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Reviews for A Home of Our Own

By : Kugatsu

From ANON - Black Ice on January 01, 2006
BI: The name was quite apt indeed.
Muse: -_-; Quite? Indeed? Oy...
BI: Stuff it. It's still upsetting that Velvet won't be finished, but, I'll live...if only because I fear death. I have to say one thing though...someone really called themself 'Anonymous Reviewer'? I've got to check that out, perfect example of people who shall flunk art and anything else that uses the right half of the brain (I do have my halves right, don't I? -_-;)
Muse: Shall?
BI: Quiet you! I feel pity for Honda, this does not bode well...Raph has to stop being so intimidating and Pegasus...not even gonna go there. Seto, it's not obscene, in fact, it's part of the reason I'm reading this fic, and anyone else for that matter! And Dartz...good luck with the tail, you're gonna need it.
I wonder if Shizuka will end up living with Matty too. It'd be trouble for Jou and Varon though as they already have Matty on their case...little sister walking in on that...ouch! OO;
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From Wicabeth on December 31, 2005
If Honda is going to be Pegasus' new pet, there better be plenty of newspapers on the ground XDD

*giggles madly at the last part* That just cracked me up XD
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From ANON - ShadowofLight on December 31, 2005
ROFLAO omg dartz! he's a neko (or an inu?)! ooh to see him actually chase his tail like that in real life! ooh I can picture it and jsut laughed. poor honda... i mean geez jou has a home, the guys need homes... well and honda doesn't get enough of the limelight in ff. i wonder what'll happen and if he'll like his new home but i could also picture him pulling at hte leash. like that shepard that was gonna get fixed in Dr. Dolittle ^^
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From ANON - sirithiliel on December 30, 2005
very nice chapter. peach juice is good! another story? Great! looking foward to it! wish you luck!
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From ANON - YAY! on December 30, 2005
YAY! You updated! I was waiting! YAY!! ::Happy Dance::
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From ANON - Velvetina on December 30, 2005
I LOVE DARTZ...*GLOMP* love him love him love him!!!!...eh sorry about that but the way you write him its just to darn cute to resist. I now want a Dartz of my own and I was never too fond of him until I started reading your work, you've corrupted me and I'm liking it. hehe

So as you may have gathered the Dartz bits were my fave throughout this chapter. Especially the last one...go tail you rock. Mwaha Dartz will never get it, although I do have this cat and his tail is so long that he can actually catch it every now and then and he nips it accidently and lets out the cutest little mewl...bless. I'm sure you didn't want to know that.

Ooh we have Peggy and Raphy back in the picture. Peggy's adopted Honda?? Wow didn't see that one coming, *giggle* even better the return of Peggy's spray bottle. It amused me no end when he kept spraying Honda and Honda was just like 'WTF'?? Brilliant I'm sure those Raphy and Peggy will have fun training up the new inu pup.

Poor Noa, he is just one of the sweetest things in this story. I just wanna huggle him and tell him it will work out for the best. Also I almost died laughing when Seto was having 'obscene' thoughts about Bakura, very small bit of the chapter but it really jumped out for me.

Thanks for an awesome chappie...by the way are you sure I can't have a Dartz of my own...no?...well shucks. LOL

Love it
Velvetina xx
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From ANON - BlacKat on December 28, 2005
0.- sorry i didn't review the other chappies -.- time goes by fast yet i go slow compared to it XD lol great chappies really though what shocked me was what happened to Dartz 0.0 what's up with him!?!? well i'm guessing he's a Neko too or is he like a werewolf that only transforms at one point 0.0 curious~ ^^ Well yea' can't wait for the next chapter to find out if you put a scene of him in there.
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From ANON - ryou'sgirl on December 26, 2005
i like this and hope u update soon :333

alot of stuff happened in this that i didn't expect. it started as oneshots then turned into another story then switched into another. did you think of that and/or just change your mind while writting it? i like bakura and seto alot, and malik and otogi. they are cute. i like them all except for yugi. he's way to mean to yami, yami tries hard to take care of him and yugi's just a spoiled brat. grr. he deserves to be statuary raped by marik. grr.
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From ANON - Velvetina on December 21, 2005
Anon 2005-12-20 id # 2035548213
Bleh, I'm not trying to prove anything and I don't recall telling you anything about yourself. I just had a complaint which you hugely overreacted to

Sorry to butt In Schwarzwald but I came on here to check that this person wasn't bothering you any more but apparently they are and they've pissed me off enough at their constant swiping at you that I just have to say something even if they don't bother to read it!

Ok right. I am so fed up with you coming on here and hassiling this author. They made a decision that was best for them, get over it. As for the whole you telling them about themself I do believe that you said something along the lines of "You're just pouting cos something didn't go your way" I know you didn't exactly say it like that but that was basically it. If that ain't trying to tell someone about theirselves and their actions, which in all honesty you have no clue about, I don't know what is. And as for your overreacting comment, I personally too would "overreact" as you put it if someone said that to me, although I guess that means its not really overreacting if any other self respecting author would feel the same way. And then you have the nerve to keep complaining and not even bother reviewing this wonderful peice of fiction that is continuing. Have you completly managed to overlook the well written complex plotlines and the well developed characters or are you naturally that stupid?

