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Reviews for The Jungle

By : hatochiisai
  • From ANON - Chibi-Chu on July 15, 2007
    *THIS CONTAINS SOME SPOILERS FOR THE FIC! DONT READ IF YOU HAVEN'T SEEN THE WHOLE FIC DONT READ THIS REVIEW* I want some ASS Kicking! Pegasus Just brings Ryou back and pritty much says 'Sorry,I hope we can still be friends. I totally didn't mean to Rape (depends on your view of it) Kidnap And steal your one true love away from you... I'm getting board with him anyway so, Have him back. Oh! but i might want to barrow him every once in a while, So bring him back to me sometimes.' Searosely WTF? Marik Should have total Kicked some Pegasus ASS! And then once he's dead (screw Ryous feeling he's too messed up now anyway) Marik can have Ryou all to himself! Or at least send a sniper to do it, so no one HAS to know who really killed Pegasus...
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  • From sweetciel on May 12, 2007
    *Thunderous applause* Mag-ni-fi-co! I am SO in love with everyone. I'm glad that the end was nice. I thought that someone was going to die. I'm so glad that everyone is alive and happy ^_^ I would have LOVED to see a Pegasus/Marik/Ryou lemon. Just the thought of it...*fans self*..Better yet a Marik/Bakura/Malik/Ryou lemon *nosebleeds!* Great great great!!!!!!!!! Ahmose and mikado would have made cute hybrids ^_^ On to the sequel!!!!!!!
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  • From sweetciel on May 10, 2007
    5 chapters to go before we hit the ol' 'Owari'. I'm so loving it. I LOVED the ryou carrot scene. I had no idea he could be such a naughty bunny. I was hoping the malik got in on the action...but we can't have it all right? I also LOVE how ryou seems to be such an easy liar. Having malik around seems to have giving him a sneaky/mischevious persona. I'm glad to see that he can either lie/con his way out of punishments ^_^ Great job guys!
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  • From sweetciel on May 09, 2007
    ...*CRIES*...Another 10 chapters down. This story is sooooo amazing! Magical! Mind numbingly wonderful! I'm looking forward to reading the last 10...*sniffles*..chapters. Thanks for allowing us poor humans to read such a magnificant story ^_^ Also i like the girl fox. She kinda reminds me of mai...wishful thinking maybe?
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  • From sweetciel on May 08, 2007
    Yay! I'm offically at the halfway point. Now i'm a little sad :( Halfway done...*cries* What will i do with my life once it ends *contemplates kidnapping you two....*...^_^ Love you!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From sweetciel on May 06, 2007
    This story is long enough for me to review every 10 chapters. Woo-Hoo! So yeah...gotta love the ryou bun bun ^_^ Very cutting edge to have bakura as a skunk. i LOve it!!!! It's like ryou and marik became the animals they liked (or were turning into)in 'Tales of arabian nights'. Excellent story...although i have yet to taste any lemony tang. But i'm sure it's upcoming right...? LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!*kissys*
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  • From ANON - PleiadesWolfe on March 11, 2007
    lol. I like that last comment about Tea. I really like this whole fic. It has been quite enjoyable so far.
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  • From ANON - PleiadesWolfe on March 09, 2007
    So how big are they exactly? Because I get the impression that Ryou isn't that big so that mean he would have shrunk in size.
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  • From ANON - PleiadesWolfe on March 09, 2007
    I actually find Bakura kind of funny. He makes me chuckle.
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  • From BrokenAngel on February 16, 2007
    Awww, i loved it
    so adorably cute!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kaire on September 25, 2006
    I LOVE YOU!!!! ^o^ You are an amazeing author please continue writing fan fics.TT_TT I was soo happy at the end of this fic.
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  • From ANON - RabidSqurl on September 25, 2006
    What a fantastic ending to a fantastic story. :D Amazing work. ^^
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  • From ANON - sglily on September 23, 2006
    Oh, God! The idea of Yami just taking off without a word and flying South for the winter is just too funny! Well, your story certainly didn't end as I thought it might. Pegasus had a change of heart (ironic choice of words if there ever were any) and came through for his bunny. You guys hinted at that at the end of the 2nd to last chapter but who whudda thunk it that Pegasus would give up (in a sense) his precious baby bunny? Not I! Not without a nasty fight anyway. How long will things stay happy for the reunited lovers? I shudder at the thought especially after reading the summary for the sequel... You two are Evil!
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  • From ANON - sglily on September 19, 2006
    Pegasus' ugly nature reared its ugly head again, didn't it? It wasn't only directed at Malik but also at Ryou from time to time. But, to tell the truth, Ryou has been rather bipolar with his extreme end of the spectrum emotions... running both hot and cold towards his friend and companion, Malik. Well, Pegasus should be included in that description as well. Nice to end the vacation on such a crappy note - knowing that Malik is to be put up on the "For Sale" block. I found it disturbing that Ryou knew damn well what was happening in the back of the limo even beyond the beating that Malik was subjected to and yet still could defend Pegasus in his mind. Always the manipulating bastard, it was even more disturbing when Pegasus left all the little gifts for Ryou, knowing that the whore bunny would fall for the tokens of false love. Malik and Bakura's reunion was classic - taking over Marik's cave was pure fun. The confrontation with Pegasus was rather ugly. Afterward I was rather surprised that Ryou was able to forgive Pegasus for all the heartbreak and the wrongs done to his (Ryou's) person. Look forward to the next installment as always!
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  • From ANON - harvestsprite on September 19, 2006
    I like this story and all but isn't Ryou loving his master a little to much? How can he want to leave him if he loves him and wants to get fucked so badly by him?
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