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Reviews for Why you shouldn't kill bees

By : nickylein
  • From Earendel on November 11, 2010
    The bee story is familiar, but the ending went something like there being no more honey.
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  • From ANON - lo on November 25, 2006
    THat was great! beautifully done.
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  • From ANON - moonflower on July 13, 2006
    i liked it alot it was cool the teacher waqs really stupid and thending was cute i hope u don't make this justa one-shot but i hope u write more stories
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  • From ANON - Jessica on July 25, 2005
    Well done! At first, I was like, "WHAT A FUCKING PRICK (Seto..not you)!", but then, I knew you wouldn't be that cruel to Jou! I love the symmetry; did you make up the metaphor yourself? It was really clever! And I love how Seto realized his true feelings after their confrentation (or lack thereof) and admitted his 'loss' in the game; serves him right! Very good story! I'm glad it all worked out! ^_^
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  • From ANON - shippo-chan on July 21, 2005
    *wibbles* this was sad, and happy, and sad again, then happy...:D I liked it!

    Shippo-chan
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  • From on July 21, 2005
    Oh man, This is extremely adorable. Ha, that stupid teacher WAS a moron. I knew it was a sort of substitute, symbol as you call it, from the beginning. I've had teachers like that too... Meh...Evil... Er, HI! Sorry. Anyway, I'm gonna see if I can look into your other work although it's 5 am. ^^; Doncha love summer? Well, cute cute cute story. See ya!

    Toralyn
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  • From ANON - Tombelina on July 21, 2005
    ....BEES!
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  • From ANON - Sammei on July 21, 2005
    Too lazy to log in..

    Anyhow, I'm not quite sure if I like this or not. It was written very well, don't get me wrong! It's just... I dunno. Seto was so heartless! I guess he thought he had a good reason, but still... Ahh! Makes me want to punch him in the face. And poor, poor Jou... I guess the biggest problem I had with this was that Jou forgave him so easily, and quickly. He could have at least finished his apology. ;_; It's probably because Jou loves him so much or what not, but still! I guess I don't think Seto suffered enough for being such a meanie.
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  • From ANON - tash922 on July 21, 2005
    kiaba can be such an ass but am glad he made up for it
    this story was very sweet i hope u make more
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  • From ANON - IP on July 21, 2005
    That has to be one of the sweetest lil ficlet I have ever read. Befuddled Seto and passive Jou. Gotta love that mix!
    Bees I like
    Wasps I hate... one crawled down my shirt and wouldn't move from its position between my breast..... -_-;;;
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  • From ANON - Ykarzel on July 20, 2005
    *glomps it*
    Still my favorite, no matter how many times I read.
    Still, love, you're in the wrong section... this should be under m/m. I only saw it by chance.
    ^_^ love u kitten
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  • From ANON - maggiemay on July 20, 2005
    omg that was so good it made me cry

    maggiemay
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  • From ANON - Terry on July 20, 2005
    I really liked this fic. It was very sweet. The essay Seto wrote was obviously symbolic and I'm glad Seto and Jou dissed the teacher. I don't really know what to say to improve, your fic didn't use any cliche and was very original. The ending was quick but it kept with the pace of the story, so I personally really liked this story, please keep writing, I'll be looking for your work.
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  • From ANON - koalared on July 20, 2005
    Oh yes, I liked this. It gave me a very satisfied feeling after reading it. joy, angst and then joy again.
    Well done. Look forward to more from you.
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  • From ANON - Kaan Formidilosus-Volaticus Mega Chiroptera on July 20, 2005
    My friends keep on telling me to review fics I really like so here goes, your fic is good, no. Amazing. I'll be looking out for more of yours so keep it up! ^_~
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