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Reviews for Beautiful Love

By : Sheyrena
  • From Wicabeth on September 03, 2005
    Mmm, that was nice *^-^*
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  • From Ayeshagirl on September 03, 2005
    hehehe I'm horny now.. oh and one thing, try and change your descriptions more... like on the kissing part. You said something like: "he opened his mouth and plunged his tongue into the younger boy's mouth". The second use of the word mouth could be changed to something like 'moist cavern'.. just a thought. Other than that it was good!
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  • From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on September 03, 2005
    RD: its a beautiful love alright almost bordering on divine and most definitly delicious hehe great story keep up the great work and update soon gtg now JA NE ^__^
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  • From ANON - SexxiTwistedAngel on September 02, 2005
    This review was born on the love of yaoi! heh. Very very cute story. The day out reminds me of something that happened in Gravitation with Yuki and Shu :D.
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  • From ANON - saphii on September 02, 2005
    aww! taht was sooo kute! great details too. XD
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  • From ANON - Owaranaimono on September 02, 2005
    Awesome first time story! Excellent work. Your name seems familiar to me.... Why is that? Maybe you should write a new story or a sequal to this one. *grins*
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  • From ANON - crazyb1tch85 on September 02, 2005
    really cute one shot, i'm a die-hard-fan of yami/Yuugi couple, so my opinion may be partial, but what the heck ^^
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