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Reviews for The Jungle

By : hatochiisai
  • From ANON - sglily on December 07, 2005
    You know, it dawned on me that I reviewed your lovely story here pre-disaster at AFF so here's to another attempt! May it stick this time and stick good! ; ) Damn it! I have no idea what the hell I wrote previously but I am still captivated by this story. Anything in Ryou... I've gotta check it out! (You have to write another one with B/R, babe... gotta do it... they are just... right for each other. Did you ever think about a sequel to Tearing Down the Sky? LOVED that! Loved the two of them in that particular story as I did Wisdom Teeth and the Crave It... etc. stories... I've been secretly stalking you! ; ) ) ANYWAY... I love fluffy bunny Ryou. I like how he is slowly being attracted to Marik. I especially liked Marik protecting Ryou bunny when the monsters - I mean children - had their hands all over poor Ryou. Very nicely done. I am really frightened by what will happen since Ryou has been injected again for being a bad pet bunny... And a nice treat... two chapters at once! I saw your review of Rings and read you were to get snow... we are due for some in another day or so living in the NE section of the good ole' US. And thank you, dear... a very Merry Christmas to you as well if we don't get to chat again!
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  • From ANON - Galacia on December 07, 2005
    Okay this is getting good. Now as far as I can guess everyone is still human size but dressed like animals. Which makes me wonder about what parents would take their children to this type of place. unless they aren't naked when they are being played with by children. Yami did a nice job playing match maker though. Marik does seem to be head over paws for Ryou and Bakura well is being Bakura. I do hope Yami heard correctly about Marik that would be nice for both of them to leave that store together but I am doubting that is going ot happen. Seto and yami huh is seto going ot be an animal or a human?

    MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!

    Galacia
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  • From ANON - Hiira on November 26, 2005
    Wow, while I was not here you updated 2 chapters! Amazing! And Guess what is more amazing, your new chapters!! I loved it! I felt a lot of pity on ryou, and had to laugh and pity bakura at same time. And marik is so nice to ryou isn't he? Those parts were so adorable! Love everything! Although ryou is my favorite character I can't wait until I see yugi (or was it yami?) and pegasas again. hope you have a nice day.

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  • From Tenshi on November 24, 2005
    Wonderful chapter! It's such a sad story, but deals with issues about humanity and what it means to be human. It's just such a great and sad story.
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  • From ANON - Kiharu on November 23, 2005
    I absolutely love your fic! Ryou is so cute! And the fact you made Bakura a skunk; that had me hyperventilating, I was laughing so hard~! Marik does make a very good lion.... ^_^ Hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - Bombay-chan on November 21, 2005
    WONDERFUL story! I'm terribly frightened now though.... T_T Wah, poor Ryou-sama! Those people are so MEAN!!!!! I wanna march in that shop and give them a talking to! So mean.... That can't be legal.... Um... I know this is probably horribly rude, but might it be possible if I used this plot and some of the details of the medical junk/transformation process for a manga/comic? I'll make sure I put "Based on Hatociisai's fanfic 'The Jungle'." Would that be alright with you? Or am I being too forward? *nervous* Ah, great story! ^_^ *gives cookies* Yay Hato-sama! Keep writing more please? Ja'ne!
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  • From ANON - DemonicMistreessKree-KUn on November 20, 2005
    I forgot if it was on fanfiction or adulf fan but now i relize it's on both most joyous any who~

    I enjoyed this chapter as much as the last two and wonder why chouldn't bakura pick a more femine name i mean he's the one humping the damn thing not the other way around! and how would you punish a skunk?

    that's all i love it continue i'll be waiting for the update this is the only fic i've read for the past week inexperenced writes fustrate me and especially when they for get about the space bar so frequently.

    Kree-Kun
    Oh if you see any good fics out there drop me a line
    DeathJunkE@aol.com

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  • From itsallgood on November 20, 2005
    Interesting concept. I've seen the hybrid thing done once before, but you've really turned on the tears and angst with this one. I like it for that, the raw emotion and all.

    I'm confused though - they are part animal, part human on the OUTSIDE too, right? Or are they human minds in the bodies of animals? Sometimes it seems one way, sometimes the other.
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  • From ANON - sglily on November 19, 2005
    Well... I don't know where to start! Intriguing story... Ryou as a cute fluffy white bunny complete with tail and perky ears! Awwww! Does he have whiskers? Can't you just see little scrunched up bunny nose and whiskers twitching with... irritation at this point for Ryou is confused, and rightfully pissed! I don't like to see Ryou tortured, and to think that he was kidnapped and turned into someone's pet is disturbing to say the least. And Pegasus... ew... having his evil hands and evil way with the cute little bunny. Did I say 'ew'? Oh yeah, I did but... EW! And Marik... I am curious... if Ryou can throw food over the enclosure and if he can heave a fuck toy over... can he throw himself to the lion(s)? I find it interesting that the woman handler/keeper told Marik that Ryou is already spoken for and will not be around much longer so to basically not get attached. Hmm... Bunny... liking the bunny. Liking the story! You go, Girls!
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  • From ANON - ladywolfTerri on November 19, 2005
    Alright, sat down and read the first three chapters!! Very good and highly disturbing!! I wonder if Ryou will figure out that "hands" is Peggy and how he will handle that?? Please update soon!!

    Also wondering if Marik is going to try to get into Ryou's cage? I mean jumping or using his "tree" to gain the extra height?? Just curious..^^;
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  • From ANON - sesshomarusgirl56 on November 19, 2005
    Your story is really good! I do have a few questions though. How big are Ryou and all the other pets...are the human size? And are thier cages life sized? Also are the hybrid pets legal and normal in thier society?
    Please update soon though!
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  • From ANON - bishiekeeper on November 18, 2005
    Yay! You updated! Cheers!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sharpie on November 18, 2005
    Hn. I'm actually eager to see Malik and Yami. =

    I was also a bit humiliated when I read over the mouse bit. I'm not sure why. It just seemed awkward, which is probably what you meant for it to be. Both of you are doing great, with the adorable bunny outfit, and all. The collar made me laugh. I'm just a sadistic fuck, even if it wasn't that bad. Love.
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  • From ANON - bishiekeeper on November 16, 2005
    I Love you stories! Update soon
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  • From ANON - bishiekeeper on November 15, 2005
    Wahhhhhhh! Please update! I
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