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Reviews for Forgiveness

By : Laryna6
  • From ANON - RyuArashi on October 11, 2005
    Ahhh!!! I loved reading this story! It was well written and it ended happily...Atem will always be my favorite bishie...He's so HOT! followed by Yugi-chan, Jounouchi, then Seto(don't like him so much because of his bad attitude)..but you made him likeable in this story, and you gave yugi-chan courage to stand up for what he thought was right regardless of the pain it was giving him(even thouugh we wanted to slap him silly to hurry up and realize the truth) And I like you, Shi-koi and Solitaire and Xpyne have made me addicted to YY/Y/S...Please write another story when you have a chance, okay! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - jessara40k on October 10, 2005
    I've read this chapter on ff.net, and the thing is, you haven't actually put the lemon up here or on mediaminer, so I can't really tell how they got from Seto and Yami rushing to stop Yugi going insane and destroying the world to the three of them cuddling together.

    It's a great story, but could you possibly put the lemon up somewhere?
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  • From ANON - Daea on September 25, 2005
    I'm didn't think I would get into this story(the format at the beginning put me off, before I realized it was speaking telepathicly), but I have, and I'm looking forward to more. The Y/YY/S thing is a plus thing. Also, though people might be clamoring for the quick ending, with the fluffy forgiveness get-together/happy ending thing(can't say I'm not secretly cheering for it), long stories are a good thing. Liking your characterizations, for there are explanations for why they act to the extreme. Having your other half ripped away from you.. will certainly give some mental trauma hm?

    Here's to cheerin' ya on. *raises pepsi in salute*
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on September 24, 2005
    This is one of the very few Seto/Yami/Yugi stories I've read and really liked - so take that as you will. I like how you're doing this... I think I can see now that Yugi isn't just not thinking straight - he can't think straight, not until he and Yami are together again. He doesn't know how to handle the pain.
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  • From ANON - SexxiTwistedAngel on September 19, 2005
    Very nice. Glad Yami ended up convincing Seto that he was loved, and wasn't just a substitute for Yugi.
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  • From ANON - Red Draogn Of Egypt on September 19, 2005
    RD: hey I kinda figured out the whole situation for your story when i read it at FF.net its a battle for Yugi his Morals are telling him that its wrong to kill that killing or hurting ppl is wrong combined with the fact that he dosnt fully understand why Yami loves seto and how Seto returns that love is what makes him so angry at Yami but what he believes to be some kinda of spell is actually both his heart and his soul SCREAMING at him to go to Yami for its what the Yin and Yang symbol means light and darkness intertwined as one form one being one soul with a piece of each other in both halves of that soul should that connection be severed by any means it will be destroyed taking bothe with it but unfourtunately for poor yugi the rest of his heart as well as his morals are not going to realize this till it smacks him dead in the face huh well keep up the great work and update soon gtg now JA NE ^__^
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