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Reviews for Fun At Night

By : Saka
  • From LauraBeth on July 07, 2010
    that was sexy! as a yaoi fangirl, i loved it!
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  • From ANON - Dragonwrangler on November 06, 2005
    Yes- you deserve a great review for this! I enjoyed it. I'm amazed Alister lasted as long as he did before letting every in the house know how good he was feeling! Thanks!
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  • From Siarra on October 23, 2005
    Sweet, very sweet. A very nice choice of pairing as well, very daring. In fact, I can remember seeing this particular one done only once before and even then it was only passingly mentioned. The storyline was one of the finest of true PWP traditions and I very much liked how you played it out. Your writing style is nice to read, although some minor misspellings had slipped in. Another minor thing was how you constantly used their names, something that can get a bit tiresome. The characterizations were cool, although could've used a bit more depth. Yeah, I know, PWP, but as such they seemed a bit too generic...
    All in all, you've written another lovely and very hot YGO fic.
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  • From ANON - DreamPrincess (Too Lazy 2 Log In) on October 23, 2005
    OMFG!!!!!!! That was better than I expected....I am majorly drooling here...Atemu......Alister.....Both very very very naughty...And naughty with each other...You so deserve a a review....Who'd a thought that a thought from my mind of Alister/Atemu together would be this FREAKIN' HOT!!!!!

    ALISTER...................ATEMU................My Loves together at last in a yaoi story.....(My other love is still Seto Kaiba...Just ask IceAngel)

    This was one HOT FIC....People would probably think we are 2 disturbed indiviuals....We do have freaky twisted minds....But they are our minds....

    DreamPrincess
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