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Reviews for A Home of Our Own

By : Kugatsu

From Wicabeth on January 15, 2006
*cuddles little Yugi* Stupid people at school. School sucked ass. And who cares if you have little kid stuff? =P Shit, I dressed up in a Superman shirt and cape for my birthday when I was a freshman XD .. (*cough* I'm 23 and I still take a YGO backpack to college!)

I'm getting curious to see how it turns out with Honda. And with Ryou going to start training.

*laughs!* The end part with Marik cheering Yugi up was cute XD
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From ANON - hatochiisai on January 15, 2006
Wow... I go away for a month and you go to town with the posting! I LOVE what's going on with Ryou and Bakura, and Bakura wanting to educate Ryou. Can't wait to see how this deal with Seto works out. And I am intrigued by what's going on with Dartz. O.O I'm also glad to see Jou settling down in a home.... but other than that... well... I can't say I'm too thrilled with the other things goin on. While I have seen the Malik/Otogi pairing, I can't help but wish Malik was with Marik... and as for Yugi... well... I have to admit that I just skip over the parts involving him now... I'm doing this for two reasons. 1) I cannot stand the Marik/Yugi pairing. At all. and 2) Yugi just grates on my nerves too much. He acts like a 6 year old who's been spoiled rotten to the point that he's beyond all hope and I just can't stand him... and Yami's being a major ass, too. But I adore how you are portraying Ryou and Bakura. Their personalities are so different and charsimatic, it really draws me in. They are the characters that keep bringing me back to this fic, I just love them. ^_^ hope to see an update soon!!
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From ANON - Aino Hikaru! on January 11, 2006
Wah!! I got them all this time!!! YuYu Hakusho, Prince of Tennis, and Fruits Baskets! ... At least I think that's all of them... lol!

Poor little Yugi, though he is being a brat (BIG TIME)! Marik is practically raping the boy, and no one pays enough attention to him anymore to see what's really going on with him. I mean, How can he ever learn to grow up if he isn't taught properly in the first place? GRR! It makes me so mad! Everyone is just acting like Grandpa and letting him stay the way he is! You can't ignore bad behavior, it has to be corrected!! Sorry, I have lots of younger sibs, raising kids has replaced my free time!

Bakura's finally starting to understand as well. I felt like he was really trying to push Ryou into wanting to go to school, by the way he was describing it and why other kittens go to school. Ryou's too co-dependant to make a desicion like that on his own though. I'm surprised that he actually want outside... but he's always been too curious for his own good! I repeat, Ryou, stay away from Dartz, he's no good for you!!! (sorry *grin* Jou/Ryou lover!)

And have I mentioned that I want to smack Yami, 'cause I do! I really really do!

Fabulous as always!
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From ANON - Quichi on January 11, 2006
I love how you keep mixing in little bits from other series! Are the other Sohmas around somewhere too? And SM's Luna! I loved it! Thenk you for updating so much
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From ANON - Black Ice on January 10, 2006
Yuu Yuu Hakushou, Furuba (Fruits Basket,) and Prince of Tennis. Yugi's getting awfully bratty, he's such a child. I can't believe he's got the dog for his teacher, this does not bode well! ^.^ And Bakura has excepted the job offer, MORE SETO/BAKURA AND RYOU/DARTZ. ^-^ I sooo can't wait for the next chapter!
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From ANON - sirithiliel on January 10, 2006
aww...poor yugi..feel sorry for him, he's so confused. hope bakura's worries about ryou leaving him aren't justified, and i can't wait for another update!
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From ANON - Velvetina on January 10, 2006
*GLOMP* Mwahahaha I've got you now and I am never going to let you go. Love you so much :D Lol yes Marik/Yugi I lurve Marik Yugi although I did say a Dartz/Yugi if ya wanted to get away from this Universe for a while. Totally up to you my dear.

References?? Nope no idea, still lol. I'm guessing it has smething to do with the 'Kitty Benuto' (I have no idea what that is sorry), and the inu's at school but hey I know nothing!!

Yuck, I hate orange lol.

I feel so sorry for yugi. *squeeze* stop being mean to Yugi, poor ickle kitten. I loved the school scene though, espesh when they were talking about the bowls and having bones on it even though they were neko. I giggled so much lol.

Oh myGAWD. Bakura has actually gone to Seto?? Wow!! oh now they'll have to spend time together and fall in love and do lots of dirty stuff together and you'll hear me cheering in the background *chibi grin* Happiness!!!

