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Reviews for Duplicity

By : WhosJeebus
  • From jeazard on May 18, 2010
    Oh. My. God.
    This is beautiful.
    I had my suspicions about Marik's control over the boys, Seto seemed way too easy to control to be true. XD
    But when they "broke character" at the end and Marik was all like WTF, that was brilliant! I laughed so hard, god knows what my neighbors think is happening in here. XD
    Aside from that, it was also extremely hot. This fangirl had a fantastic time reading your fic.

    ~jea
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  • From ANON - Dark Toy on August 14, 2006
    Oooooooooooook.....................................................................................................

    In one word: ¡HOT!

    I mean, yes poor Marik, but hell... Seto and his performance, Joey playing as a virgin...
    God, for a moment there, I really belived that Joey was under Marik's mind control. But Kaiba was Obviously rol playing.
    You really need to get a second part.
    Besides, I wanna know Seto's evil plan.
    And, for what I can see, Joey knows something... Maybe they are working together to come up with something?

    And speaking of Seth, For what I have readed (God bless Wikipedia, They have a section dedicated to Seto ^o^), Seth didn't want to take over the world, It was more like he was being controled by his father Akunadin (or something like that). And his personallity is more gentle and caring.

    You got me by the hook here!!!!
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - vampslyr on October 09, 2005
    Wow, I've been catching up with old e-mails from the Lair and finally read this. I do love the scheming Seto and my jaw hit the floor when he admitted to remembering Seth's life and was expecting to get the rod back. I'd been wondering if Seto was truly under the rod's spell from the start and by the end I was expecting them to take advantage of Marik's distracton as a chance to get the rod from him (even though that would make a serious break from cannon). Since they didn't and Seto's confident that he'll get the rod eventually and is perfectly willing to wait for it, I wonder what he's really cooking up.

    I didn't think of it 'til just now, but one would think Seto would want a little retaliation for how Marik had treated Jou the day before and almost drowned his lover. I think the story is perfect without worrying about that though. I think Seto's playing a much bigger game than to be worried about that when Jou's safe and now has resistence to the rod. Maybe he just writes it off as a trial Jou had to go through to further show his worthiness to be at Seto's side. Or 'Jou got himself into the mess and got himself out of it; he can fight his own battles and doesn't need to want an overprotective lover.' Mmm, so many ways you could go, I'm going to love the sequal.
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  • From ANON - kat8cha on October 05, 2005
    ~cackles evilly~ ooo yes, Marik is a sex feind. Followed by Go Seto!!!!1
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  • From ANON - icestar on September 16, 2005
    ^_____________^

    heh, what i would do if i had the millenium rod. ^__^ GO MARIK (Or was it malik? 0o) very nice. it made me all tingly...

    *thumbs up darly*
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  • From ANON - Tinka on September 15, 2005
    *jaws hits floor* OMR! POOR MARIK!... Omg, i think I was as shocked as HE was :o because liek.. omg. LOL I cant get over it.
    ....
    ........
    THOSE BASTARDS! ><
    Oh it was so amsuing though. Poor little Marik.
    The lemon was awsome too. The whole thing actually. You definetly have a way with words ^-^
    Great ficc!
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  • From ANON - Luca on September 15, 2005
    Daaamn, that was awesome! Lol, so unexpected. Yummy, yummy smut too. ^_^
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  • From Sammei on September 15, 2005
    I actually read this some hours ago, but I had to leave before writing up a proper review, so forgive me if I'm a little foggy with the details.
    This story was really, really good. Hot! Hehe. I was wondering when Marik was going to get in on the action.. I actually started to think that Seto was playing along when he glared and did all that stuff, but it didn't really strike me that Joey was playing along. They're such devious, devious people XD Plus.. I dunno, I'm not really understanding what you meant when you had Joey say he could see through Seto.. like, was all this a scheme to get Joey, or something? I'm so confused. It could have something to do with the fact that it's like in the wee hours of the morning. XD Anyhow... It's fun to think that Seto is running Yami ragged so he can't have Joey. Why don't they just tell him they're exclusive? Hehe.
    But seriously, wow. Excellent lemon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Nancy on September 15, 2005
    You rock my world!!!!! What else is there to say>?
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  • From Joupup on September 14, 2005
    Well, that was simply hot. I don't have any other words to describe it. I think I need a new thesaurus after this story, some of my braincells just fried from the total uncontroled smut. I love it, I love it, and I love it!

    Okay, done with the shameless worshipping. Let's get to the long ranting part. :P

    I liked how we could see Kaiba and Joey sometime get out of their "characters" yet it wasn't totally obvious. While at first I was dead sure Kaiba wasn't fully under Marik's control, I couldn't help but wonder if Joey was totally under or just faking it.

    Kaiba couldn't have been controlled. Kaiba's sex drive vs. Millenium rod? No match at all. Kaiba likes his sex. XD

    Anyhow, I don't know if I said it before, but I really like your Kaiba and Joey characterisation. I can see a bit of the devious/sexy Kaiba from "Hate/love relationship with Spring" and thankfully, no psychotic/scary Kaiba from "Shovel And Some Faith" ... then again it's just me, he could be there. Seto's going to take over the world and Joey will be is evil queen. Really, I can just see it now: Seto sitting on a throne, legs spread wide, holding the millenium rod in one hand and Joey's waist in the other. Joey will be wearing the obligatory slutty outfit, of course.
    Joey's timid virgin act was really good, although a bit too much. But it's okay, because I like virgin!Joey, I can cuddle him all day.

    Poor Marik, I feel a bit sorry for him. He didn't even cum. He's been played around and left quacking like a goose.

    All in all, it was a really good story. Although, *I* could see a trace of a plot in this story! I mean, now I am all: "Oh dear, what are Seto's real plans with battle city?" and "Oh my, they act like an old couple, does this mean they have various sexual adventures that goes beyond a tryst in the closet or having sex in public (yet hidden)?".
    So in the end I'm left with so many unanswered questions, I don't feel the whole PWP-ness. Then again, it might be just me, but still...

    Okay, this long review is coming to a close. This is why I don't like reviewing right after reading a chapter.

    Keep up the writing, and may plenty of bunnies visit you at night,

    Jou-pup
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