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Reviews for The Key of Ra

By : Lechan
  • From ANON - Mazchan on May 01, 2006
    I really like the idea and thought in this one...very intriguing. I must say I really look forward to reading updates in this one. Great writing. ;)
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  • From ANON - LY37 on February 11, 2006
    Thank you, Lechan for your hieratic explanation. I agree with some of the other reviewers - jeez, it is a fanfiction story, and a very good one. Get a grip. LeChan, please press on with this story. It is wonderful. You give what I believe is most important - a very good story. Doesn't matter how long your chapters are, it all ends too soon. More, please.

    Seems whatever you write I will love. And whatever you will write I hope I'm there to read it.

    And thank you for taking the time to give us the translations - they are very much appreciated.

    I do hope you complete this story. And especially Memories of Light and Shadow - I am so looking forward to the completion of that story - Yugi dancing is oh so wonderful. Anyway, this is a Key of Ra review... Thank you so much for the update.

    I look forward to all your updates. Thanks for sharing your talent. Thank you for continuing the stories to completion (I hope). Hope all is well in your world.

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  • From ANON - December Jewel on February 07, 2006
    Oh, very interesting! Continue soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - inuyasha nut on February 06, 2006
    i love dis
    pls pls pls update!!!!!!!!!!!1
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  • From ANON - Din Kelion on February 03, 2006
    Wow, I really enjoyed reading your two chapters! Not only did it make a super-wonderful fan fiction to read, but it also preoccupided my entire sick day! With out it, I most likely would of been smacking my head against something particularly hard to numb the feeling of boredom. I liked everything about these two chapter! Well, okay, almost everything, I'm very horrible with Japanese and ur.. Egyptain, so I constantly end up scrolling back and forth to the glossary so I can understand some things. But this isn't at your fault- it's mine for not being able to understand different languages (If only I could!)
    Other than that, I had noticed a few typos (hard to catch- but utterly irrevelant because it never daunted my fascination to your story!) I loved your fan fiction, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Liliath on February 03, 2006
    lol, me again..your mail hates me..or better, my mail hates yours, it wont send the mail V_V whatever..anyways, yeah, its me, you got the right person and Im glad you reacted the way you did; no insults or swearing ^^ it was actually kinda obvious that you were taking jap classes ah, but whatever, some people dont take em and know the words so ..argh..forget it -__- >_> yeah, just wanted to say this and that I honestly appreciate your work and words. hope to see another chappie from you. Im an angst addict *hinthint*
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  • From bluesun on February 02, 2006
    ......... AWSOME!!! I LOVE ALL UR STORIES!! YOU ROCK!! PLEASE HURRY WITH IT!! could u email me at one of my adresses i'd love to talk with u
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  • From ANON - dip on February 01, 2006
    wowzers! This is so kewl!! Gawdammit how could you cliff us like that!?? Anywho, you shouldn't let a bad review bother you. lol! You should feel proud that people are fighting over your fic! Besides, for every bad review you've got about ten fan reviewers ready and willing to tear it apart. So, chin up =3 and leave the rest to lunesta -_o...

    btw i luv yugi's sarcasm. Funny mess ;3
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  • From ANON - Jaklyn on February 01, 2006
    OOOO!!! Jaklyn is addicted! You simply must update. I don't usually read Yami/Yugi, but you have sucked me in completely. The use of three, THREE, languages is neat. I can barely put up with the spanish i have to learn in school. I could never do that. There's something special about you and your Blood Moon friend. I thank you profusely, but my friends hate you. I've been trying to get them to read this. I guess I really AM annoying. I'm getting off topic. I love this fic, update, please and thank you!
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  • From ANON - Jaklyn on February 01, 2006
    OOOO!!! Jaklyn is addicted! You simply must update. I don't usually read Yami/Yugi, but you have sucked me in completely. The use of three, THREE, languages is neat. I can barely put up with the spanish i have to learn in school. I could never do that. There's something special about you and your Blood Moon friend. I thank you profusely, but my friends hate you. I've been trying to get them to read this. I guess I really AM annoying. I'm getting off topic. I love this fic, update, please and thank you!
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  • From ANON - Liliath on February 01, 2006
    hmmm...well, I dont know where you get those jap terms but you shouldnt use them when you dont know how. the verb always comes as last and seem to ignore the use of word "wo". and daisuki means to like a lot someone, though not love as there is a difference between love and love in jap XP find someone who could do better job than you in this. also, I dont really like one thing about this fic..so many foreign words, too much, your fic is just overflowing with them and it just so sucks to scroll all the way time like every few sentences to look for the meaning of words. to be honest, the one thing that actually brought me into reading this thing, which would be a use of other languages, is actually putting me off; its annoying. maybe you should put the translations on the top of the fic or directly write a translations next to the words..or better, not use any foreing words.

    otherwise I honestly like your fic and this is by no means a flame. I honestly like it and the whole plot is appealing to me and very interesting. you dont have to listen to me or what, I just dont want to do those "omfg, I love this, update" kind of reviews so sue me XP be sure as hell Id welcome to see another chapter of this fic so you can just ignore this review, fushuuuuuu~~ -_-
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  • From ANON - Yuugi25 on January 31, 2006
    OMG that was awesome. *bounces insanely* ^-^ I love the way you write Yuugi, and i love the flashbacks. Little Yuugi is so adorable. ^-^
    I really want to know what happened to Yuugi in those past years. I am sure Atemu wants to know too. And try to heal poor Yuugi.
    I like the addition of Bakura into this story. And the idea that Yuugi can only see Atemu clearly. I am assuming it would be the same for Ryou, except he'd be able to see Bakura instead of Atemu. I also love the idea of the mind link making them able to understand each other properly. Thats something i definitely haven't seen before, but it makes perfect sense.
    Also, I adore the way you show the symbolism of the things in Yuugi's soulroom. Awesome description.
    I can't wait until the next chapter, because i am dying to know what Atemu's reaction will be, to all of the things he's seen. What will he do to help Yuugi? And what does Yuugi make of all of this?
    I am glad you decided to keep using the egyptian words. They really add an awesome touch to this story. Please update soon, and i am looking forward to your updates on your other stories also. ^_~
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  • From ANON - AngeloflightPd on January 31, 2006
    I am glade up put in chapter 2; I just love this chapter. Its awesome: I hope to see a chapter3 and soon. I want to see what happens next to Yugi and Yami. I just hope when you up date that I see the next chapter. I want you to know that I like all of your stories
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  • From ANON - sutashii on January 30, 2006
    I can't believe you ended it there! oh man I am soooo loving this fic! I can't wait for more you are sooo amazing! great great job! I loved every second of this chapter just like the first! Man this is pure talent! great job keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - sutashii on January 30, 2006
    I am completely in love with this fic! you are such a wonderfull writer! I Squealed and jumped and just loved every second of this first chapter! I love the way you portray Yugi and I love your style and well I love every thing... only thing is im jumping back and forth from top back to where I was reading for the translations lol got a little lost at some points but I still love the dif languages! Any ways I really hope you completely finish this I really do enjoy reading all of your fics your soooo talented!! and Know Im off to chapter two! again great work!
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