryou's, Jou doesn't deserve to be there either.

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  • From ANON - BlacKat on July 18, 2005
    What an ODD way to end!-_-So anyways great story :although I would have like a LOT more LIMEif that was ok:...^_^ but it still was ok! GO VARONxJOU! ^_^
    Oh joys! I can't wait for the one-shot of Marik/Yugi and the rest of the gang :P! AHAH! I knew it was Honda that was abusing Espa! T_T Poor Espa! Now I feel sorry for him cuz he got stuck with...HIM of all ppl...fanfiction Honda i mean XP so anyways I'll R&R for your one-shots and I hope you can make one-shots on JOU/VARON...lol ^_^ Ja ne!
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  • From Wicabeth on July 17, 2005
    Can't wait for more stories! And I dying to see if Jou finally moves out from Ryou's place and gets his own or moves in with Varon. But, I'll wait and read. I keep enough people waiting with my updates after all ^^;;
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  • From ANON - devil child on July 17, 2005
    yea 4 jou & varon but does jou still think that its because varon misses mai?
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on July 17, 2005
    Gah thats the end? Well it was a pretty damn good ending but I'm all sad now *pout* Oh well I have lots of nice one shots to look foward to so I'm just gonna be happy about that.

    Although your stories are starting to have an effect on me. I got a small plotline in my head the other day involving a Shadi/Rishid pairing and an Isizu/Shizuka pairing. I've never see those pairings written before and never though of them before so I can only conclude its your influence on me! However I'm not gonna write it, I just don't thik i could pull it off, *sigh*

    Anyways I liked the lack of sap in this story, I have no objections to sap like it totally works for Ryou/Dartz but not for the pairing, so you read my thoughts totally, or maybe i read yours?! Gah I don't know either way its good and I'm happy.

    My fave part in this chappie was...well I have to bits, I loved it when Varon was like...I'll just go put some pants on...I don't know why it cracked me up. and the second part was when the sprinklers turned on, i was just bwahahahaha..ing my most evil laugh. I just had this outraged image of wtf on their faces in my mind untill they found it funny.

    Ok so that wasn't my best reviewn but I try. As ever LOVE IT!

    Velvetina xx
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  • From ANON - Chisisi on July 17, 2005
    It...it is the end? Like...The End...? For real...? No kidding...? Or did I just got it wrong...? o.O'''
    Wow...^_^'
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  • From ANON - Missa on July 16, 2005
    Wow, I like. Jou and Varon, just living and not making any complicated love story or over angst drama, it works.
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  • From ANON - Missa on July 16, 2005
    I found the chapter ending hilarious. Varon coming onto Jou, and Jou stealing his back-- nice guys, ne.
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  • From on July 16, 2005
    Varson wans kiss da boy... lalla kiss da boy! Whoa.. little mermaid song going on here.... ANYWAY! Like it , you cheats on Varon?! Mai is a ass whole, Varon is SEXY!
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  • From ANON - NJ on July 15, 2005
    That was ^_^ Are you going to write about Malik and Ryou's little adventure? Heh, the image of them curled up together in front of the TV.. KAWAII :) Updates! You sure are a night owl, aren't you? Or.. would that be a morning lark? ;)
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  • From ANON - mala on July 15, 2005
    You do a great job with dialogue and characterization, although I always saw Ryous as a bit kinder than that. It's just starting to get interesting, I think, so you better update! *laugh* nah, take your time. But it's great. ^_^
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  • From Wicabeth on July 15, 2005
    Poor Jou.. I feel like he does right now.
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  • From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on July 15, 2005
    RD: well really Varon its not that hard u know i mean has nothing been fowarded to u in the knowledge of prefs not everyones going to go down the straight and narrow Varon did it ever occur to u that u may be in the Bi category i mean its more the beyond obvious u like Joey and hes ten no A THOUSAND times better then Mai at least he understands what its like being on the rough end of things its not ez believe me well Schwarz keep up the great work and update soon gtg now JA NE ^__^
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