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Reviews for A Home of Our Own

By : Kugatsu

From Wicabeth on December 20, 2005
*cuddles little Yugi* That's pretty kinky though that Marik cleans him up now. Rarr.

But, oh ho ho.. Yami is going to drop a litter when he finds out what happened =O
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From ANON - DemonicMistreessKree-KUn on December 19, 2005
Ooo i have a name for ryou's power Dynamus[Die-Nam-us].

oh and i'm really glad you updated when you did my internet will be cut off tomorrow because i'm switching servers. Yay coinkidinks! and yay you for another riveting chapter!

until next time
~Kree
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From ANON - Velvetina on December 19, 2005
wow that was a very fast update.

My fave bit was the whole "Your gun is poking me" "I don't carry a gun" bit, far too funny to be true *dies laughing* I loved the tension between Bakura and Seto. I think that there can't be anything better than comin on here and reading about those two sexy bishies at each others throats, their relationship is pretty much on my top list of faves. At leat the way you write it, others make a complete mess of that pairing.

Woot Yugi craved cheesecake. I love cheese cake. I love to make it almost as much as I love to eat it. So go Yugi when it comes to his taste in food. Hell when it comes to his taste in men too. Seriously I don't think I could have resisted Marik for as long as he did, but maybe thats Yugi's prolonged childlike nature coming into play. Such a little innocent. Totally my second fave pair.

Aww poor Dartz. He's all confused and forgot even to ge Ryou's name. However we know they are gonna meet agains, after all what universe is this in...lol! Bless him though that little game of tag was so adorable not to mention I cracked up when he thought about having to learn to control the tail. Hehe there could be all sorts of tail related accidents.

Yay one shots heading our way. I love your one shots!

Velvetina
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From sirithiliel on December 19, 2005
:claps: very nice. updated too fast for me to notice, way to go! i don't mind. go bakura!
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From Wicabeth on December 19, 2005
*pants* Jeez, I came back a little later and see that there was another chapter! Well, forgive me for reviewing twice in a row *^-^*

But, you are an EVIL, EVIL tease for stopping there! I must know what happens! *squirms anxiously*
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From Wicabeth on December 19, 2005
*blushes* Aw, shucks! Glad you liked my story so much XD

But, eeeeee, I'm dying to see what's up with Dartz. Since he's got such a problem with the EFCs, could it be because he's ashamed of himself? Obviously something has to do with him!

And eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, the hentai in me is cheering for a lemon, but I have to worry if poor little Yugi is going to be up to it. Marik is doing what he originally did to Malik all over again, but we've seen that wasn't exactly for the better. And with Yugi being so young and naive as he is, what will something like that do to him?

*waits on pins and needles*
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From ANON - Gantaeno on December 18, 2005
Ooh! Nice twist with Dartz there ;) I think I have a pretty good idea what's happened... but I guess I could easily be wrong :P

I personally LOVE the Velvet story, and i don't think you're writing badly at all... I get anonymous reviews like that all the time (on artwork, but nonetheless...) The best you can do is continue, and show them that they've had no influence on your writings whatsoever. :)

Good luck!
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From ANON - Velvetina on December 18, 2005
Hi, you've managed to update this very very fast for you so that is pretty awsome. Sorry I didn't get to review on the last chapter but life has been...well lets just say life hasn't been good enough recently to allow me time to come on here as frequently as I'd like and enjoy things such as this fic.

I like the plot advancements on all of the Bakura/Seto Ryou/Dartz situations. The whole scene with Dartz was truely amazing, totally threw me. Poor Ryou he was just trying to help Dartz but for obvious reasons (now) Dartz is very very wary of neko's and their powers. There was so serious wheeling and dealing going on between Bakura and Seto which intrigues me as I honestly cannot figure out what Bakura will ultimatly do.

Will there be a lemon next chapter...personally that isn't my main thought I would really kind of like to see a little more of the development between Marik and Yugi and their feelings before things become more serious. Oh well either way it is your story and plot advancements etc are at your whim.

My fave moment was when Noa was trying to get into Ryou's mind and coudn't manage it. I felt so sorry for the poor kid and I just wanted to hug him to make all of his pain go away, everyone needs a hug at some point.

To a certain extent just ignore the Anon reviewer, even though it is nice to know someone is appreciating your work, it is you work and therefore subject to what you think is best.

I would appreciate being added to you emailing list thingy, firstly so that I know when you update and secondly I really would love to know what would have happened in 'Velvet' a very very brief outline is fine as I know you are busy. My email is Kittenbelle@hotmail.com

Velvetina
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From Wicabeth on December 18, 2005
Ryou's powers are getting more and more interesting. And it sounds like Bakura is starting to go into heat soon.

I'd like to be on your mailing list if I may (wicabeth@hotmail.com)

Sorry if this is disjointed, been up for 22 hours and on planes all day.
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From ANON - BlacKat on December 17, 2005
Keep up the good work T_T but i'd like to see more ACTION if yea' get what I'm sayin' lol but yea' I like the fact that Noa is being a bit more social and stuff and I can't wait to see Ryou and Bakura's next attempt ^^
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From sirithiliel on December 12, 2005
:jumps up and down: i'm excited about this story. bakura and ryou (and thier older brother ^_^) are my favorite characters, and i like how you portray them! can't wait to read more, and looking anxiously for some bakura and ryou!
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From ANON - hato chiisai on November 28, 2005
eep! Can't wait for the next chapter. Whatever's goin on with Ryou and Bakura and Seto and Dartz.... what EVER it is... is the most fascinating part of this fic. Can't wait to find out more! Glad you updated again. PLEASE don't take so long next time? Though I know it's the busy part of the year with the holidays and finals in school an' all... whatever... Update when you can! I'll be waiting!!!
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From ANON - Velvetina on November 27, 2005
Yay you are actually alive *dances* I have missed you so much. I loved the chapter, I thought the development of Yugi's powers was cool not to mention the growing affection an Mariks part to the chibi. I just cannot wait to see where you go with that. I know this is shorter than my old reviews but I am just a bit busy at this second but when
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From ANON - Wicabeth on November 27, 2005
Yay! I was happy to see an update *^-^* I'm still itching to see what Marik is plotting with Yugi and how things are going to work out with.. well, everyone.

I may just have to do some fanart *^-^* .. Gives me an excuse to fill up my school sketchbook c.c;;
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From ANON - Black Ice on November 27, 2005
OO I am reviewing you...I don't believe it...I would have done this ages ago but I remembered something about you not wanting annonymous reviews. I have so much to tell you on your work so I'll sum it up...YOU ARE THE GREATEST AUTHORESS EVER!!!!!! I've read nearly all of your fics and I've never had a 'bored' session in them (a time where I'm not so interesed in reading more of the fic after some big event happens that's really exciting.) You always keep me interested in the fic, always something happening, but you don't overdose on the bad events like some people do (it's one bad thing after another for one couple.) You are like Ra of all my favorite writers, even if you just do fan fic. My little brother also likes you're writing. He read 'Summer Time Magic' (with me trying to keep him off the adult parts [he read some though, he's reading FAKE and will be starting Gravitation so, well, I only had to explain a few things -.-;]) and really liked it (my little sister [baby of the family] has no idea what we could possibly find funny about an alarm clock. ^.^) Anyway, I know you're busy and all so it's hard to update (I can relate), but do you think you could update 'Like Crushed Velvet' and the 'Kimi ga Iru' world? I'm particularly dying to see what happens with Seto, Ryou, Bakura, and Dartz. That's all for now. ^.^
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