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Reviews for The Jungle

By : hatochiisai
  • From Tenshi on May 06, 2006
    Poor Malik. Now he's getting turned into a hybrid.
    Somehow I don't see how this story can have a happy ending.
    Unless there isn't one at all.
    Oh well. Great chapter! Loves it *hearts*
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  • From ANON - e.t.c. on May 05, 2006
    Great story!
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  • From ANON - sglily on May 05, 2006
    Such a nice, long chapter! So much going on. My head is spinning! It is really sad to see how Ryou is digressing and how Pegasus is just a horrid ass to him. I am not a fan of Yami but I did enjoy the section where Yami interrupted the meeting to check on Ryou. Ryou admitted that he is losing more of himself the longer he is away from Marik. I was surprised that he is still dreaming of Marik and that he told Yami he still wanted to be with Marik. Does Ryou really have feelings for Pegasus or is it all an act so he isn't considered a "bad bunny" and consequently punished? I've been wondering that since Pegasus "mated" with Ryou bunny and Ryou bunny was having conflicting emotions since he had bonded with his first mate - Marik. And now, Malik is kidnapped thanks to Pegasus. It just keeps getting uglier... ; ) This wasn't what I had in mind when in DEMANDED that the Ryou Bunny be made happy by the way! ; ) Great chapter!
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  • From Tenshi on April 30, 2006
    Poor Ryou-chan; I really hope he gets saved - Pegasus is such a meany.
    Evil Pegsy. *shakes fist*

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  • From ANON - jenn on April 30, 2006
    hey that chappie was awsome!!!! hope to read another soon
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  • From ANON - Syra on April 30, 2006
    Oh! You have made me hate Pegasus so much! XD I mean honestly, he is such a sadistic man (though thats not always a bad thing). I can't help but hope for the fluff at the end, and i know that the thing that is feeling bad has to me Marik. He's devoted to him, and i refuse to listen to anything else. Hopefully Pegasus gets his, and please, update more!
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  • From ANON - sglily on April 29, 2006
    Jesus. Marik needs to move his lion ass and find the fucking Ryou bunny already and stop feeling sorry for himself, damn it! You guys had a line or two in the chapter featuring the vet scene where Pegasus was thinking to himself that seeing Ryou all bound up on the vet table so upset was arousing. Sick fuck! Should have seen this one coming a mile away! AH! I see that Ryou bunny is going to be at the sick fuck's mercy... I don't like seeing (well, reading about) Ryou bunny being abused... it's too sad... Make the Ryou bunny happy! Happy, I say!
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  • From ANON - sglily on April 25, 2006
    Wow... you guys are back with a vengence, eh? ; ) Nice chapter... even though it was Ryou-less... damn it! ; ) Poor Marik pining for his Ryou bunny... and you teases! We have to find out through little snippets of the big First Time between Ryou and Marik through abuse from Malik? Mean! So mean! Malik's seduction of Bakura was interesting! I guess Malik his heavily into skunks... well, I guess the skunk was in him. Whatever! Nice!
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  • From ANON - RG on April 24, 2006
    that was a great chapter happy to see this story again, and as always its realy good cant wait for the next chappie.

    P.S. glad ur back
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 08, 2006
    Marik and Ryou for eveah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love touvh that stars, The Jungle, and Tearing down the sky.
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  • From ANON - Drago on February 07, 2006
    Wait...hate to be picky but wasn't the name of the bird, Anzu, not Tea? Well at least she died.
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  • From ANON - inuficcrzy on February 04, 2006
    wow. just finally caught up with all the new chapters, and i'm so impressed with how this is going! this story is amazing!

    will any other characters show up? and will they be able to put a stop to the hybrid business? please, you can't let that sort of thing continue! its too inhumane!

    and for the love of god, post another chap soon! i'm dying of suspense here!
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  • From ANON - ladywolfTerri on February 04, 2006
    Okay....didn't like Peggy before... now just LOATHE him!!!....>.
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  • From ANON - sglily on February 03, 2006
    Wow... three chapters! And the suspense continues... as does the heartbreak and whatnot. Everything was written very well as usual. The scenes with Malik, Marik, and Bakura are pretty funny. The scenes with Ryou have been tragic, frightening, abusive - emotionally and physically, well... just basically fucked up for the poor little bunny. If he makes it out of this one alive - because we all know that Marik HAS to rescue him... right? RIGHT? ; ) Continuing with that thought... if he makes it out he is going to be one little messed up bunny rabbit. The vet bit was horrifying. I kept picturing my poor cat on the stainless steel freezing cold tables with her fur shedding like mad and her long busy black tail tucked between her legs scared shitless. Poor Ryou bunny... make him better... please? Great job, dears!
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  • From ANON - Arya on February 02, 2006
    Damn it this so sad*sobs*make Ryou happy pwease *sobs*
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