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Reviews for The XX Factor: x II *completed*

By : Wicabeth
  • From ANON - SakuraNeko on September 22, 2005
    I love you, you marvelous person. Great chapter, and a very nice lemon too. ::winks::
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  • From ANON - Sarah Costa on September 22, 2005
    Wow. That was a great lemon. So what happen next? Will Yugi be pregnant in the next chapter? Please update soon. Ja ne
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  • From ANON - catti-dono on August 30, 2005
    KAMI...you better not wait a whole month before updating...laughs...I was weary at first about reading this....but man its great....just like your other stories...kitty boys are my favorite....probably because Im a pervert...laughs....catti
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  • From ANON - Arainaina on August 29, 2005
    very good please update soon
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  • From ANON - maggiemay on August 29, 2005
    Squeeeee Wonderful...love it...nice and long. Now get back to work. WHimpers..
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  • From ANON - SakuraNeko on August 29, 2005
    ::hugs:: I love you! Apology accepted, just keep up the good work!
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  • From bluesun on August 29, 2005
    sweet that was awsome hope you continue soon
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on August 29, 2005
    OH MY GOD!!! That was beautiful!!!! I need more tissues! I have all kinds of happy tears going on now! First I had tears of laughter at Yugi trying to get dressed and having to wear 'that' shirt. "Spooning leads to forking" made me laugh so hard I nearly peed my pants!! :D Then, the proposal! Good God Almighty, that was the best one I have ever heard! The scene was so realistic and heartfelt that I burst into tears as if it were really happening! I can't wait to see what the rings end up looking like! The ones that Joey and Seto have fit them perfectly and I imagine that Seto will have rings crafted for Yami and Yugi that will match them perfectly too. I love that the colored stones match their eyes! I'm such a sucker for this kind of stuff! :D Update soon!!
    Koneko
    P.S. I can't believe you left out the engagement sex!! Everybody has engagement sex!! Ugh! :D I just knew that that was where the whole romantic dinner was leading, but no! Bad author, teasing me like that!! :D
    P.P.S. Thanks for the info about the pics! I'm gonna check 'em out ASAP!!

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  • From ANON - MinuetLove on August 29, 2005
    Ahh, so sweet! The shopping trip was cute, but it should be even more funny to watch Yugi dress himself! Write more soon please!
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  • From ANON - meme on August 29, 2005
    let him have his period u'r not a woman until u have ur period
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  • From ANON - bluedawn on August 22, 2005
    this is cool keep on writing
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  • From ANON - Arainaina on August 20, 2005
    very good please update soon
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  • From ANON - Owaranaimono Aite on August 19, 2005
    That's alright! It's good to know what's going on. I hope your evil computer comes back soon... I sense evil magic. XD Well I'll be waiting for the update. ^-^
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on August 15, 2005
    Hi! I love this! I started reading it a few days ago and then I realized that this was a sequel so I had to go back and read part 1 - which was absolutely fabulous!! :D Joey's unusual journey thru womanhood was a fantastic way to get around that old mpreg problem that some people have. (I never understood people who freak out over mpreg stories. Don't these people have an imagination?) Your idea of the Bakura/Marik chemical was quite clever! Oh! Before I forget - and yes I should have said all this in a review of part one instead of throwing it in here (gomen!) - I ADORED the wedding ring that Kaiba gave Joey! *Sqweee!* I just melted at how totally perfect it was to have a ring with both a blue eye and a red eyes on it! *sigh!* Who knew Kaiba could be so romantic? KAWAII!! And the honeymoon - gotta love that lemony goodness!! :D

    ANYWAY, all that aside, I do have some questions about Yugi's upcoming pregnancy. In several places, Yugi says "children" and "grandchildren" implying more that one kid. Are Yami and Yugi going to have more than one child together? O_O Is Yugi going to have twins maybe? *giggle* Can you imagine little Yugi all bloated up with twins?! :D poor guy! Yugi is going to make the cutest bride!! By the way, do you draw? I would love to see how you imagine Joey and Yugi as women! :D

    Update soon - like now if not sooner!! :D
    Koneko

    P.S. Oh! I bet that Watari from Yami no Matsuei (aka Descendants of Darkness) would love to talk to Marik and Bakura about their little potion! Enma knows that Watari's been trying to perfect that concoction for ages! :D Watari's been outdone by a pair of juvenile delinquents! too funny! :D This was the first thing I thought of when I started reading part 1. :D

    P.P.S. OK. Sorry this review is so disjointed but that is just how my brain works sometimes. Random thoughts bounce in my head and come out just however they come out. Sorry again I didn't leave that review for part 1 like I should have. bad me.
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  • From ANON - Owaranaimono Aite on August 06, 2005
    Excellent! *falls over laughing* I read the first story and this one all in one day! I'm bad. I should be doing other things... Excellentness! There's just a little thing twitching in the back of my mind that something horrible's gonna happen to someone in the course of this story.. *shoves it away* I can't wait to see what happens next!!
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