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By : hatochiisai
  • From ANON - honeycharm on September 19, 2006
    I love this story and all, but when is Ryou going to want to leave Pegasus. He loves him and he's always fucking him, but does he still want Marik or Pegasus?
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  • From ANON - yunasgrace on September 18, 2006
    poor Malik but at least now he can finally be with Bakura. Pegasus seems like he's finally noticing Ryou's feelings. mayb they could share, pegasus and marik can have ryou 3 days a week each and for the last day they both have him XD
    i want another chappie... ill do anything but plz post another chappie. were comin near the end and your makin us wait plz plz plz poat another chappie ^^

    good luck
    yunasgrace
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  • From ANON - carol2flute on September 17, 2006
    oh,no!!!!!!!!!!!! i wanted to see pegasus have malik put under the loyality enhancements!!!!!!!!!!! i was so excited then they stopped him!!!!!!!!! Why!!!!!!!!!!!!!!why,i say!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bu ti love ur story! u have excellent writing skills. i love the story and i will keep reading it. and the sequel! but why did u cut that part!!!!!!! that was the best!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - jess on September 17, 2006
    yay!! another chapter. this is the bestest story ever and i hope pegasus realizes what he's doing is wrong and everyone can get along together eventually. update soon
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  • From ANON - Camille on September 17, 2006
    Please say that Pegasus will give him up willingly? His father reported him missing and he knows how much crap he can get into over it. Sigh...
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  • From ANON - carol on September 16, 2006
    don't try to e=mail me its busted, but i was wondering. pegasus had a loyal chip put in malik right? so how is it affected? does he have to do the same thing to malik he does to ryou? or is it different?
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  • From ANON - soulless on September 16, 2006
    hey, very good chapters and all. i love it so far. but i have to ask you something. i know that ryou and marik will be together in the end and that pegasus will leave ryou alone. i can feel it. but i'm just wongering...please tell me there done with the suicide attempts! i was just told today that my best friend took a lot of pills and tried to kill herself. i want to keep reading this story, i love it, but i can't if there is going to be more of that. so please tell me, like at the beginning or end of the next chapter you update if there will be more then this or not. thank you. P.S. i hope marik get's better soon, and malik and ryou. they deserve it.
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  • From ANON - Galacia and dark pearl on September 16, 2006
    I don't believe this! It is absolutely FREAKIN FANTASTIC PLEASE LET THERE BE MORE!!!!

    galacia: please stop yelling at the nice people, Dark pearl they can tell you like it.

    Darkpearl sorry but DAMN it's all so good! I bet Seto has to sign the lease and all that because hybrids are considered property and all that.

    galacia: Probably but he would do it. Let's see Duke, (sorry can't spell the japanese one for the life of me)
    Mako, hey is mai one I don't remember seeing her name but weevil is and Rex are, and of course the other four who are connected.

    Dark pearl: Okay how pissed do you think Malik's sister is going to be when she finds out her brother is a hybrid? Anyone? she's probably going to sue peguasus for custody of him. or something.

    galacia: Maybe. but again the whole not human thing which is how pegusus is getting away with screwing Ryou
    he's only 17 the pervert. I mean sheesh wait till he's consenting and legal or something but that is just wrong.

    Dark Pearl: Because he wasn't legal?

    Galacia: that could be forgiven if he didn't use the chemical coctail to get ryou. it's as bad as giving someone a date rape drug as far as I can see except if you screw em not only do they rememeber it they think they love you and want you to keep doing it.

    dark pearl true okay brighter topics?

    Galacia: I guess I love the whole thing with poor kaiba having all these hybrid's plus a teen living with him and trying to deal with it all. I also think the club was a great idea.

    Dark pearl me to definately want to see more so is that it?

    Galacia: other than the whole I am glad Rem is being seen in a whole new light she was kinda of so so in the begining but she obviously seems to care about the creatures that are in her care. She isn't mean really if she could change them she would but she's left with finding them homes so she does. I don't know it's obvious
    she would do anything for Bakura and Marik. if they asked so the hybrid's happiness does seem important to her.

    Well that's it for now more please!
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  • From ANON - miku on September 15, 2006
    wow, I can't wait to see how this ends. I loved Yami's attitude to Seto in the last few paragraphs, it had me in stitches. xx
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  • From ANON - sglily on September 15, 2006
    And the fun continues... Whose brain dead idea was it to mix prey with predators with only a few "handlers" in attendance during the seminar? It was rather amusing. It was almost like a buffet line for the side with canines wasn't it? ; ) Glad to see Malik and Ryou friendly again for the most part. Those two go at each other's throats like a couple of wild animals at times... ; ) Rem has really come through as the mother figure in this story, hasn't she? Tough love! She "smacked" Marik back into shape. The phone call between Marik and Ryou seemed to do the trick. I wonder how Marik plans to get Ryou (and Malik) away from Pegasus especially if you "only" have 2 more chapters to go! Well, at least Marik and Bakura have their little Love Shack ready to go for their more submissive mates... The story only gets better!
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  • From ANON - K.C on September 14, 2006
    I HATE PEGASES!!!!!!I can't believe he could be such a bastard!!! Ryou can't forget Marik!!! I want to kill that stupid white haired freak *the evil one not Ryou* !!!!!!!!! Add more soon I love you girl!!!
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  • From ANON - jess on September 14, 2006
    yay another chapter!!! i wuv dis story tons!!! update soon and make sure it ends with a happy ending
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on September 14, 2006
    ....**Stares** bwahahahahahaha...oh my lord. I cannot stop laughing, really that ending was just too funny. More than made up for the earlier bucketfulls of angst. Just...hahahaha. Okay I'm about done. But I do have to agree with Yami, us English make awesome beds. Now to get the weather sorted out and we're an all round fabulous country.

    Malik and Ryou made up!! Under rather dire circumstances but it all came out the way I wanted so its okay. Though Pegasus is going to freak because I have a feeling its going to go downhill for him soo. How are ya gonna do that anyway, hmm I guess I'll find out soon.

    Excellant chappie as ever!
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  • From ANON - sglily on September 11, 2006
    Now there was a scary chapter! So many emotions running through it. Malik hopeful at the beginning of the chapter and then turned suicidal by the end. Talking to Marik didn't seem to trigger anything resembling mate-like behavior in Ryou. If anything, the Ryou bunny was steadfast in denying the lion and making Marik understand that he (Marik) needed to move on. And, shit, did Marik fall apart! What a train wreck that was! In the meantime, Ryou happy as the whore bunny he is frolicks in the mud with his whoremaster seemingly already over his "heartbreak". Wow. We all know there is more to it than that but in a nutshell... my head is spinning at the possibilities! You have a lot of loose ends to tie up in three (count'em three!) chapters, love!

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  • From ANON - Velvetina on September 11, 2006
    200th reviewer! Yay me! He.

    Oh my. What an angst filled chapter **Sniff** How sad, so my potential deaths but so far everyone is alive. Just about. Argh, as much as I don't want to I cannot help but like Pegasus in this fic, the more of it I read the more I like him. I'm a deranged person I know.

    Only three more chapters to go? Woah, thats kinda cool but what is going to happen in those three chapters? So much could happen and I don't know what. More soon, please! Lol, I know I've gotta wait a week. **sigh** I'll keep the images of a muddy Ryou bunny in my head to keep me happy for now.
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