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Reviews for Affection?

By : YoakeRyuu
  • From LunariusKoneko91 on May 27, 2010
    Prefect, just prefect...
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  • From nerosiriusrowan on March 14, 2007
    Thanx, I Love Reading Storys That Make Me Laugh:) GOOD JOB
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 05, 2006
    Amazing...love your writing style ^__^
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  • From ANON - Chervil on October 05, 2006
    I like it. Cute and sweet -- surely that was what you were intending it to be? It would've been nice to have a reason as to why Seto didn't show up for those few days during and right at the end of summer, but since it's from Jou's POV, it's understandable. And like that one reviewer said -- this plotline could've easily been stretched to fill 10 chapters, yet you managed to fit it into a quaint little one-shot, and that is a great feat in itself.

    =) I love the whole "You're in my spot" deal. Keep up the brilliant work; I look forward to reading more of your stories.
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  • From ANON - maeve on January 13, 2006
    ooooh!! kawaiiii!! that was just so cute~ good job
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  • From ANON - misanagi on October 01, 2005
    this is really cute.

    a new way of saying 'i love you'?

    yup, definitely Seto-ish! ^__^
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  • From ANON - Randomchick on October 01, 2005
    Awwwww....that was sweet. ^___^ I really loved it. Especially the end. And very Seto-like, the way the whole "You're in my spot" thing is sort of his way of showing he cares. In the sense that if he didn't, he wouldn't bother saying any thing....he'd just automatically get him kicked out of the park. O__o I have a feeling that all along, it wasn't the heat that kept him from arguing. Well....at least not the weather any way. ^_~! *nudge nudge* Very good job.
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  • From ANON - Jessica on October 01, 2005
    OMG! Uber sweetness! That not only had me hot and bothered, but I just love the idea that Seto is somewhat of a hopeless romantic...that one phrase says it all! I love it!...and I give you major props for honing down Jou's inner monologue down to a tee! I definitely felt like I was in Jou's mind! Great job! ^-^
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  • From ANON - MARMangaFan on September 30, 2005
    I liked your story a lot! You did a great job with Jou's meandering mind. And I loved the ending - so very Seto-ish. =)
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  • From ANON - Alani on September 30, 2005
    WOW! that is so wunderful!!! (I´m sorry.. I live in Germany and havn´t got so many words to discribe how much I enjoyed your story..) I loved Jous thoughts about Seto. And of curse Setos "You´re in my spot!" Awwww.. that´s so cute! You know, usualy I just read english to lern for school but sometimes the storys are so good... Thanks for this! Hope to read more of those storys soon!
    Byebye Alani
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 30, 2005
    ohh sooo cutee
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  • From MakaiKitty on September 29, 2005
    Awww ... hot and sweet, a great combination.
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  • From Reyn on September 29, 2005
    awww! This was awesome! I love the way you did it! The storyline itself could have easily been expanded to fill at least 10 chapters, but the way you comprised it down into a nice little oneshot made it seem a bit sweeter. Awesome job!
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  • From ANON - Chosa on September 28, 2005
    CUUUUTE!!! I like it. Seto and Jou are just adorable. I love your portrayal of Seto and Jou's attitude. I love the whole "You're in my spot" deal. ^_^
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