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Reviews for The Key of Ra

By : Lechan
  • From ANON - Sanni York on June 01, 2007
    Waaah! This is so good! I love this story, really!
    Only two chapters, but they are long. You know what I thought about last night when I read the second? That you don't rush into action in your fics. You let the story take its time in a delicate way and also realistic. For instance when they ate, many authors would just skip dinner really and go right on to the main point. You take your time. ^^ I love it and I hate it, cuz you see, I want it to happen fast.^^ But really, I love your writing.
    I hope you post next chapter soon, though I do wonder how long it takes to write them. I have trouble with every little detail sometimes and I am jealous of the smooth running in yours.
    And by the way, the hieratic you use, is it ok to use some of the words in future fics? ^^ I know they're not really yours, but I just ask in case you might be offended or something.
    Please update soon.^^
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  • From DestinyDragon on May 30, 2007
    I Love this story!!! Please update.
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  • From LadyLaran on May 28, 2007
    I know how life and muses go, but I do hope you plan on finishing this tale someday soon. I'm entranced by it and hope to see this story resolved. I want to know about Yugi's past and how Yami will heal him.
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  • From LithiumLi3 on February 15, 2007
    Where is the rest?
    *looks under her computer chair blanket*
    Nope, not there...
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  • From Beldara on January 20, 2007
    Please Lechan I want more from "Key of Ra".
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  • From ANON - ReaperRain on January 01, 2007
    Ah...story...so...good! Man, who needs drugs when you have writing this good? I probably sound like I'm sucking up a little, but I really can't compliment this story enough. Gripping, evocative and in some parts terrifying - I have a good idea of what Yugi's father did to him, but I won't say...ohhh, please write more! This is the writing equivalent to an orgasm (sorry if that's a bit crude, but it's true!) as are most of your other stories. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Yuugi25 on December 29, 2006
    I have to agree with everything tavi said, in the review above.
    This is by far one of my absolute favourite fanfictions, and it's also a really unique idea that i haven't seen done by anyone else. Please continue with this. I promise i'll leave a review for every chapter you write. =D

    I also agree about the writing novels idea. You have seriously got some writing talent, and would do great with writing your own novels. Trust me, i've read some books by famous authors/authoresses, that aren't as well written as your fics. Rest assured that if you ever did write something and get it published, i would be the first in line to buy it. ^_~

    Oh, and i apologise for yelling at that other reviewer before. I mean't only to reassure you that not all of us feel the same way as he/she did, and the harshness of the review ticked me off a bit.
    But in response, my 'defensive' reviews came off just as badly, and i should probably have done more research, seeing as Wikipedia really isn't all that reliable. Apologies for any trouble i caused, or any toes i may have stepped on. No hard feelings! =)

    Anyways, loving this ficcie so far, and i really hope you'll continue it. I don't mind a wait between updates, after all we all have lives to live. ^^ I just really need the reassurance that you're not giving up on this one. It has the potential to be an awesome story, and as a rabidly obsessive Puzzleshipper, i'd hate to see it go to waste. ^_^;;

    Rest assured though, that if you don't decide to continue, i'll still read any stories you do write (Including Memories of Shadow and Light) and there will be no hard feelings at all. ^_^
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  • From ANON - tavi on December 25, 2006
    Oh please don't forget this one. I love your stories. By the way, why aren't you writing novels for profit? You have awesome style. Hell, I'll give you all of my Shonen Jump magazines if you update. It's not much, but it's still a bribe. If that don't work, I can give you my angel/demon boy-child for a couple of days(with complete instructions to bug you for updates - he's very convincing). Yea, that'll work. Anyways keep up the good work. Later
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  • From ANON - KC on December 15, 2006
    Very cool! Nice job
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  • From ANON - Yume no Kareta on October 16, 2006
    I love this fic, its one of my favorites...But you haven't updated in such a long time....T-T

    I wanna know what happens next...please update? ;_;

    Onegai shimasu...?
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  • From ANON - mps shadowmaster on August 15, 2006
    jus a note to your jappenese, nothing bad, but dieuski(sp?) means (at least in the way they use it in DNANGEL) liking just short of love DNANGEL is great, you should check it out, if you havn't already......
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  • From ANON - anonymous on July 28, 2006
    D: poor Yami! Yugi's forgotten how to trust him! ANd poor little Yugi ;_; please update this soon.
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  • From ANON - Corvin on July 16, 2006
    OMG!!! THIS IS SOOOO FERKIN INTERESTING! WOW! OH~ Please update again! This fic is probably one of the MOST interesting, spellbinding, awesome YamiYugis...EVER! (Or at least that I have read!) And my friend agrees!


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  • From ANON - SHADOW. on June 29, 2006
    Don't know 'bout y'all....But I for one totaly love this fic....
    Long chapters, which I love by the way...Honestly I think ya got
    your self a grate fic going here, and I so totaly HOPE THAT YA KEEP
    UP THE GRATE WORK...OHH!!! AND PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE ADD MORE
    CHAPTERS TO THIS FIC SOOOOOON!!!

    XOXOXO:D
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  • From ANON - tavi on June 03, 2006
    This and your other stories are great. If you ever write a book to be sold, I would definitly buy it. I love your writing style. Please continue. Oh, and ingore the idiots who seem to like making themselves look better by whining about how other people have screwed up. Their overinflated egos demand that they put others down to make themselves feel better. Please, please continue this and the Memories. I'm sure you have a lot of readers out there that love your stories.
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