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Reviews for Anachronism

By : Ochodre
  • From ANON - Rockinmuffin on October 28, 2005
    YEAH! PANCAKES! XD lol.

    Can't... resist... THE CUTENESS! Imagining Ryou holding a female Bakura makes for an interesting mental image, but an adorable one nonetheless. ^_^

    I know you can't answer this question because it'll probably be answered later in the story, but I can't help but ask: What's up with the pain in Kura-chan's side? Is it some sort of Psychological pain? o_O

    I'll keep my eye out for the next chapter! ^_^ *Dances*
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  • From ANON - elusive_dreamer on October 28, 2005
    Wow! I’m really flattered that you find my reviews coherent…you don’t know how much I appreciate that remark, especially coming from my favorite authoress. Thank you so much! ^_^ Don’t mind it though, it’s just my way of showing gratitude to authors who work really hard in writing their stories.
    Okay, I think you’ve indicated before that this story’s plot won’t be that ‘defined’ and I guess I’m starting to see that from reading your second chapter. I know that this is your way of writing an ‘open’ story but I think it wouldn’t hurt to have at least one major or central conflict to be resolved in order for the story to have ‘matter.’ Don’t get me wrong, I adore every situation you have concocted in your past stories, but writing a story without a prospect ending can prove to be quite disastrous as it can lead to writing something that concludes with nothing. I’m not saying that this story will end up like that…no, it’s just that it wouldn’t hurt for one to be careful in deciding on the direction one’s story will go.
    From your reply to my review, I have a feeling that your lime scene would be milder than what I’ve anticipated, considering the evaluation given by your friend, but I guess we’ll just have to see when that chapter comes. I’m sorry if what I had said in my last review had just pressured you in writing mild lime scenes, even though it’s your right as an authoress to write as you please. It’s just that I’m not really used to reading Bakura being a female and doing stuff like that with Ryou…Oh dear, maybe reading too much yaoi really had an adverse effect on my views…*sigh*
    Hmm…I guess that’s it for now. By the way, is there any chance that you’ll write another shonen-ai story involving Ryou and Bakura? *crosses fingers* Sorry, if I’m quite persistent over this matter. It’s just that I really love what you did with Snow in the Sahara and Make like a Banana, and I think it would be a shame if the shonen-ai genre of fan fiction would lose such a talented writer such as yourself.
    Still looking forward to reading the next chapters, Ja ne! ^_^

    Note: I’ve visited worldweave.net once and saw how you also create fan arts of your stories. I’ve made this art about your story Snow on the Sahara (really love that one! It’s actually my favorite fan fiction of all time!) but unfortunately, I wasn’t able to post it in any fan art site since my scanner’s busted. If ever I’m able to scan it (and I mean EVER), is there any site you can suggest where I can post it? It’s not that good since it’s only a sketch but I consider it as my tribute to that story…it really touched my heart in ways that no other story can (I’ve read it a number of times already, and every time it doesn’t fail to make me cry, honest!).

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  • From ANON - Lady Laran on October 27, 2005
    Sweet Isis! Cramping? *winces* Ryou is NOT going to be able to talk Bakura through a period, you realize that? Poor guy couldn't even talk about sexuality, though it would be funny to see him trying to discuss this with her. *giggles* It'd be funny to have Serenity over and debating tampons versus pads with Kura. I can't see her as a pad girl, though..too bulky..but tampons might weird her out too. Ra, this is too funny!
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  • From ANON - Rockinmuffin on October 27, 2005
    YAY! The sequel is here! Hurrah! ^_________________________^

    Ahem, now that I've got that out of my system... Congratulations on the first chapter of the sequel! *Sigh* I just can't get over how cute Bakura and Ryou are when they try to understand their feelings for each other. Also, I must say that I'm extremely curious to see what happens in this story; the plot, the fluff, the drama! You know, the works! ^_^

    I'll keep my eye out for the next chapter! ^___O
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  • From ANON - Lady Laran on October 27, 2005
    Oh I am so glad you decided to do a sequel to Powerless! I'd read it on ff.net and was hooked, even told friends about it. I truly hope that we'll see some Ryou and Bakura action. Those two are a great couple to read about and this should be interesting in many ways. I hope you'll keep working on this! Great job!
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  • From ANON - elusive_dreamer on October 27, 2005
    Hey there again! Wow, you’re really into stories with gender-bending huh? Darn…and you really did a brilliant job with Snow in the Sahara and Make Like a Banana (sigh). Anyway, I still love your work and I think it would be quite interesting to have a relatively ‘dominant’ Ryou for once, although, I’m still trying to condition myself to reading a female Bakura for later ‘limey’ situations.
    I think you’ve indicated somewhere that you’re going to make this story worthy of AFF.net and I know it’s your decision to make the scenes as limey as what you want it to be, but please don’t write these lime scenes a little too extreme. Not to be demanding or anything, but I would really love it if this story will retain its sensual quality without the typical scenes that constitute the ‘typical’ lime in stories. I don’t know how you’re going to interpret this but I sincerely hope that you’re not going to take this comment the wrong way. It would be nice to know at least one author who writes this type of scenes and turn them into more than the satisfaction of the carnal endeavors of these two characters, which I happen to really love.
    As for the due parts in this story, don’t worry about writing them since I also happen to like them and would love to read Yugioh stories that do not focus on pairings and all that fluffy or smutty stuff from time to time. Hmm…just wondering, don’t you think it’s weird that most fanfiction written about this anime usually has the most graphic smut, rape, and torture scenes when it’s supposedly a show for kids? Sometimes, reading Yugioh stories that include more of the typical ‘save-the-world-theme’ and none of the shonen-ai pairings really makes me guilty of ever reading yaoi stories…oh well.
    So, I guess I’ll just be seeing you in the next chapters! Ja ne! ^_^




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