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Reviews for A Home of Our Own

By : Kugatsu
  • From ANON - Kitten on January 22, 2006
    Hmm... Bakura, Seto and Ryou are my favorites. By... a lot. Yugi - he's cute and all, but he's incredibly frustrating because he's immature and wilfully dense. I know he's stuck as a kitten forever but there are a lot of ways that he could improve himself but just doesn't; such as how rude he is to everyone who tries to take care of him, especially Yami, and his unending determination to believe (or at least pretend like he believes) that his Grandpa is at "camp." His character is something I'm hoping you address in the second part of this saga; I think Marik could be a good influence on him, as far as that's concerned. I mean, Marik's not going to teach him to be *polite*, lol, but he can help Yugi grow up and use that big brain of his since he's obviously not dumb if he can do calculus. ^^

    Ryou is adorable. I loved the scene when he was playing around in his new rooms. I hope to see more of him and Dartz later, and I'm dying for Seto and Bakura to finally hook up.
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  • From Wicabeth on January 22, 2006
    I know I've said it before, but Ryou is STILL too damn cute for his own good.

    *cuddles Yugi* I just hope things go well for him.
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  • From ANON - sirithiliel on January 22, 2006
    oh i loved the ryou cooking section! bloody brilliant! amusing, and seto's going to start questioning his sanity later on! can't wait for the part two!
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  • From ANON - Black Ice on January 21, 2006
    'Hormonal Reaction to Proximity' and 'becming more like Seto' *dies laughing* Soooooooo funnnyyyyyyy! Poor Mokuba, turning into a man so fast. And that whole thing with Yugi and the TV? Pure genius! I couldn't stop laughing...gotta show that to Nat (my little brother also likes your stories, believe it or not!)

    You do have a point with the chapter thing, but I don't think you have to worry too much, you have a lot of fans and I see reviews from new people every day. Even if people aren't instantly hooked on it, if they see a lot of people like it or read something else of yours, they will probably end up reading it (and liking it since your a great writer.) I myself wasn't so sure about the Neko fic at the beggining (mostly because I was like 'huh?'), but I was already hooked on the Kimi series, so I read past the first chapter and was hooked. So I don't think you need to start a part 2, but it's up to you.
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  • From ANON - aino Hikaru on January 21, 2006
    Fabulous as always! though I'm still dying to see what you're gonna do to the regular kimi Ga Iru universe.... *big watery eyes*

    I don't think you should really worry about the chapter length, I didn't start reading until it was nearing twenty and I'm totally hooked! The first chapter was so good! You hooked me and my best friend with it instantly! We were both devestated after the death of Akefia, and so totally in love with your adorable little Ryou neko, that not reading it because of chapter length seemed to be sheer folly!

    And yeah, I SO caught the Sailor Moon references! I just haven't been online in so long... Like a week or so. Work's knocked me for a loop, and I got a new Mercedes Lackey book... so yeah, real life has been calling me! lol

    Oh yeah, I especially liked the little scene with Noa and Mokuba. Poor Mokie, I bet he was tempted to ravish the little neko then and there! But how did He kow that Kaiba had a thing for nekos? I don't remember any mentions of him knowing before... There's very little interaction between the 2 brothers in this fic as well.

    Ne, I just had another thought! If you want to start up a new story/sequal like you did for the original Kimi ga Iru, I would give this one a definate ending first, because so far you have alot of lose ends running around and an impossibly huge cast to divide your time between. It seems that any semblance of plot that you had, has been inadvertantly pushed to the wayside by necessary 'filler'. there's so much character developement, that it pushes back the normally schedualed plot, thus expanding chapter length. That noted, I have to ask for more intrigue and mystery... or more Kimi ga Iru... whichever... *grin*

    -Hikaru!
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  • From ANON - sirithiliel on January 19, 2006
    i like the yugi/marik scenes you set up. they're well done! yay for bakura's brotherly streak! hope it works out!