Awww Yami really seems to care for Amelda but he's neglecting Yugi a little. However he's in love (even if he don't know it yet) so he can be excused for now...but if it goes on too long I'll have to have my knive have a chat with him...not really I wouldn't wanna hurt his pretty face.

Eeek sorry about the random review I have had far far too much coffee. Love it!

Vel
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From Wicabeth on January 10, 2006
hee hee! I saw Yu Yu Hykusho (totally mucked up the spelling there XD) and Prince of Tennis for sure (Eiji really would make a cute Neko ^-^ )

Poor, little Yugi. He's really taking all this rough.. Someone come take care of the cuteness! You can't leave cuteness alone! ;.;

*snerk* Kitty carrots XD

*wiggles around* Now I wonder if Ryou is going to go to school and/or how he will fair with all the new students around him. We wouldn't want to have another incident like at the center =( And, awww, Bakura is going to be sad letting his little Ryou go!
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From Wicabeth on January 02, 2006
*wiggles everywhere* I still wanna know if Jou is in a delicate condition XDD

And I did feel rather sad for poor Shizuka having everyone leave her.. I hope she gets a good home. And I'm definitely curious as to how Yugi is doing (and Yami). But, at least one is in a good home now like you said.

(squeee, EFC Diana XD )
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From ANON - ShadowofLight on January 02, 2006
ooh that was so sweet! jou is happy with matty and varon. poor honda though, and poor shizuka. man that's bad that i couldn't remember who blue and luna were! i had to reread the moon medallions then neo-serenity's finishing school. ha! go me *lightly hit head wiht knuckles*
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From ANON - sirithiliel on January 02, 2006
wonderful! feel bad for shizuka though...i'm afraid i won't attempt the contest, as i don't know much anime. nifty idea though and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
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From ANON - Black Ice on January 01, 2006
BI: Two things I forgot: 1) That Ein person, is that Ed from Cowboy Bebop? Sounds like her but you always use Japanese names and said "he" 2) HIS TAIL FELL OFF??!! OK, wierd. Funny, but wierd.
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From ANON - Black Ice on January 01, 2006
BI: I saw Sailor Moon and Wolf's Rain (I think.) Although I think someone already said it. I wanted a Seto and Marik one-shot. Oh well...
Muse: At least you won that DVD on First Night
BI: Oh yeah! You had to say the name of Tofu's (forget her real name) new school. The people there obviously didn't know Japanese, there were names like "wanagi" when it was really "Kisaragi Girls School." Really people, it's not that hard.
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From ANON - Aino Hikaru on January 01, 2006
Sailor Moon(!), and did I catch a Cowboy Bebop reference as well?

I Like that Jou and Valon worked things out! Jou needed a home. But who's gonna adopt Shizuka?? A poor Otogi should just shack up with Malik , Jeez!

I'd like to mention that the parts with Dartz and the tail weere great!!! I about fell of the computer chair laughing my ass off! My best friend lost it too! I just love how you can write such witty scenes inbetween all this darkness and angst. I can't wait to find out what the alibasters are up too! Go little Ryou-chan! But beware of Dartz, he hates himself, how can he love you?

Love It!!
-Hikaru
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From on January 01, 2006
I have no idea at what anime you could hinting at...sorry. I've got a one shot heading my way anyway so I'm not greedy *grins*

I loved this chapter it was just so sweet. I really wanna cry for Shizuka, the poor girl, she's losing her sight and los everything that is familier to her. That has got to suck big time. But she comes across as a very cute kid and I am sure that she will be fine. I thought the way that Isis acted with her was really nice as well. She genuinely cares about the neko's she is dealing with and it has got to be so hard to get a case like that where theres not much you can do.

Lol yay Jou's ledgendary eating habits are shining through.

Aww I don't normally like Honda but I kinda feel for him now. He's kind of got lucky but on the other hand he doesn't understand that fact and can't appreciate that at least he's gonna be looke after. Silly pup but its understandable.

Also Ootogi, how sweet was it when Malik came to see him...major AWWW moment!

My fave moment was that flash of Dartz ad the fact that you mentioned he had badages on his tail because he kept biting it. It reminded me of what I told you about my cat before and sent me into hysterics.

Until next time remember I LOVE IT!

Velvetina xx
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