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Reviews for Echo In My Mind

By : YamiRynEnjeru

From Mystralwind on June 12, 2008
Huh?? That's it... They are are going to be divided?? You hinted at that with Baku not being able to protect Yami the way he promised.. now what??

OMGosh, i read 7 chapters of set up to be dropped!!! NOOO.. Are you going to continue this??
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From ANON - Phoenix on March 07, 2008
Wow this is amazing!
I love it! Could you possibly email me when the next chapter is up, pwetty pwease! *pulls out Ryou for his puppy dog eyes*

Great story!

Phoenix
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From ANON - nirua on June 09, 2007
This is a great fic. I love the way bakura and yami think about each other. I think yami is so kawai. But please update i'm bagging you. please. There are to little yamishipping stories.
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From ANON - kit-kit on January 11, 2006
wow i can't wait to see how crazy dinner goes.
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From ANON - Pugi on January 09, 2006
^_^;;;;..WAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH IM SO SORRY!!!! *cries*..Listen ive read since chapter one and I havent reviewed and IM SO SORRY!!1 RA IM SUCH A BITCH WAAAHHH ;_; I mean it I really do that was really mean of me but I have finally decided to review afterall I love this story as much as I love Yamishipping! I still feel bad about the reviewing thing though..o.o..i do..anyway I don't think that's what you really wanted me to rant on about now is it so I keep quiet about that. ^_^;; Hmmme quiet..that's a first..0.o

I don't believe it..U MEAN MARIKU WAS GOING OUT WITH SETO AND HE WAS TRYING TO GET OFF WITH THE OTHER TWO AS WELL!?!? RA! How horny can one yami be, that kind of annoyed me really and I thought Mariku was single and yet he was sleeping with a doc, well I would want to see a doc to if I slept with Mariku. 0_0. But Im glad he dumped Seto for the other two..*squeals*..BLESS THE YAMISHIPPING! So I guess what Mariku wanted as a quickie has developed into much more of love then lust..but what's this? Yami and Bakura are confused about their emotions..whoa it's turning out to be like a soap opera..lol..I LOVE IT! WHAT AN AWESOME IDEA FOR A PLOT..I really liked the fact you included some of past including kura and yami's first meeting. Sweet! And I can't believe how innocent yami is in this fic. ITS SO KAWAII!! But i must wonder? Who is Yami dreaming off? Is he thinking of like well the whole Egypt thing e.g Pharaoh, Tombrobber etc and like Mariku is the guy in it..?0.o I dont know its just a thought I had trapped in my head. And I still think that Ryou's man is well..Mariku's hikari..Malik/Marik. (I dont know whatyou call him for I call the yami version Malik like chen does so yeah..0.o) But the idea of Yugi fancing Maiku and flirting with him..0_0''..IT SCARES ME! lol..it does but i think that was an excellent way of making the other two yami's reliese their feelings. I really can't say more for once again youve got me wanting more!!! I LOVE THIS FIC!!! If only there were more yamishipping fans about...;_;..damn..but I cant wait for your next chapter and I just really want to see them get together soon or admit their feelings at least. I NEED MORE! But first..im more intrested whats going to happen at dinner especally with flirty slightly horny Yugi, Yami, Kura and the rest of them. lol..I can imagine it now..but have no fear for now Pugi is here and..I SHALL REVIEW FROM NOW ON!!!! ^_~ C ya in Feb I guess..

*+Pugi+*
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From ANON - Kitteh on January 09, 2006
Ooooh, my love, how pretty that was! ^___^ Yami-shipping shall be among my favourite pairings from now on! The MarikuxSeto one was cute, but, who's seme of the two of them? *blinks* I can't see Seto take it up the...bwah. You know. And Mariku is too smexy dominating-ish to, too...questions, questions! You shall enlighten me later!

On better news, I love where this is going. I love the whole Ryou-being-schizo as well, it's most cute! I can already see their mom coming out to criticize Kura's hair style! X3!! Although...how did YamYam notice it was Amane on the phone? Did she answer with her name, or can Ryou do the freaky voice-changing act, maybe, like in those exorcism movies? Gasp! So many questions! I wanna see the molesting. Earlier than February, or you'll have to make it up lots and lots of hawt RPing. *nodnod* Now, after this most long review (X3!) I have to depart, because I need to go jogging. School wore me out. Loves and cookies! And warm milk! Love joo!