    as for the chapter thing, i understand where you're coming from as i'm a bit iffy on reading big long stories as well...i think the split story sequel thing is a good idea!
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  • From Wicabeth on January 19, 2006
    Well, I'm happy that Yugi is happy again! But I still feel bad for Honda and Otogi. Noa/Mokuba made me giggle. And Ryou is still a damn little cutie.
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  • From ANON - Kitten on January 18, 2006
    That was really cute! I loved the Marik/Yugi scene where Marik took Yugi off on the motorcycle. Hah, bet that'll make Yugi more popular, lol. So Otogi's in show business, eh? Can't wait to see what he does, too bad he and Malik are growing apart though. I also loved Seto's dirty thoughts, hahaha. I hope there's some Seto/Kura action soon, and Noa/Mokie.

    And YES I would still love to see a sequel to "We Gonna Do This!" Yami/Ryou PLEEZE! Pretty, pretty please?
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  • From ANON - Black Ice on January 18, 2006
    BI: Bwahaha! Give in to the dirty thoughts! But really Seto, it's just hormones...sort of. Poor Noa, I don't think he'll be able to accept the Alabaster brothers at first, especially Bakura. And it looks like Yugi and Marik have a home, or, will have a home after some major remodling (bow down to Yugi, mailbox.) Otogi has it the worst off, in my opinion. He's been, unwillingly, thrown amongst the chaos that is show business and his boyfriend has been wandering lately. Things can only get worse for him before they get better.
    Muse: Ok, time's up. You gave up on the report but you have to get to bed. *grabs BI*
    BI: Wait! Thank you again for the two one-shots! You definately don't owe me one-ack!
    Muse: *yanks* Bed!
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  • From ANON - sirithiliel on January 18, 2006
    :snicker: can't wait to read when bakura is finally moved in...that will be very fun. great chapter, lots of humorish stuff! i like it!
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  • From Wicabeth on January 18, 2006
    *giggles madly* Poor Seto is going to have some nosebleeds if he doesn't watch himself XD
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  • From ANON - Luna on January 15, 2006
    somebodys been watching fushigi yuugi ne? XDDD
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  • From ANON - Black Ice on January 15, 2006
    BI: The magical liquor store!!! >< Too funny, makes up for all the problems Yugi's been having as of late. Poor baby, forget the brat thing. *huggles* And poor Honda, Peg-chan's being such an ass! Oh, yeah, about Tatsuki and Hotohori, wouldn't they be Marik's age or older? I mean, Hotohori's definately older than Yugi and I think Tatsuki would at least be in a higher grade. ...But I love the chow mix thing! >< So cute!!!! And Jin!! OO It took be awile to figure out who it was 'cause I was still thinking Fushigi Yugi, but then I thought: 'Jin...samurai...Samurai Champloo...as a Neko...' The laughter that endured... He's the last person I would have imagined as a Neko...cuuuute!
    Muse: *whispers* The pairing!
    BI: OO That's right! *lots of sparkly stuff pops out of nowhere* ^^ I'd love a Seto and Marik coupling, they've been on my mind since "Like Crushed Velvet." By the way, what happened to Noa and Mokuba? They went poof on us. Shizuka too...and Otogi... *drifts off with Seto and Marik thoughts*
    Muse: -_- ...Now I've got to bring her back to Earth...
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  • From ANON - sirithiliel on January 15, 2006
    yay! bakura and ryou go to kaiba's! can't wait for more, love the way you write!
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on January 15, 2006
    Awww poor Yugi *glomps kitten* I'll have him and look after him and cuddle him and make sure he's happy...*looks at Marik and slowly backs away from Yugi* then again maybe I'll just leave it to Marik lol. Seriously Yugi so reminds me of a friend I used to have who had a mental disorder which left her mental age far younger than ours and evryone used to be mean for her and I used to feel so sorry for her.

    Argh not much time to write I am meant to be revising, agh stupid exams. Untill next time xx
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