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By : hatochiisai
  • From ANON - sglily on June 02, 2006
    I love the frisky Ryou bunny! Scampering all over and excited about Malik coming home... until Malik starts getting some attention from Pegasus... hmm... For some reason, I like it when Ryou bunny has his little hissy fits and strikes out. There is a backbone lurking underneath that soft bunny flesh after all! Malik is learning to be rather slick, eh? Sly as a fox... and then some! It seems that Malik has his work cut out for him trying to undo the brainwashing that has taken hold over the Ryou bunny... The woodPECKER and woody references were rather funny! Nice chapter!
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  • From ANON - RabidSqurl on June 02, 2006
    @_@...wow. I am overwhelmed by the amazing fantasticness of this story.

    *drools over your talent*

    Not fair. I want to write better. XD

    Awesome work; I'm enjoying it very, very, very much.
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  • From ANON - Itavita on June 02, 2006
    Whee, an update! :D *snuggles*

    Poor Ryou, he's so confuzzled. :( He still knows Marik cares about him, but can't understand why he's so attached to Pegasus. Hopefully he finds out about the whole 'programming' he was given when he was morphed into a hybrid. That would probably shed some light on a few things.

    Can't wait to read more!
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  • From Tenshi on June 02, 2006
    ugh; I'm off schedule, haven't been able to read or review any fics in sometime.
    I'm so happy this is taking a more positive. It's always nice when there's hope.
    I'm also glad Malik's taking his change well.
    I bet it would be adorable to see pictures of them all as hybrids.
    Great chapter ^_^
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  • From ANON - e.t.c. on May 31, 2006
    a very consistent writer
    cheers
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  • From ANON - lokivsanubis on May 31, 2006
    loving this story more and more. hope you update soon.

    Will Ryou's brain washing cause them a lot of problems later on? Will Marik ever be happy? What about Malik and Bakura... Poor fellows. And you wanna make Seto's hair blue? Interesting.... (imagines Seto being attacked by a flock of pigions... Yami to the rescue!) LOL. Update soon. I wanna know what happens to Ryou. One more thing. Will there be a Pegasus/Malik or a Pegasus/ Ryou/ Malik? Or any NC between either of the two?
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  • From ANON - Itavita on May 30, 2006
    xD I'll have you know I hurried my ass along in finishing up my typing of ch 5 of Fate tonight just so I could read this and your other updated stories. I'm glad I did. *jigs*

    Go Marik! Finally, someone kicked Rex's smart ass. Oh, and Malik almost biting Pegasus on the behind was just priceless. Too bad Ryou defended his 'mate.' :(

    Hope to see Ryou happy soon and AWAY from Pegasus. Something tells me after a couple bouts of sex with Pegasus, he could use a good lion lay. xP
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  • From ANON - sglily on May 29, 2006
    Well lookie what I found tonight! Thank you for updating so quickly and with another lovely chapter! I've told you before that I dislike Yami... but my goodness! You two have really made him QUITE the character! He is really funny and even more of a brilliant smart ass! He was cracking me up. And the cock references... too beautiful for words. Poor Bakura... man, you guys are really abusing the hell out of him! I think I won't be sitting for a week after reading what befell our lovely skunk... Damn! OUCH! The whole Ryou being there and Marik watching him on a security monitor was just so sad. Poor Ryou bunny! However, I wanted to slap him up alongside his silly bunny head when he thwarted Malik's attempt at ass munching on Pegasus... Good chapter! Thank you for clarifying the hand motion thingie. I got it now! And hey... make the Ryou bunny happy... : )
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  • From ANON - isis53421 on May 29, 2006
    a verry good story. i never review, but for you i will!
    I love the bunny!!!
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  • From ANON - PxC on May 28, 2006
    ...?!
    You're done with this, and have only been posting one chapter a week?!
    DAAAA. *Dies*


    I know it's the most sensible and fair thing in the world to do, and I'd do it as well, if I was in your position...But can you maybe post another, some time soon, if I beg really, really hard, and buy you a Baku plushie..?
    XD

    Honestly, it's deserving every review it gets, and is going swimmingly!
    I'm a little saddened to hear that Pegasus isn't going to become a hybrid, but ahwell. This fiction really isn't about Pegasus, anyway, so I should just give up. XD
    [ Honestly, I’m both amazed and ‘appalled’ at how mesmerically you write him - you capture his childish side very well, but for obvious reasons, you ‘merge’ his childish aspects with his darker tendencies, to make him truly horrifying at times. To me, he seems like a malicious ten-year-old with a magnifying glass couched over an ant hill. *_*; Honestly, I get chills some times reading your Pegasus. XD ]

    Um, anyway, I still love you, and am looking forward to each, and every upcoming chapter!!
    [ I promise to stop ranting about Pegasus-sama now. >_>; ]
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  • From ANON - Istalindir on May 27, 2006
    Is everything going to turn out okay for Ryou and co.? Please, please say yes!! >.
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  • From ANON - Camille on May 26, 2006
    I could see Ryo and Malik taking down Pegasus if they went after the doc like that. Of course, they would be wanted by the police. Somehow it needs to come out that humans are being turned into hybirds. I hope Seto steps up to it soon!
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  • From ANON - sglily on May 26, 2006
    Oh... my... good chapter. Wow. OK, it is creeping me out that Pegasus is suggesting a threesome... he and Ryou together is just WRONG as it is... adding another... GAH! I was really surprised that possessive, anal Pegasus would allow Ryou to stay overnight with Malik especially since Malik is screaming in his head about Marik and hates Pegasus so much. But, it did give a great opportunity for Malik and Ryou to try to bond. And then, Ryou contemplating helping Malik escape... What the hell is he thinking??? Pegasus would have done more than swat his ass for that one, I'm sure. Ryou going all feral an all to protect Malik was rather amusing. Pegasus punishing the poor Ryou bunny was not. I think I missed something because I didn't understand the motion Ryou made to Malik... gotta go back and reread that. Yeah, didn't think there would be bunions or the like in the story but it was a nicer way than saying FUCKING like rabbits, eh? ; ) Wow! Sequels to look forward to... many many sequels! COOL! You better make the Ryou bunny happy in THIS ONE THOUGH! ; ) Yes, bunny brain-washing... not a pretty picture. Looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - Devilsheart on May 26, 2006
    Poor ryou
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  • From ANON - yunasgrace on May 26, 2006
    i just LOVED Maliks first word XDDDD
    i want more... i wanna know how pegasus would treat him when he got him home.
    keep on writing
    good luck !!!!!
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