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By : hatochiisai
  • From ANON - Drago on January 13, 2006
    Great chapter. i still think it would be funny if Joey got turned in to a dog.....
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  • From ANON - Yamisgirl13 on January 13, 2006
    Apology accepted. I didn't take it personally so don't worry yourself too much over it. Great story by the way. I've been waiting for the update on this story. It's fantastic. Pegasus is a real ass, Malik is sweet, and Ishizu is a bit of a wimp. I adore this story. Bakura was right, Rem is evil. I hope you can update soon. I can't wait for the next chapter.

    Yamisgirl13
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  • From ANON - ladywolfTerri on January 13, 2006
    Great chapter!! I can't wait to see if Kura and Marik track down Ryou!!! and how Malik will react to seeing Bakura!!...^^
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  • From ANON - OsaP on January 05, 2006
    sooo, first off i love this fic to death. ^_^ secondly i'm not a big fan of ryou/marik or kaiba/yami. actually i very much dislike the latter, but this fic is too damn good to not read! i think i dislike the fact Pegasus is eerily involved more than anything, but that's why i love this fic. there's a butt-load of conflict and less than a week has transpired during Ryou's time at the pet shop. the whole idea for this fic is very unique. sure, ppl do the whole 'anime charas as animals' thing, but the reason for it is usually magic of somesort or falling into an accursed spring or something of that nature. not only do you two wunnerful authors explain how it happened using much more believable circumstances, but you weave in the fact that such circumstances are very much illegal and should be revealed to the public lest more innocents be kidnapped. and i should hate Pegasus, i really should, but i can't cuz he's taken such good care of Ryou ubt it's his fault the poor boy's in this mess to begin with. >_< gah! nothing's black and white in this fic! that's why i'm so friggin excited about the whole thing! on a b aser note, i like the animals you chose for everyone. i think Ryou makes a perfect rabbit and Bakura an adorably pissy skunk. Marik being a gentle lion just seems to work as well. Yami as a bird... *snickers* appropriate, but amusing nonetheless.

    in all honesty i wasn't going to touch this fic. EVER. it made me a bit nervous to say the least. however, i needed a 'hatochiisai fix' and just about the only thing i hadn't read was this. now i'm very pleased. :] so pleased that i had to tell my friend all about this fic and just how great it is. she hates YGO fiction for the most part, but every time i tell her about one of hato's fics she gets all excitable. aiya, i just can't fully express how much i love this fic. you two should collaborate all the time. for the rest of your lives. please? *puppy dog eyes* oh my. i'm being a fangirl. >_>

    keep up the good work you two!
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  • From ANON - jenn on January 03, 2006
    please post chapter 8? the suspence is driving me NUTS! pleasepleaseplease!?
    thank u

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  • From ANON - Christina on December 20, 2005
    Oh my gosh!!! I was just about ready to cry when I thought Marik was about to be put down. Grrr....Pegasus. >_< We otta put HIM down!!!
    I really loved the chapter and this story is sooooooo good!! I love the MarikRyou pairing. Anyways, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - sglily on December 20, 2005
    Evil... just evil... ; ) Nice chapter, by the way! In all of its evilness... Ryou is just so damn cute. Bullied into saying he is a bunny and nothing but a bunny. Marik still so protective... I take it by your last sentence during the kissing thing that something indeed happened between the two during the night... hubba hubba lion and little naughty bunny! I found that hilarious that Ryou was 'programmed' to bond with the first one to mate with him... even more funny that it wasn't going to Pegasus. It was funny until the command to kill Marik was issued. And more screwing with Ryou's head! His owner didn't want him! Nice trick, Peg 'ole boy. You are evil. Lovely evil. Enough ranting. I hope that you are enjoying your Christmas holidays! Have a wonderful break... and then get back to work and update your fictions! ; ) Merry Christmas, love...
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  • From inuficcrzy on December 20, 2005
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    YOU CAN'T DO THIS!!! PLEASE !!!!!! YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE IT HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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  • From inuficcrzy on December 20, 2005
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    YOU CAN'T DO THIS!!! PLEASE !!!!!! YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE IT HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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  • From ANON - RabidSqurl (log in? hah!) on December 19, 2005
    *wipes away all the tears* Man, this is one real waterworks. Addicting too. I'm really enjoying this; angst is wonderful and yet so hard to deal with at the same time. You really capture the despair here.
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  • From ANON - Drago on December 18, 2005
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You can't kill Marik!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Look! I reviewed! Please be nice!!!!!!!!!!!

    Although I can't see Pegasus doing something like that, but I'm not the writter.....
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  • From ANON - Yamisgirl13 on December 18, 2005
    Yeah that was an evil cliffie. I love this story. Please don't kill Marik. I love him too ya know. Update when you can please.

    Yamisgirl13
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  • From ANON - Kidea on December 18, 2005
    Noooo you can't!! T.T I can't belive you're leaving me! I love this fanfic! It gave me inspiration to write my random fanfic! Oh please update as soon as you get back. Oh I think I'm gonna cry. I haven't read any of your other fanfics except the one shot ones and I love them all! I think you should become a professional...I must sound like such a suck. Sorry, but it's true I think Your fanfics are really awesome!

    Oh last time my email didn't com up so I'll put it here.

    snake_boy_ayame@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - Adoring Reader on December 17, 2005
    I love this story, I can't get enough of the way you write the characters and the plot lines you come up with. However as per your A/N at the bottom of the most recent chapter I can't help but get a little annoyed. Why is it that you say you will not update this story if we do not read and review your other stories? I don't like stories with Seto as the main character and I don't want to read about your OC so why should myself and the readers of this story be punished because your other readers won't review? And why are you threatening for reviews in the first place? If this was all a joke and you meant it sarcastically then I'm sorry for thinking other wise, but I'd hate to think that this story, one that I love so much, would be put on hiatus because I didn't read your other stories. Do you see why that wouldn't be right? ( Please also understand that this is all supposed to come out in the nicest, most gentle tone I can muster. ^^; )

    Either way I adore this story and implore you to update soon! What an deliciously evil cliffhanger but that is just another part of your writing that I
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  • From ANON - PxC on December 17, 2005
    ...Why do I so desire for Pegasus-sama to 'mate' the little Baku-bunnie...? O_x;;; *is such a freaky...freak* XD
    ...Or just Pegasus obsessed. >_>; lol
    Godly story! Keep up the good work! ^^
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