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Reviews for A little fun

By : NeruKudasai
  • From ANON - angle of sex on November 27, 2005
    THE MONKEY DID A GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^-^
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  • From bluesun on September 02, 2005
    haha love you little additude at the end hey thanks for writing more that was good i'm still working on my poor robin fic im doing but your good
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  • From ANON - Sekhmet on September 01, 2005
    The writing needs work. It's more impressive when you're able to keep the characters inside their own element. Try writing them off with the appropriate personalities and it would be much better. Also try to ease up on the pace; it jumped out at my face and it made me blink in shock.

    Other than that, good job.
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  • From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on September 01, 2005
    AWESOME AND YOU KNOW IT!! erm...one question i am comnfused did Yami actually rape Yugi?
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  • From on September 01, 2005
    Midnight: yeah...sex in the mornng before school will proablay hurt.....if it was for Yugi and or Yami....but for me? hehehehehehehehe ^_^ luv the story
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  • From bluesun on August 20, 2005
    wow well what with yami will yugi acept it or will he banish him so many other questions i have you really need to keep going
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  • From bluesun on August 19, 2005
    hey i like i like that was cool but needed to be longer

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