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Reviews for Hellraisers III: Items of Mass Dysfunction

By : MarikIshtar77
  • From YamiIshtar on January 06, 2009
    So will you spice it up a bit? And tell WHY exactly Malik and Ryou are like, not together anymore? [Can't be the gasoline in the bathtub soap scum ring of fire escapade.. D: That would like, suck ass.]
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  • From ANON - Not telling on January 06, 2009
    You know, I noticed something with this story.

    It's not as smut filled or as raunchy as the other two Hellraisers. Not only that, but what happened to using the Japanese name versions? And what happened to the relationship between Malik and Ryou? D:
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  • From ANON - BZ on November 26, 2008
    I love this trilogy, i had hoped there would be more bakura/atem action, i still have hope, even when they hate each other. it makes it all the better. cant wait til ur next update, ur an inspiring writer and i hope one day i can write a fanfic as good as urs.
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  • From ANON - JoyOfLife on August 17, 2008
    Hey there.... haven't been here in a looong time....
    I wish you would write more.... I hope you didn't give up on the story cause I really love Hellraisers - read them all... I like everything, the story line, the style, the charachters.... the lemons....
    Anyway.... I was just hopping for a new chapter soon... *bows*
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  • From synthetikmancer on September 28, 2007
    o_o You live! Even if only sorta somewhat. That's better than a lot can say.

    I'd been thinking of you because you came up randomly in my head and I was all like.. Yeh! ...It kind of ended there. So I decided to reread some of your fiction, which the last few days was spent doing that.

    I've been rather busy myself so I know even if kinda slightly what you mean. >.>;; But still, you have some pretty amazing shit there. I'm hoping I can get around to writing some more... and hopefully I'll finish some old worthless shit... and maybe make it better. Fuck if I know it will work.

    Either way. ..It's always amazing. And maybe I'll somehow find you later. It'd be fun, at least. Later.
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  • From ANON - Jeda on July 05, 2007
    o thank jesus u updated. u kno every tyme u don't update a piece of my heart dies. i'm on a fucking respirator now. i'm so happy u updated. i liked this chapter (i like every chapter of every fic u ever made anyway). with all the mysterious things going on and stuff, it jus makes this fic even more entertaining. awesome work yet again. NOW PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE AT LEAST BY LIKE THE NEXT WEEK (OR TOMORROW)!! i'll send u flowers *pouts*

    Much Luv From Nyc~.~.~.~.~.~.~.~
    lil mIss drAMa QUEEN
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  • From ANON - Switch on July 04, 2007
    AWESOME! thats a great way to start off my night of drinking love. give me new hellraisers and a shot and I'm fucking ready to go *kisses* love ya!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 16, 2007
    yay! you updated!!!!! I love your work!
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  • From Kipcha92 on April 27, 2007
    Ahhhhhhhh... This is getting so annoying, it's drivin' me crazy! It's a good story and all, but I think you've added WAY too many things and separate scenes that gets confusing and hectic. You should try and link everything together, otherwise it's just boring. Also I noticed in HRI AND HRII that Malik and Ryou had a bond; but they were separated due to problems and went their separate ways with their darker halves as stated in the first chapter PF HRIII. When they were reunited, I was disappointed to find out that Malik and Ryou had not only become apart, but seemed to share no mutual interest for each other. =/ Yeah, and since that's my all time favorite couple, it hurt meh so. ;-; And Marik and Bakura... And what about Bakura and Yugi? You're separating them all way too much. @_@ Somehow bring it together. The hints that you give intentionally or unintentionally such as (in chapter V) Bakura slipping his arm around Marik's waist and then not giving any more information or continuing what could have happened from that is really tedious and I found myself groaning in frustration at the hints you give and not continuing good ideas. You should DEFINATELY have Mal and Ry back together; there were so many good moments where they could have talked with each other and caught up with things. It still seems as though Malik has some feelings for Ryou, judging by his concern in the previous chapter (IV) of Ryou getting run over by Bakura. PLEASE, or deary PLEASE bring them together. I missed those two - it gave me an incentive to read. If you took some of these ideas into consideration, HR trilogy would be better. Quite personally I liked thed first two, and then when you came into the third there were new characters you added - not OCs, but Mai for example - and not elaborating on why Kaiba got a hard on from Mai when you gave me the impression he was gay. @___@ It's all kinda crazy, but if you link some stuff together it would be a lot better.

    AND FOR GOD'S SAKE, PLEASE OH PLEASE BRING RYOU AND MALIK TOGETHER!
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  • From ANON - bakurasgirl on March 30, 2007
    More Ishtar-Bakura madness....HORRAH! :) Well done. *claps*
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  • From Mistressswitch on March 29, 2007
    *sighs happily* I totally needed this tonight. its still brilliant love.
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  • From ANON - labyrinthgirl on December 22, 2006
    Your story is really good so far! A bit darker than the others... but still really really good. Bakura and Marik also seem a bit more off their rocker... I can't wait to read what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 24, 2006
    i'm glad to see your alive, just gotta say i luv ur fics girl!*claps* please update, i wnt t know whats the deal wit the girl( and for the bishies to hump somemore, lol)
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  • From ANON - Suicide on September 23, 2006
    More..... more.....more ..... more.....MORE......MORE.... MOOOOOOOOREEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!

    *falls on knees* PLEASE MORE!!!


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  • From ANON - Switch on September 15, 2006
    Love I've missed you. thank you for the new chapter you have made my day
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