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Reviews for Happy Ending

By : CherryFlavoredDuo
  • From ANON - Anon on November 26, 2009
    This story is so beautiful and emotional. Its nice to read a story where Bakura is treated the same way he treated Ryou. I still can't help but feel sorry for their realtionship. Please write more soon.
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  • From YamiKuro on June 20, 2008
    but i haffs no children for you to eat |o| ...sorry! But i'll review, so the point is moot :}

    I liked it, and am glad Ryou got his revenge. MORE! (poor asagi, being used liked that XD)

    Kuro
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  • From LittleBlackBox on June 05, 2008
    I really love Ryou's character development in the second chapter. I tend to get a little tired of the stereotypical victim!Ryou that seems to be 90% of all tendershipping. You really give both characters very human qualities and I can say the story has that much more depth because of it.

    Unfortunately it would appear that you haven't updated this story in three years so I'll never get to see how it all pans out, but from the terms of a one-shot with a sequel it holds up quite well.
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  • From ANON - Celestial Angel on October 16, 2005
    Please update..... Its been like forever since I've read a fic that has Ryou as an evil little 'super goddess'! Please.... I love how Bakura reacted!!
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  • From Saka on August 18, 2005
    Your gonna eat my children...*looks around* I have children?! Why didn't anyone ever tell me?! Damn why do people complain about labor? I swear I never felt a thing...

    Ok your probably wonderin where's your review...well here it is- this fic is just amazing. I love it. 'N hope ya do write more. The way you've written this is just beautiful. Amazing work. I absolutely love it, 'n wanna read more soon! ^_~

    ~IceAngel~
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on August 08, 2005
    *jumps up and down* Don't leave it there, almost killing me to find out what Bakuras gonna do!!! Truely awsome story though loved your take on this idea.
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  • From ANON - Celestial Angel on August 07, 2005
    o... so evil... the lemons are so lemony sweet! Ryou is so revengyful... its not even a word. oh well. update! and you can't eat my childern cause I dont have any! HA! ^_^ (i'm fourteen)
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  • From ANON - tash922 on August 02, 2005
    lol ain't pay back a bitch lol ih god i love this story please update soon
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  • From ANON - Akitso on August 01, 2005
    Omg!
    ok, so what goes around comes around but still
    omg, I'm speechless, and that was....SO GOOD!
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  • From ANON - sglily on August 01, 2005
    Very nicely done. The first chapter, I couldn't review afterward reading it because my heart broke for poor Ryou and I was in a mood... The second chapter was incredible. I was very happy to see that Ryou didn't fall in on himself in despair. That he slipped a bit by giving in to temptation, allowing Bakura to take him again was so natural. That he also found hearing that Bakura loved him after what he had been left to deal with alone, classic. Loved the fact that Ryou used Bakura's parting line on him. I am very interested to see how Bakura AND Ryou handle their relationship now. Love it!
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  • From ANON - Kat1132 on August 01, 2005
    I liked the revenge of that. It fit perfectly as payback. I do want a happy ending though between Bakura and Ryou... But I definately understand how one wouldn't fit and such. I can't wait for your update. This is awesome!
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  • From ANON - ladywolfTerri on August 01, 2005
    Great so far!! I can't wait to see what happens next! I loved it as Ryou threw that line back at him!!!! Please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Ieatyou on August 01, 2005
    I-a eat Bakura. Nicely written with Ryou's emotions. Then afterwards....is there going to be another chapter? Cause you should continue, it's nicely written.
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  • From ANON - ladywolfTerri on July 31, 2005
    very well written but so sad!!!! will there be more to this?

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  • From ANON - Kat1132 on July 31, 2005
    I really like this. It was somewhat depressing though. Could you make another chapter? Or a sequle? I don't know if this is a one shot or not. But it really is good and desearves more. Excetera. I can't wait to see what you plan to do. Update soon!
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