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Reviews for Sins of the Flesh

By : NihilEtNemo
  • From MercilessTantalus on January 31, 2006
    I really adored this chapter. I really don't think you made Seto or Bakura that out of character really. I mean, the point of fanfiction is to put them in scenes that they wouldn't normally be in, right? Mostly scenes that would CHANGE their character in some ways. And that makes sense, when a bit of seeming OOC-ness happens at the end of the chapter.

    I really adored the scene with Bakura at the dress shop. It was absolutely brillant. I about died laughing when I read it. Just the whole thing was so funny. ^_^

    I felt badly for Seto thoughout the whole thing, of course, but especially when he really just wants to be a girl, that's so unfair that it was taken from him, and VERY astute of Bakura to know just what he needs. I can't explain it, but the consensual scenes with him being so sweet were really...uh...sweet. ^_^ I really enjoyed them a lot, though I did feel sorry for Seto in the last one as well.

    Poor Bakura is really trying. And I'm really hoping it all works for them. Poor Seto's just scared of being hurt again. Emotionally.

    Update again soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Quichi on January 31, 2006
    You updated!!! I love you! I offer much pie in gratitude.
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  • From ANON - ayachan on January 28, 2006
    BAKURA YOU FREAK! QUIT SCREWING UP!!!! argh!!! poor seto ;_; i absolutely looooove this story.. very cute and funny at times... well, close to the beginning and middle o_O
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  • From Ano on January 14, 2006
    thanks for mentioning me. i can't wait for the next update. but i will.
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  • From ANON - TOT on January 12, 2006
    Wow, talk about a change in atmosphere. This fic went from slightly humorous to just plain sad in the course of a single chapter. It creates a powerful impression, and I'm not sure many authors could pull it off. You do marvelously well though. I can't help but love this strange pairing more and more.

    TOT
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  • From ANON - LibraryKat on January 10, 2006
    Great story! Please continue.
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  • From ANON - jk on January 08, 2006
    I likeys!
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  • From ANON - anna on January 06, 2006
    awesome, please continue soon.
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  • From Ano on December 31, 2005
    Thank you for updating! I hope you update again soon.
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  • From ANON - War-chan on December 22, 2005
    He's FINALLY said YES!!!!!!! And yes, it's true all girls at some point in their life dream up their fav. idea for their wedding day(guilty! ^-^U), but Seto, being the bitch that he is makes poor Bakura "WORK" *oh! the horror of it all!* for the wedding ring! Meanie...! (o'corse I like my Seto bitchy-makes him SO much more interesting!) So all that's left to say is PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love this story........I check up on it EVERY day! Praying that it has updated!

    ~Miss War-chan ^_~
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  • From ANON - clumsykitty on December 18, 2005
    Oh, oh, oh!!! Mexico... ¡That's my country!
    What beach do you prefer?
    Cancun
    Xel-Ha
    Acapulco
    Cozumel

    uhm?
    I'll pleased to see the dragon in my land n.n
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  • From on December 18, 2005
    I should be wondering what I'm doing here. I should be asking myself why I'm reading an MPREG, something I would absolutely NEVER touch, especially when it's quite possibly going to ruin the diginity of one, probably two, of my favorite characters. I should probably be wondering why I'm not turning the heck away and leaving this fic to the dust.

    And strangely, I'm not. Congrats - but rest assured this will probably be the only MPREG I ever read. You're a writer with talent and your stories are spectacular. And so is your yaoi, by the way.

    This is all actually much more well-written than I would expect of most MPREG fics, which are usually just an entirely self-centered Mary-Suefest. (Or maybe that's only when Yugi gets pregnant by Yami?) This is mushy, sure, which is something I NEVER expected of Bakura, (hehehe *pokes the secretly sensitive thief*) but tastefully written and remarkably sweet. Even though it's obvious both of them had habits of being assholes. XD

    Something feels like it's missing at the end of that last chapter. You're not telling us that's going to be "The End," are you?
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  • From ANON - BA on December 16, 2005
    *tackle hugs* YAY! They're gonna (eventually) get married! squee! And poor Kurarin, having to get a job XD *is still rolling on the floor laughing at that one*
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  • From ANON - TearsofTwilight on December 16, 2005
    Yay! Another chapter! Finally, they're getting married! (smiles and dances drunkenly). I still can't wait to see what happens next.

    TOT
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  • From ANON - DemonicStreak on December 14, 2005
    *sigh* That waz so sweet........... If i had gotten diamonds like that i would have married the person on the spot (not really) but i guess Kaiba's the hard to please
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