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Reviews for Sins of the Flesh

By : NihilEtNemo
  • From ANON - velvetina on December 11, 2005
    I'm back! Awww bless seto, hell when Bakura acts like that I kinda wish I was in Seto's situatio...and then I remember what happened to Seto an change my mind lol. Still Bakura is adorable in his own screwball kinda way. Update soon please
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  • From ANON - DemonicStreak on December 09, 2005
    *sniffle* the chapters were long but worth it....... any way the story wasnt all so creepy so be kind to the world and post the other chapters
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  • From ANON - TOT on December 08, 2005
    Magnificant! It's both serious, sad, funny, and sweet! I love your stories!

    TOT
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 26, 2005
    bakura is funny and needs to be hit over the head with something really heavy
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  • From ANON - Silver Crescent X or Kimichue on October 31, 2005
    Anyone who writes a Seto uke is a great friend of mine...LOL @_@
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  • From ANON - BEWD Sorcerer on October 22, 2005
    *rotflmao* That was hilarious. ^.^ Marry me! Marry me! Wh00t!!! Go Bakura!
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  • From ANON - DarkLadyNyara on October 19, 2005
    Not usually my type of story, (M-PREGs are rarely beleivable), but this one is very good. I love your writing, it's always interesting.
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  • From ANON - TT on October 18, 2005
    Whats 'THE LARCH' ?? o_o Okays I liked this chapter. aww Bakura is getting nicer and nicer, Flowers and chocolets XD it's so funny especaily the fact that Seto liked them, well the flowers anyways. Ryou is pretty nice too, my hate factor on him went down a bit X3 hehe I wonder who would be wearing the dress? *cough* >< ether way it would be a funny mental image.
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  • From ANON - Alta Lemur on October 16, 2005
    Ok, so I choose to exercise my right to withhold a full review. I will, however, provide a cursory review. Heehee. I am actually glad at certain dynamics of this fanfic. There was a small "Woot!" echoing in my head when I found this was a transgender mpreg fic, and that was for various reasons. Firstly, it's more enjoyable to read an mpreg when it is evident the author put time into making it somewhat feasible. Sometimes the whole "yeah, btw, I can have kids" is a foreshadow of badly strung plot and weak characterizations. Secondly, aside from desperately searching for good mpregs, I like to read good transgenders, aside from Ranma crossovers. These are also hard to find, as they tend to be mpregs or the authors do it to somehow spite a male character. And we all know that bashing doesn't mean good fanfiction.

    I am withholding most of my comments on Bakura's emotions. One of the MOST overused cliche's in yaoiland is the rape and then the makeup. I have accepted that since yaoiland is fictional, that rape can occur without being followed by a lifetime of constant pain. Hell, I've sometimes heard that some women eventually move on with their loves and do have some sort of loving relationships. But like I said, I will not shy away from this fanfiction for the presence of rape, but I will ignore it if you decide to undermine it. I will valiantly supress the urge to comment further on the rape issue. However, I will point out that aside from the popular rape theme, especially within mpreg genre, there is a popular wave of miscarriage. If the plot of this fanfic is that Bakura rapes Kaiba, Kaiba is pregnant, B and K fall in love, baby is miscarried, B comforts K and gets him pregnant again, K happily becomes a mommy, then I want warning now so that I can stop reading. There's only so much fantasy I can take in a fanfic.

    I do have good expectations for this fanfic. I am hardly ever turned away from your fanfics because of plot issues. When I do turn away, it is either from the pairing or from not being able to take it (even I have my limits). I will admit that I expected Bakura to take it a bit slower. I expected at least 50 apologies, to be honest. I will eagerly wait for the next update. And as for the transgender Seto, I hope you do reveal just a bit more feminine qualities to him. I openly admit my whoreism for Well Written transgender fanfics. But so far he hasn't shown a great deal of qualities. Just... please... show him taking a bubble bath, or watching a chick flick. Maybe him acting motherly to Mokuba instead of brotherly? Please. And I did read one of your comments that you have issues representing time in your fanfic. I hope you can manage it well in this fanfic. I can't wait until Seto experiences hormonal hornyness. I believe that's in the first trimester. I'll have to look that up again.

    And yes, this is a short review. The longer version was at least a page longer.
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  • From ANON - Psycho DemonWitch on October 16, 2005
    that was a funny chapter! i love the way bakura is so persistant in getting kaiba to marry him, yet you've still retained most of his personality, its brilliant. please update!
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on October 16, 2005
    aww that ending was just too cute! Kaiba is softening towards Baku yay *does happy dance* tee hee i love how Bakura is his normal grumpy self yet is trying to go against that to be nice to Seto. Its great to see the internal struggle of his natural mean gene and the fact that he loves Seto and needs to be with him. Ah yes angsty goodness what human being out there doesn't revel in the misery of others to some extent when we know its going to end well?!

    Hehe untill next time

    velvetina
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  • From ANON - TearsofTwilight on October 15, 2005
    Ha! The dialogue in this chapter was hilarious! Isn't Bakura just darling? (......O_ODid I just called Bakura darling?O_O......)

    -TOT

    P.S.- I was wondering, what does Kazesenshi mean?
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  • From ANON - TearsofTwilight on October 06, 2005
    Oh not Opus? Sad. lol anyway........I absolutely love Bakura in this fic. How can someone be so evil yet so.....not. You always manage to take the characters and give them totally new deminsions while keeping them in character. I gotta learn how to do that.

    -TOT

    P.S. Bakura PROPOSED to Seto!!!
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on October 06, 2005
    *looks embarrased* I really should have reviwed before this, I've been reading it since you first posted...don't know why i didn't review immediatley, sorry! Lol anyway its an awsome story, I've seen this sort of thing tried before in extremally bad taste but I love yours. You manage to get the concept over without it being tacky or crass etc well done! I feel so sorry for Kaiba...but oh well a bit of angst is always good mwahaha. Can't wait for the next chappie
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  • From ANON - TT (2) extension of review 1 on October 06, 2005
    Forgot to add this XX my bad: Oh I like the fact that Bakura is going to try and convince Seto to merry him! I can't wait to see what he does to make Seto love him. :3 ~day dreams~ *A mental image of a mini group consisting of Jou, Honda, and Anzu dressed as witches in a corner cowering in fear, while Bakura, who is holding a teary eyed Seto,atempts to stab the mini group with a large pointed sword. And in the background you can see Yugi, Ryou and Yami (who looks ready to kill someone) are throwing confetti everywhere.* .....did I mention that Seto is in a white dress? XD heh.. Well glad to see you update so soon! X3 good day and again I sitll have to go with Denney's ^^"

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