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Reviews for Shallow Gene Pool

By : shipposister
  • From Sammei on March 21, 2007
    Oh man, are you serious? Brothers? I don't know if I can handle that. >_< I just thought he had Seto listed as next of kin because he would be the one most likely to help Jou out in a rough situation, but...brothers? Now I feel dirty for wanting them to get together. >_< I'm really curious as to how you're going to proceed with the story, and if Jou and Seto are, in fact, going to get together or not. If you DO try and get them together, good luck with that. I'm not trying to be mean, just saying that in all seriousness. There's been ONE thing in my entire life that I've watched that made me actually root for siblings to get together, and I still felt dirty, even though the plot was so well done. Looking forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - randomreviewer on January 01, 2007
    Brothers?!! This oughta be good. Can't wait to see the entrance of the Yugi-tachi. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Blue on November 18, 2006
    holy shit! ok...freaky update please?
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  • From ANON - Kiritsu on November 13, 2006
    ...
    You've gotten 15 reviews so far, and said no new chapters until you got 5 reviews...does that mean you owe us three chapters?
    It sounds like it'll be really good, I just want MORE!
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  • From ANON - Carro on January 17, 2006
    OMG now I'm caught up in this story too ^^ Please please uppdate soon! I have to know what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 21, 2005
    please update pplease
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  • From ANON - martha on November 20, 2005
    PLEASE CAN YOU WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER. ILOVE THIS STORY SO FAR I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPEN

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  • From ANON - Jelise on October 29, 2005
    HOW COULD YOU END IT LIKE THAT?!

    Anyways, I love this story. Never before did I think that a Seto/Jou pairing could be written in such a unique way (it's still Seto/Jou right?). Anyways you truely have a flare for coming up with interesting stories that keep the reader occupied. THAT CLIFFY WAS MEAN THOUGH.

    Now for the obligatory chant of doom. *screams over shoulders* This is the one that pisses most writers off!!!!

    *group of angry vikings scream* UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!

    *Pushes vikings out the front door* Sorry about that; they get a little carried away sometimes!

    Signed
    Je and Muses
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  • From ANON - Ayame Yuki on October 17, 2005
    i hate cliffhanger i need the next chapter before i died of suspece so please for the of joey/kaiba put the next chapter up
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  • From ANON - einld on October 08, 2005
    WHAT the HELL?!?!?!

    how could you make seto related to jou as his brother????
    does that mean that there will be no sto/jou pairing???? *teary eyed*

    awwwwwwww man NOOOOOOOOOOO you cant do that!

    will unless you have some good explaination for this.....but
    if its not a setoxjou pairing then what m/m pairing is it?????

    *sigh* i hope everything becomes clearer later

    ja!
    btw love the plot so far....you just had to put a real suspense-
    cliff hanger there didnt cha????
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on October 07, 2005
    Don't leave it there!!!!! Ah you mean person, please update soon! I loved it and the way Seto cares is so cute.
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  • From ANON - Wolf on October 06, 2005
    ohhh, I love it. Write more please!
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  • From ANON - SetoKaibaWheeler on October 05, 2005
    WHAT?! I CAN'T BELIEVE TIS!!! UPDATE!
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  • From ANON - Jessica on October 05, 2005
    ...

    ...

    ...*takes a _deep_ intake of breath*...

    ...*about 40 minutes and 3,000 short puffs later*...

    ...[insert voice of Janice from 'Friends']...OH. MY. ~GOD~. HOW COULD YOU LEAVE US LIKE THAT?!...OHMYGOD! I KNOW I'M NOT IN MY RIGHT MIND RIGHT NOW BECAUSE I AM LITERALLY DEMANDING YOU COME BACK RIGHT NOW AND UPDATE!...AHHHHH! THAT WAS ~TOTALLY, KICK-ASS COOL!~...

    ...at first when I was reading the summary, I was like, oh, cool, that's original...Seto and Jou are ~knowingly~ second cousins until he has an accident and they discover they aren't related and fall in love!...then I read the phone call scene and was like, ok, so Jou just used the 'I'm the 2nd cousin to the rich teen CEO so I could be close enough to him until I can be his' line when he named Seto as his next of kin...but...YOU TOTALLY BLEW ME OUT OF THE WATER WITH THAT KICKER IN THE END! I hope it's not gonna be a j/k moment; I would like to see how far this 'brother' thing gets taken!...

    I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS PLOT! IT'S THE FIRST I'VE SEEN OF IT SO I AM REALLY EXCITED TO SEE WHERE YOU GO WITH THIS!

    Best of luck and thanks for that jaw-dropping read! Ja! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Hikari Raine on October 04, 2005
    OMG what a way to drop the bomb. i can't wait to see how you are going to work the brother thing in. hope you update soon

    Ja
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