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Reviews for Thirst

By : Ykarzel
  • From Rarity13 on August 29, 2017

    Alright so I've been reading all of your stories instead of studying for classes that just restarted and I in shock! I literally failed today but was still happy when I got home to read. I don't really get the TeaRoom thing but this was hot! Please come back and write more stories! Well maybe after I graduate again in a few years so I don't fail out lmao. You are the best. Direct me towards anyone even remotely as talented and NC-17 rated as you. I almost never rate or review but you should know how awesome you are. Oh well back to re-watching lectures I guess.. 


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  • From ANON - Overlyobessed on November 17, 2014
    Read both Hunger and Thirst. While Hunger is amazing, Thirst really builds up the characters and develops what a relationship would mean for both of them. The concept for the story is amazing, really different, and i love the fact you didn't 'fix' Jou, and its nice to have Seto not portrayed as the knight in shining armor thats going to make all Jou's problems go away. All in all, a very well written story, and an amazing read! :D
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  • From ANON - Iristar on June 27, 2014
    I absolutely loved this story. This is my third time re-reading Thirst and Hunger and I found both very intriguing and unique. Please keep writing and never feel discouraged because so far, I've loved all your work
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  • From ANON - Violetta on November 23, 2011
    Just wanted to drop a line and let you know how much I've been enjoying your stories. I'm the type to read a fix or book twice before I form an opinion good enough to leave a review, but that wasn't necessary with this one. Despite it "not turning out how you intended"; this fic was a pleasure to read. I noticed the difference in names as perspectives changed, and it made the story engaging and easy to follow. You also seem to have an innate understanding of how to write "smut" in a tasteful manner, and I found the characterization of Jou believable and adorable, even with the more brutal nature of his fetish. You're able to make these characters believable - not an easy feat. I can't write puppyshipping to save my life. I hope you write more, and as soon as time permits, I'll try to leave reviews for the other fics of yours I've read.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 17, 2011
    This is for Hunger and Thirst. Once again I find myself at a loss for words. For such sordid stories to make me feel so... I don't know, accomplished maybe? Well, it's kinda new for me. I'm one that usually go with the romantic ones, but this felt so right that I'll soon probably have one of my moments "hey, which episode was it that Kaiba found out it was Joey in the glory hole again?" and then after a while remember that obviously no such thing happened. It happens to me. A lot.

    When I realized I was on the last chapter, I actually whimpered, then looked at the page as if it had insulted me. Then I sighed and went on reading. I really loved how you left implied that they were living together at the end but didn't actually come out and said it, and I agree with you... 'fixing' Joe would have been... I don't wanna say unrealistic since it's a fanfiction, but I guess you know what I mean; I wish I were around when you were still writing it so I could maybe egg you on writing more chapters.

    Okay, enough with the adulation. Now the bad points.

    Uh... well I can't think of anything right now, other than cringing at imagining Joe sucking off old fat guys.

    That's it

    or

    as they say nowadays...

    good story!
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  • From ANON - Speelme on December 01, 2010
    Ykarzel, I believe this is the first time I have reviewed any of your stories, but I just wanted to say that I have been a silent admirer since your fanfiction titled ‘Ice.’ It is - to this day - a story that I find myself re-reading when I’m in the mood for some good ol’ classic smut.

    I have read (and re-read) all of the fictions you’ve posted here on adultfan.net and find something special in every single one of them. I truly love the way you write, and find it an incredible treat that you had the motivation to post your work for fans like me.

    I felt that, being a silent fan for so long, I should personally thank you for finishing Thirst (a story that I have enjoyed for its originality and satisfying scenes) and hope that you continue to write.

    Thank you for creating such wonderful stories for this fandom.

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  • From xAingealx on March 05, 2010
    Hot hot hot! I understood the use of hunger for a description of needing someone but thirst, I didn't get a first (hey I ryhmed (sp? I'm no good without a beta)) Anyway now everytime someone tells me they are thirsty I'll have to supress a giggle. And for that I thank you and am very glad you got back in the writing game.
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  • From jeazard on February 27, 2010
    That was a lovely end.
    And I don't really think you need to revise the earlier chapters; it shows that at first Seto wanted to cure Jou, too, before he realized that he didn't actually need curing.

    Love the story!
    ~jea
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  • From MishikoShinsei on February 27, 2010
    Nicely done!

    And though I wish there were more to the story, the way you've ended it fits in very well with the establish tone and pace of the story.

    Thanks again for sharing!

    'Ko
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  • From ANON - songswifteye on February 26, 2010
    You finished it! I took a break from checking AFF and you snuck in while I wasn't looking!

    I've been hoping that you'd get back to this one for ages. And I'm so glad that you didn't "fix" Jou - in either sense of the word! This worked much better than "true love conquers all."

    One note though, and if you don't want to hear about typos then please ignore this. In the chapter where the boys have their date and we see Seto's room, you accidentally wrote that they got "snacks and deserts" at the cafes, rather than "snacks and desserts." You're usually really good about editing, and it was so unexpected that I laughed out loud and had my roommate giving me funny looks.

    Thanks for writing this. Hopefully you'll have more in store for us soon!

    -Song
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  • From on February 24, 2010
    "Staring at the cherry surface, he noticed little crescent marks in the glossy finish from his fingernails. He wondered idly if they were from this time or the last time. He didn’t remember making them this time."

    That pretty much says "I'm one m*f*cking wordsmith" to me! The Hunger and Thirst series are two of my favorite works on all AFF. You did a really great job with it and I agree with your final notes - the ending you came up with inn the end really work best!

    You're an awesome writer.

    Milly
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  • From Animom57 on February 24, 2010
    This story has been quite a ride! I don't think I've ever come across such a *believable* combination of kink and tenderness.

    Four years, eh? How many Savage Love columns have you read during that time? cause the key to this chapter (and the story as a whole) seems to me to be the line "Don't apologize for something we both enjoy." - A line that also sums up a lot of Dan's sex advice. (This story also suddenly and inexplicably reminds me of what I've read about the movie "Secretary.")
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  • From on February 03, 2010
    Ykarzel,
    Let me tell, you are the bestt of both worlds; a very talented author combined with a talented smut author. -Ess. You write those characters so well. I love Seto's motivation and am highly anticipating how you will further Jou's character development as well!
    Keep writing this awesome story - may your muse be blessed!
    Milly

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  • From LordYouko on January 31, 2010
    Oh my god that was so fuckin hot!! My favourite chapter so far was chapter 5....that part where he stepped on jou's hands was HOT...and the part in the 7th where he almost fucked him but didnt......that was amazing!! Please continue....loved it.....when Seto finally does fuck him, I hope you're gonna make it so it's forced and brutal though jou loves it ^_^ Awesome story....keep it up....is there any way you could tell me when you update?
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  • From ichosha on January 26, 2010
    This.

    Don't stop.

    I have nothing negative to say and so much positive I'm sure this little review box would explode before I finished.

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