Once again sorry Schwarz, feel free to delete this if you want but I got pretty pissed off at them and just had to say something because its not fair on you!

Velvetina xx
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From ANON - Anon on December 20, 2005
Bleh, I'm not trying to prove anything and I don't recall telling you anything about yourself. I just had a complaint which you hugely overreacted to.
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From ANON - hikari light on December 20, 2005
This story is good but it takes a lot of left turns and gets kinda confusing. Like, why did Yami suddenly abandon Yugi and leave him to live alone just when he'd found out that Yugi is permanently stuck as a kitten? After how protective he'd been for so long it seem strange. Bakura and Seto are fun, though I'm a little confused about Dartz too. What made him suddenly turn into a cat? I don't get it... though I did like him and Ryou playing around. Haha. Also your A/n's are kinda long... I thought it was a long chapter only to find I had to scroll through a whole bunch of notes. Just something you might wanna think about. Anyway keep writing and i hope you can answer my questions.
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From ANON - KittuPaladin on December 20, 2005
I adore this story and I hope those few negative comments out there down get you down.

:)
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From ANON - Aino Hikaru on December 20, 2005
W00t! Statutory rape scene with Yugi and Marik!!! More smut with charas from a kid show!!!!
lol, Sorry that just cracked me up! Good Shit, good Shit!

A lovely set of new chapters for my fav fic (besides the Ryou/Jou oneshot, of course)! It's makes me all swqueally inside. I'm sorry that you won't be continuing "like Crushed Velvet" though! I really liked that one, and it was just starting to get really good! Ah, cute little Ryou with the kitty plusie and playing hard to get!!! So 'dorable!

Speaking of 'dorable Ryou, he's extra cuddly in these last few chapter too! I loved when he was playing chase with Dartz. Oh, and I completely lost it laughing when Seto was hitting on Bakura. It seems EVERYONE is in heat, ne? I could totally see the Dartz-neko thing coming though. I' curious as to how he's been hiding it to the point where he even smells like a human. Ryou "warp reality" power could change Dartz into a 'real' human, like how he changed Kisara, couldn't he? God, Dartz is filled with a Hitler-esque hate for himself!!! Beware Ryou, nothing but pain awaits you this guy!!! Wow, I'm babbling! I was wondering what was going on with Jou and the rest of the characters too, I'm glad we got to do a quick peek!

Beautiful stuff, as usual! Love the writing and the complex plots, I hope you do some more Kimi ga Iru soon too. Ugh... I really wish you'd do more "Velvet" too, but I know how set backs can ruin it for you. I quit a fic that was popular (for me....) because of writers block. 2 yrs later, I started posting a comic version on my site 'cause I felt so bad. And I can't write... heh. Yeah, at least you let people know... I just went lurker instead.

Anyway! Love the fics!
-Hikaru

ps If you ever want fanart, just request!!! I'll be happy to oblige!

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From sirithiliel on December 20, 2005
:blink: hope i haven't been rude in any way...hmm....:shrug: i have a question...it might be a stupid question that you explained already and i haven't caught it...but...what's Bakura's power?
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From ANON - Velvetina on December 20, 2005
Oh dear, is the Anon reviewer still on your case? I feel kinda bad that something I asked for is now causing you so much hassle, however how pathetic are they? Geez. Not that I'm not saying it isn't a pity that you don't have the inspiration for the fic any more because you know I think it is and obviously it was a tad shocking. However I don't need to go on about it when its really not your fault about what happens and if I can accept this with good grace why can't they. Honestly some people! And to even think of stopping properly reviewing this just because of that is absolutally ridiclous. Argh, sorry got a little steamed on your behalf there.

This chapter was short but sweet....well techinically not very sweet but I loved it all the same. But I so cannot believe that Marik did that to Yugi! Bad Golden kitty. And poor Yugi doesn't really understand whats going on does he? I know last chapter Yugi said the he understood what rutting was but I don't think he really gets that you can get so much more from the whole thing. And darn Marik for not explaining better and taking his time with the little kitten. After all Yugi was a virgin. And then after all that Marik went and did it again, even if he did help Yugi afterwards this time he was a very bad cat. *glares* and just as I was starting to like you Marik. Lol joke. Still my fave moment was when Yugi went for his bath and we read the little bit where he was all upset and the he started to cry. I know I normally latch onto the humerous side of things but I guess we all need a little angst now and then.

I did have to laugh at the Bakura and Ryou scene though. Just the whole "Did you steal anything?" "Was I mean to?" Just cracked me up. I could almost see Ryous eyes wide with confusing and Bakura slapping his forehed thinking 'why me?!' LOL. Ah those two are just so sweet.

*blinks* Oh a one shot, pour moi? Sorry if you've said that somewhere before. I'm kind of bedridden at the minute and you spend long enough laying here bored out of your mind your mind tends to glaze over and you forget things. Urm...well I have to admit I have a sudden longing to read a Dartz/Yugi fic, I was gunning for them. But in the Kimi ga Iru universe I'd be happy with a Marik/Yugu after the angst we had here. Lol so I give you two options. Whichever you get inspiration for is fine by me cos I know that is often the hardest part. I love the sounds of the fic that you mentioned. It sounds very very interesting and I am gonna keep my eyes open for that one!!!

Just to let ya know...LOVE IT!!!!

Velvetina
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