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Reviews for The Jungle

By : hatochiisai
  • From ANON - Amethyst on February 01, 2006
    Hi there! Love the story, but just a question. Are the hybrids as tall as their former human sizes? Or are they as tall or a bit taller as the animals they represent? Just to get a good view in my mind! ^_^
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  • From ANON - PxC on January 31, 2006
    My god - you have made my week with chapter 11. XD It's the first decent 'HawtPegaText!' I've read in like, four months. *_*; [ I suspose I should sit down, and force myself to write something snazzy to keep me content, but I just lack the tallent of making text godly like you, and most of the people here on AFF. ;_; ]
    Lord, I swear that little, single sentence, where Pegasus 'touched himself,' generally made me fall over with mad, fangirlish nosebleeds. ._.;; lol. X3
    Um...yea... >_>;
    Because you have gotten a good 70+ reviews for this well-deserving fic, and most likely will never read this, Just incase of the sight off-chance that you do, I just want to say; "keep it up!" and "You are my savior~!! ^o^/" [ For I go into Pegasus-secks withdrawl if I don't get atleast a little dose of it every frew months. ._.; lol. ]
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  • From ANON - sglily on January 30, 2006
    Two words... disturbingly sexy. Ugh. The whole good bunny... let's fuck bunny was just sexy and yet disturbing. Sexy, that Ryou was so horned out and wanted a mate so badly and was willing to give himself over to Pegasus... it definitely wasn't rape which is nice to see. Disturbing as Ryou began to have second thoughts and Pegasus is just so... ew. Bakura getting an erection looking through a PlayBoy was just hysterical! And then Marik... go in the bathroom and take care of that thing! Oh, Lord! Too funny! Good job and looking forward to so much more!
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  • From ANON - ladywolfTerri on January 30, 2006
    Wow... well written as usual but damn were those chapters fucked up!!!

    Yami isn't as mad at Seto.... and Seto treating him like a person rather than an animal is really nice... as well aspromising to bring Yugi over. I wonder if Seto won't use some of his money and influence to shut down Dai... permanetly! and then help the people to recover as much of their humanity as possible...

    Marik and Kura are doing better... I like how Malik is helping them without them realizing it... that is very nice! As well as the fact that they saved Malik like that and won over Ishizu.

    okay... now the long part... odd how I don't normally leave long posts... but lots of questions this time...^^;;

    Something that had me wondering... Marik or Malik doesn't have the Rod... Yugi and Yami don't have the puzzle... this is definately an AU story so why does Peggy have the eye??

    another thing... now that Ryou has realized it was Peggy that ordered him is he going to put the rest of the pieces into place??... I would be very disappointed if he didn't... I mean not only the fact that Peggy was the one who ruined his life not only before, by having him kidnapped... but was also obviously the one that had Marik killed and had been playing some sick, twisted game with his mind ever since bringing him home...

    Also... I seriously hope someone rescues him from Peggy soon!!... Seto has the power to back him in a corner and win....but Ryou seems to be losing his mind and personality more and more each day... how could he ever find his way back to himself if Peggy completely breaks him?!!

    Alright... enough for now...Keep up the great work and please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - E.T. on January 26, 2006
    I'm loving this fic! I cannot wait for you to update it.
    I love the song you put in Brothers under the sun. It's my favourite song from Spirit, I'm glad someone else knows it!!
    So keep up the fantastic work! I especially love Bakura-skunk and Ryou-bunny. Are you going to do anything on their families? Like Yugi, or Ryou's father and how they're coping? Sorry this review is getting longer than I expected, so please update soon and you're doing a great job with it!!! :)
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  • From ANON - DJE on January 24, 2006
    I'm so happy with the way you wrote that chaper.! for a while i was daydreamin of what you'd write and to be hobnest it wasn't what i expected- it was ten times better! Oh by the way, I really think that peggsy shoud try spanking ryou,. it might get him to cooperate a litle better. Well cont wait untill you wrie the next chaper. I'm looking forward to it.

    DeathJunk-E


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  • From Drago on January 23, 2006
    I can't belive Seto made Yami a bird! LOL!
    Poor Ryou, Rex is soo mean!

    Keep up the good work!

    Drago
    (aka Kovu on ff.net))
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  • From ANON - sglily on January 23, 2006
    Another good chapter although I am not liking Ryou getting the crap beat out of him. I know, I know... it's for a reason but... And what the hell is with Marik? Why isn't he going frantic looking for his bunny??? I want to smack him upside his doofus lion skull! ; ) Making him go searching for his bunny... please? ; ) Don't you just love the demanding bitch reviewers? I love Malik's sister in this story... so angry! You go, girl! And Bakura calling her "hot"... I had to chuckle at that. Love the story and waiting patiently (sort of...) for more!
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  • From NiuTheDarkOne on January 23, 2006
    Poor Ryou . It had me crying and I’m not one to so easily . You portray Ryou’s emotions wonderfully in your stories . I’ve been a fan for a while and this is definitely one of my favs that you’ve done .

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  • From ANON - SpiritDancer1 on January 22, 2006
    Whoo! You GO Yami! I loved Yami's speech to Kaiba about it being wrong to change people into hybrids for their own selfish purposes. Eveything he said was SO COOL! Also cool was Malik's speech to Marik and Bakura about their humanity. Ack, poor Ryou though, being so confused. I loved that he fought Rex though, I was hoping he would. I also hope Ryou eventually finds out Pegasus was the one that ordered him. He SO needs to know that before he actually starts LIKING Pegasus (eww, bad thought, very bad thought). Oh, and thank you for killing Anzu in an earlier chapter--she's just so much FUN to destroy! ;)
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  • From ANON - ladywolfTerri on January 22, 2006
    Damn! Poor Ryou!!! I'm surprised that Yami didn't throw the question at Seto of how Mokie would feel if that had been done to him instead of Yami...I wonder how long until Malik helps Marik and Kura rescue Ryou though?... Please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - kay on January 16, 2006
    eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitloveitLOVEIT!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anira_Oceanfang on January 15, 2006
    Hey! Finally! the update! Sorry about not reviewing as often but school and home work are killing me this semester! Very good though and update agin soon!
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  • From ANON - SpiritDancer1 on January 14, 2006
    I aboslutely adore this story and can't get enough of it! I'm so glad you're back from break! Pegasus is the high mighty king of mega-jerks, I would SO love it if Marik bit off his -ahem- for being such an ass to Ryou. Oh, and could something horribly painful and crippling happen to Rem? I think I hate that bitch nearly as much as Ryou does. Seriously though, this is a spectacular story, I can't tell you how happy I am when I see a new chapter up. Please keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - sglily on January 13, 2006
    You're back! And in a big way! Loved the chapter... I especially loved Malik's sister's reaction to Marik! Priceless! So much going on... Bakura breaking out... that was funny with Yami egging him on. Marik meeting up with Malik... always an interesting pair. Oh, the suspense of it all! Ryou with Pegasus... gag! It's getting ugly, too. Pegasus is surely not going to like it when he finally beds the bunny and finds that Ryou isn't liking it one little bit. Loved Malik's reaction to Marik "ruining" the bunny! Oh, God! Too funny! Any plans to flashback and show that lovely bit of the lion and bunny getting it on? Aw... come on! Lovely chapter and well worth the wait! Welcome back, love!
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