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Reviews for The Jungle

By : hatochiisai
  • From ANON - lokivsanubis on May 26, 2006
    Malik's first word as a hybred is 'Fucker,' very colorful... Anyway. I'm hoping for that Yami/Seto scene and does Yami have a beck? I don't remember what you said about Yami's facial apparence. I feel bad for Ryou again getting in trouble for acting out. And I hope Pegasus forgives him soon or they go back to that bondage room. Xp!
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  • From ANON - Itavita on May 26, 2006
    Man, Ryou is worse (brainwash wise) than Malik had ever expected. :( Peggy has him trained well.

    Glad to see Malik is finally getting his sense back. Hopefully soon he breaks out and goes to reunite with Marik and Bakura. Hybrid smex! xD
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  • From ANON - Sakura on May 25, 2006
    Must do more! Must continue writting! Mustn't stop posting chapies! Must stop talking this way! This story is top knotch, easily my fav by far. I love the plot and i freaked out completely when you had Malik kidnapped as well. I would enjoy it if Pegesus died a horrible death or was made into a hybrid. Anyway please continue, it's so good i want to read more.
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  • From ANON - sglily on May 23, 2006
    Malik is so fiesty! I hope that he remains that way, too! Someone needs to teach Pegasus a lesson and so far, it sure isn't going to be Ryou... And speaking of the Ryou bunny... he's becoming more and more bunnylike with each passing chapter. Poor baby! He needs his lion mate! Make the Ryou bunny happy! (I forgot to put my usual rant in my review last time so you girls will get it twice!) It seems that wacko Pegasus is as least being pleaant to the Ryou bunny... although he better keep his nasty mitts off the bunny! Make the Ryou bunny happy... throw him a lion! Let him escape down his rabbit hole! I'm babbling and ranting but don't mind me. Nice chapter. Creepy with the dolls/Malik/Pegasus storytime bit. Keep up the good work. But remember... happy thoughts... bunnies and lions making pretty little bunions? No! Uh... linnies? libbits? raions? Whatever... you get the picture! ; )
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  • From ANON - itavita on May 23, 2006
    Hope Malik doesn't lose his spunk. :p

    Oh, and Pegasus wasn't a complete asshole in this chapter. o.o That's strange...
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  • From ANON - e.t.c. on May 22, 2006
    Just another question
    Earlier you mentioned that the hybrids were normal sized. Meaning normal sized humans? or animals?
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  • From ANON - lokivsanubis on May 21, 2006
    I like this story so much. I can't wait to see what happens next. Will there be a Yami/Seto scene in the next chapter? I have been waiting so long for one?
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  • From ANON - Chibineko69 on May 20, 2006
    All I can say is.....WOW...not oh wow, just W.O.W. I don't read many Yugiho fics, but this one caught my interest, and I couldn;t stop reading it!!! I really hope that you update soon...oh by the way,m how does Yami perch? Does he squat at all?? Thanks for writing this!!! You[re doing a great job!!! ^_~
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  • From ANON - Devilsheart on May 18, 2006
    It appears Yami has no choice in the matter of being microchiped. Love the fic update soon
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  • From ANON - Same as above. on May 13, 2006
    Uh oh. Homepage of Hato Chiisai be'z not able to being founded.
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  • From ANON - Melon on May 13, 2006
    Oh baby. PUMP IT UP, PUMP IT PUMP IT. IT'S HYBRID TIME.
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  • From ANON - sglily on May 12, 2006
    Another action-packed chapter! Whew! I really like Malik's feistiness! Go, Malik! I am not happy about him being kidnapped and hence turned into a hybrid but I have to say that I am very curious as to what KIND of animal he will be. Another bunny? Then you would have "Flower" and "Humper"... I mean "Thumper"... yeah... gettin' it on! ; ) Well, as much as Yami isn't a fave of mine, I like how you gals have written him. He is grumpy... "ass crack of dawn"... "I'll kill you..." and all the wiseass comments... pretty funny. But yes, Ryou and Marik centric baby! ; ) You know what would be fitting... Pegasus getting his naked ass strapped to the lab table and being injected with Love Potion #9... aka Yeti? Big white hairy beast? ; )
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  • From ANON - PxC on May 11, 2006
    I'm so thrilled that AFF.net is back up, so now people like me can have their fill of perfectly-written godliness by yee! XD
    Um...and I do so love you for making Pegasus-sama mate the Baku-bunny. A lot. XD You have such a delectable lemon-writing talent! I clap for you! *Claps* o_o; XD
    [ I'm Pegasus deprived - it's the only well-written/worth-reading Pega!Smutt I've read in a loonngg while. Your fiction is like crack to me at this point - I keep coming back and hoping you've updated, and then if not, re-read the entire thing. XD ]
    Ooo...'Everyone' becomes a hybrid? o.o; God, You'd better not abandon this fiction on [me] us! I'll positively cry my eyes out, and spam you with desperate, pleading emails, if you do!! D: lol

    Um... Yeah, you rock.
    X3
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  • From ANON - e.t.c. on May 11, 2006
    YOU ALL ROCK!! xP
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  • From on May 06, 2006
    Update please Ill give you a cookie, *hands you a cookie* Man all of our guys are being turned into hybrids, *sobsA* but Thats ok I still love them. Update soon and happy writing.
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