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By : bluesun
  • From ANON - Sarah Costa on September 15, 2005
    So Yugi's hearing have increase. What others things have increase? And Yugi giggle when Yami laugh. Keep up the good work. Please update soon. ja ne
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  • From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on September 15, 2005
    RD: ya know this is one of the best vampy storires ive read thus far including Children of the Night and this other one cant remember its name way to complicated even for my vocabulary well dawn keep up the great work and update soon hehe I'm curious along with enhanced hearing and speed or what not does a sharp tongue also come with the the rest of the abilities cuz that was a total OOC moment for yugi rebelling against a cop thats a new one ^__^ gtg now update soon and keep up the great work JA NE ^__^
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  • From ANON - candy on September 14, 2005
    hey thx for the review....please keep writing your story...ohh and i have a ew story coming out i will be hoor if you cant check it out ..=)

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  • From ANON - Cool in the Mood on September 14, 2005
    Eh, a piece of advice? You're using the "!" too much. Try using periods every once in a while? It's like the characters are yelling or talking in loud voices all the times.
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  • From ANON - Sarah Costa on September 14, 2005
    That was good...what happen next? I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon. Ja ne
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  • From ANON - SakuraNeko on September 13, 2005
    Finally, a potentially good YGO vampire story. I look forward to reading more, so update soon!
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  • From ANON - Arainaina on September 13, 2005
    very good please update soon
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  • From YuugiMutou on September 13, 2005
    Pretty cool, I like the concept of this story thus far, along with the fact that Yami is a vampire? Anyways aside from a few errors in spelling and such I really like this and hope to read more soon.
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  • From ANON - Giggles on September 13, 2005
    Interesting…please continue!
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  • From ANON - cutter on September 13, 2005
    carry on!
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  • From ANON - Sarah Costa on September 12, 2005
    Interesting...that was a good beggining. Please update as soon as you can. Ja ne
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  • From ANON - Arainaina on September 12, 2005
    very interesting please update again soon
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  • From ANON - MinuetLove on September 12, 2005
    Interesting beginning...can't wait to see where the story goes next.
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