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Reviews for Fall of the Dice

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  • From ANON - Anon on November 17, 2005
    Please continue soon!
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  • From ANON - Gremmlyn the infinately prolonged on November 03, 2005
    oh man! i was all sorts of rooting for Katsuya, but now i'm not so sure, i can't wait to see how it turns out though ^.^
    keep going this story rocks!
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  • From ANON - LadyGrey on October 31, 2005
    Oh man, why's it have to end so soon? I just sat and read all eight chapters and while I admit I love Otogi's style as a boy and I was a little worried about the cross dressing, I'm totally hooked and loving it. Hm..... can't wait for Honda's date, but wow is it going to be a hard choice. Poor Ryu!! Does he even have to choose, anyway? He works well with all of them and they should just suck it up and let him date them all forever. Didn't their mother's ever teach them to share?? Sheesh. Update soon please, here's a kitten to help you! =^..^= ~LG
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  • From ANON - artsyfoxfire on October 22, 2005
    oh god! dont stop now!!
    how can you cut me off?
    ahh my knees are weak^^;;;
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 22, 2005
    wow awsome twist!!
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  • From ANON - Haruko on October 09, 2005
    ^_^ Aww! I love this fic! I can't wait for the next chapter!
    It kinda reminds me of "The Bachelor", only better, since The Bachelor wasn't that good...
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  • From JeiDurii on October 09, 2005
    Very nice read. Fickle Goddess pointed this out to me and I'm rather glad she did. I'm also glad she left the review she did so that you could explain the meaning behind the dice/numbers/colours. I really like the meaning behind that as well as the way you have Ryuuji behaving. Very nice.

    I second the Ryuuji crossdressing and found that amusing; to say the least. Very much so.

    I can't say much more beyond what Fickle Goddess said & I hope to see another chapter soon! This will be one fic I will keep my eyes on =)
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  • From ANON - Fickle Goddess on October 09, 2005
    Thanks for the explanation of the dice! It was nice to have it made clearer, and I'm glad the review let you know how much I like the fic. It definitely makes a lot more sense to think of them having accidentally found out somehow (if you wrote a pre-quel to show that happening, I'd love it) than to have them working together.

    Anyway, onto this chapter! Nanashi's got to be Ryuuji, right? For one thing, her name means no-name and for another, she sounded like Ryuuji does, in a physical sense at least. I'm guessing Ryuuji's crossdressing to see what the guys act like when he's not around? Either that or he's actually a female, but that wouldn't make sense with your 'nothing straight' comment. That line made me crack up, incidentally. XD

    It was great to see that you'd updated so soon - I'm about to go to bed, and this was an awesome bedtime story-type thing.
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  • From ANON - Fickle Goddess on October 08, 2005
    Wow, a Ryuuji-centric story, amazing! I loved the way you had him idly playing with the dice, and I'm really curious about what the numbers could mean. Do they represent different characters or something? It was also great to have him taking charge of the situation, seeing how odd it was and how much he'd hate to have things so undecided. I think it's a little weird that Seto, Jou and Honda would be working together, or confiding in each other like that, but I still definitely like this story and can't wait for the next part!
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