~Yours, Kitteh
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From ANON - S. Chensu (Of S. Chensu and Luff from the ff.net Realm) on January 09, 2006
OMR, SETO AND MARIKU!!! WAH!!! *Breathes* It's fine, I'm over it now. But yes, that is an odd pairing, Seto x Duke sounds a lot better. I hope you will try and feature another scene with those two coz it would make me laugh so much.

Another great chapter, it's good to see you update and it's definitely heating up between the yamis. But what is this, Yuugi likes Mariku too? *Enters hysterical yamishipping fan girl mode* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Mariku is only allowed to be with Bakura and Yami! Yuuigi with Mariku?! That's just embarrassing! WAH!!! I'm sure it will all be sorted out soon though, please? And I still don't know who Ryou is with even though it should be obvious by now. So to help me you'll have to update as soon as possible! PLEASE?! And at least I now know about Yami and what's really going on with him. That raises a question though, who would do something like that to him? What would be the point? And when will Yami realise it all? Too many questions!!! You must answer them!

Anyways, keep up the brilliant work and I'll be around for the next installment!

S. Chensu xxx.
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From ANON - ChaosDragon61 on January 08, 2006
ah, so now we've seen a bit of history and a bit more on what's going on in Yami's mind....interesting. Still loving this fic and I'm sorry I'm such a slacker at reviewing *hangs head in shame* but I must say, this is one of my favorites on AFF. And thanks for the review of Colors of the Soul, glad your enjoying it and the one before it!

Dragon
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From ANON - NubianQueen413 on December 10, 2005
Oooooooooooo....me likey!!! Write some more ne, you're an awesome writer. RAWK ON ^(>.
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From ANON - S. Chensu (Of S. Chensu and Luff from the ff.net Realm) on November 29, 2005
Wow, I should have reivewed this a long time ago... I'm very sorry I didn't but I was so tired when I read this that I thought I'd do it the next day and then a couple of weeks passed and I've suddenly remembered...

Wow, cool developments in this chapter and could it be that Yami might be flirting with Marik (is that what you call him in this story? People use different names and then I get confused)? But the thought of Yami having a tattoo is soooooo cool! And naughty Marik wanting to see all of it! But I suppose for the plot to continue and to be able to see the bishies together he has to. So I say...MORE! And you've got to work on Bakura more too so that he will admit he wants to be with Marik and then they can be a happy threesome! Well, as soon as Yami's feeling better I suppose...

And you still haven't said who Ryou's boyfriend is! I really wanna know! Please tell us soon! And we've got to see Yugi too, although he'll probably be around in the next chapter won't he?

Anyways another cool chapter and next time I will try and review a little bit earlier.

S. Chensu xxx.
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From ANON - kit-kit on November 23, 2005
wonderful
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From ANON - Kitteh on November 21, 2005
*has coffee stolen* Oh evilness...pretty chapter, though! ^____^ Me liked! Me liked Mariku's seduciness too, very much...is that even a word? oO If not, I just invented it. Seduciness. =^^= Keep going, BayBee!
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From ANON - Whitney on November 12, 2005
Yay, you updated!! I'm sooo glad!! I loved it! Very good!!
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From ANON - kit-kit on November 09, 2005
nice i loved the long chapter
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From ANON - S. Chensu (Of S. Chensu and Luff from the ff.net Realm) on November 09, 2005
I was recommended this (as is always the case) and I'm really enjoying it so far, especially as yamishipping is one of my favourite pairings!

The scenes where Yami was on his own at the beginning were brilliant, there was a lot of thought put behind them I feel and the emotions came across really well. I could really understand how Yami was feeling and felt a bit scared as well. The same goes for Ryou's mentions (well, he wasn't there so they can't be called scenes) and don't worry, I understood the explanation Yami gave about Ryou meeting his boyfriend. But I REALLY want to know who it is now...you must tell us soon! Mariku annoyed me as much as he annoyed Bakura too, which I suppose is a good thing in terms of you portraying the character so that he gets on the reader's nerves.

Anyways, grammar and spelling are good (which is very important in a story, even if some authors don't think so) and I'll be waiting for the next chapter, I promise!

S. Chensu xxx.
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