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Reviews for My Forever

By : hatochiisai
  • From ANON - rg on December 18, 2005
    thats so sweet i hope ryou says yes. cant wait to find out the suspense is killing me.

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  • From ANON - Anon on December 17, 2005
    Oh my this story is great i can't stop reading o.o
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  • From ANON - BlackFlameEnvy on December 13, 2005
    Wow, this is such a great story! It pulls ya in one direction and then another. It is totally awsome. Though it took a few chapters to get done which was Hikari/Yami between Malik and Marik [the names are so close and confusing and people like to do it backwards.... ^^;] But I digress.
    One more thing, this fic had done something not many other fics have -- got me to the point of ALMOST crying. I haven't really cryed for quite a few years, so that was quite a feat. Congrats! ^-^
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  • From ANON - April on December 13, 2005
    I really like Seto and Ryou together and I wish that people would just let them be together without such hate and predudice(sp). I think your story is great.
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  • From ANON - Jessika on December 09, 2005
    Whoot! Ryou is acting like himself again :D Hooray no abuse to Ryou in the latest chapter (not that I'm complaining.. it makes a good fanfic it just makes me sad :( But I still like it.. I'm a bad person :( ). it took me a while to review though cuz I was playing out the scenes in my head while reading and okay I'm wierd. Go Malik, Marik, and Bakura! Haha! hooray for vandalism (I liked that part) But I'm still waiting for the two who raped Ryou to die a slow, painful death involving medieval weapons >D or waffles! or maybe that's just my fantasy. I dunno. PLEASE write more :) I love how Bakura for once isn't a bad guy x) He's sweet and caring now.. a bit protective but that's not a bad thing x) and Yami is an idiot! not that I blame him though.. I wanna copy of the tape too! once again PLEASE write more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 01, 2005
    I really hope you continue the story. I love it. The characters and story line are awesome! But the parts with poor Ryou made me so sad and angry with those people! Argh! Anyways, please post more soon!
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  • From ANON - Shadow Mistress or KuraMagicianGirl on mm.org on November 23, 2005
    Hehe, glad he's alright. *Hugs* I rather enjoyed the bits of humor here and there in this ch. ^^ I see that you guys tried to trick us readers a couple times, one with the looking at Yami, then with the razor, which was funny but not funny, lol. Nice minor-twists. Do write more soon, see ya. ^_~
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  • From ANON - O_O;; none on November 22, 2005
    I didn't honestly think the whole Ryou x Seto thing would work.. but it's turning out great! +is hooked+ I really hope you'll write more!!! I love how the characters seem to have more personality than in the tv show (or manga for that matter).. Seto seems actually human xD And even Ryou is cuter in this story.. I didn't think it was possible O_O;; Anyhow, It's a really good fic ^-^;
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  • From ANON - bjsu on November 21, 2005
    This one was pretty good also . but Its not what I expeced irealy don't no what i expecccted though. i still like it though. aand pleeeasse give poor yami a break ex pharohs only whant to have fun.
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  • From ANON - Shadow Mistress or KuraMagicianGirl on mm.org on November 17, 2005
    Oh my god, that was so brutal! Those damned fuckers, they need to be tortured endlessly!!! RARR!!! *hangs them on a dart board upside down, slices their skin off, pours salt all over the place, place them under a strongly concentrated HCl acid, getting an unlimited supply of deadly accurate and sharp daggers coated in deadly poison to be thrown at them, and let them rot by their intestines, and eaten by snakes* Evilness must be stopped!!! *pants*

    Poor Ryou-kun, poor guy, poor everyone! *hugs* Hope they'll be ok, especially Ryou, as he's suffered the most. But yeah, I throughly enjoyed the story, plot and, drama! Excellent work for both of you! I should've read this sooner. Keep up the great work. Hope to see the next ch soon. See ya. ^_~
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  • From ANON - bjsu on November 13, 2005
    Hey this is geting good keep up the good work . I hope the others fidn thooughtss jerks and givve them what they desserve
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  • From ANON - ShadowRaven on November 12, 2005
    Alright, I better not talk too much because I'm about ready to go on a bloody rampage...!
    Anyway, it was a damn good chapter, BESIDES the fact that you tortured Ryou... >_< *grrrrrrrrrr*
    Well, I can't wait to see the next chapter. *hugs authoress but is still pissed off*
    Oh, and try to make sure that Ryou is still alive in the next Update.
    Also, can you please kill those sons of bitchs, because I'm already envisioning that Beautiful image in my head.
    Shadow Raven

    P.S. I'll review more if Ryou is still alive.
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  • From ANON - Elle-FaTe2x1 on November 09, 2005
    Tell Seto Ryou! You know both of them tell Seto!! Baka!!!
    Mou, Ryous can be so stubbourn.
    Great chappy! I really lovies it!!
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  • From ANON - ShadowRaven on November 08, 2005
    Why is Ryou being so Stubborn?!? *banging head againest the wall in frustration*
    God I'm about ready to pound some sense into that boy...
    I wish Ryou would just tell Seto what's going on, and make everything a lot easier.
    Well THANKS for the quick update. *glomps everyone*
    And I can't wait to see the next chapter. ^__^
    Shadow Raven
    P.S. My Writing SUCKS.
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  • From ANON - bjsu on November 08, 2005
    Hey I liked this i hope they get the bad guys soon . seto and ryou are cute too gether . please up date soon . I never thought yami woould whine over candy
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