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Reviews for Sins of the Flesh

By : NihilEtNemo
  • From Dragon7 on September 24, 2007
    It just gets better and better this chapter ROCKS. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and update soon.
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  • From ANON - ayachan on September 24, 2007
    awww, that was sweet. At least they are sem-making progress.. for now! Lol, they are just so back and forth all the time. Anyway, I actually want to hear waht Anzu is going to say! Well, that and see Bakura rip Jou a new one. Jou's my favorite character, but he's being such an ass in this story that I don't have much sympathy for him >_
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  • From on September 23, 2007
    Hey there. I just read this all in one setting. I believe I started it before and wandered away. I enjoy your characterization and the story development. You are a great writer. thank you for sharing your talent and your creativity.

    I do have problems that will stop me from finishing your story as good as it is. I just don't believe a rape victim would ever willingly trust his rapist EVER...certainly not enough to walk with them or MARRY them.

    Kaiba is a complete alpha...IF he was ever overpowered and raped by Bakura I honestly believe he would arrange for Bakura to die a horrible death. A baby? Great concept...like the logistics of it...but I don't see Kaiba keeping it, especially if it's a product of rape from a known psycho. *shudders at the genetic possibilities of Kaiba and Bakura* Also, there is the fact that Bakura would always know he BESTED Kaiba in the most intimate way possible. Seto would know that and his pride would suffer daily from that. It would drive him to mayhem...or maiming Bakura, which...come to think of it, is NOT a bad idea. The bastard is a RAPIST.

    I applaud your talent and imagination, and your skill is fantastic. But those parts get to me. keep up the good work and I will look for more of your wonderful stories.

    Maggiemay
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  • From ANON - kisa on August 31, 2007
    wow.your speeding up....this last chapter really showed how complicated bakura is.It felt like he was tryin to fight himself.....thanks again for updatin fast.......even if you dont update in months it worth to wait
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  • From Dragon7 on August 31, 2007
    I love what you did on http://setosgirl0.deviantart.com/ its really great. I can't wait to read more so update soon.
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  • From on August 30, 2007
    I cried. I love it. email me when you update plze?
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  • From sweetciel on August 28, 2007
    An odd pair..But to have their story told by you= MASTERPIECE! I am officially HOOKED! The writing is just so...real. It's like you're not writing, you're documenting. Such a fluid style. And the emotions. So believeable. WONDERFUL! You do an excellent job at getting their emotions across. SOOOOO GOOOOOOOOD! More plz! Take your time. Such genius cannot be rushed ^_^
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  • From ANON - kisa on August 26, 2007
    this is getting really complecated and that's why it feels so real to read it........just when I thought seto will actully give in bakura has to fuck it all up and go back to day 1......thank you for updating so fast...can't waite to read more my gusses are not as good as your imagination......
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  • From Dragon7 on August 25, 2007
    Two chapters in one week I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D Mokuba is So Scary meen it so kawaii AKA ( Cute)!!!!!!!!LOL Poor Bakura and Seto I hope things get better for them. Keep up the good work and Update soon. :)
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  • From ANON - kisa on August 22, 2007
    oh..god I can't belive you finally updated this story..plz update as fast as you can .......I love this story it's my favorite story....and this new chapter was just perfect..........some how I feel seto is not giving up...but at the same time he is in love too....you show his confusion perfectly plz plz don't leave me hanging again.....
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  • From Dragon7 on August 22, 2007
    I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. You don't know how happy you made me I've been waiting Six months for this chapter and to see that you updated "Sins of the Flesh" it just made my day. Trust me this chapter did not disappoint it was fucking great you still got it. I can’t wait to read the next chapter. I hope that it does not take so long to post the next one.

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  • From on July 16, 2007
    Write more!! Plllleeeeaaaaassssseeeeee!
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  • From on July 13, 2007
    I quite like it, especially the fact that neither of them seem very out of character.
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  • From ANON - anon on June 18, 2007
    Love it. Simple love it. Read all 14 chaps in one sitting and i'm waiting for you to continue. Come on chop chop. I'm dying to know what happens. I love Bakura, the way he tries so hard to make Seto happy, yet Seto is completely oblivious that Bakura may actually care about him. Nice mood swings from Seto as well, it's tough dealing with someone who's pregnant- man or woman
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  • From ANON - kisa on June 10, 2007
    I really wished you whould complete this one..........I never loved any fic this much,.,,,I asked you once before to do so..........I've already read it more than 30 times(I really did) and I loved it ,,,,,,,,,,,,just loved it .please continue.......just tell me what it takes for you to end this .please do....it's just on my mind and it wont go away...........please.....
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