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Reviews for A Series of Break up Fics

By : EmeraldRains
  • From dragonlady222 on February 21, 2009
    Poor Malik is trying to be a friend through sex. He needs to stop that and just be a friend. I feel bad for all three of the lights. Kaiba I think will be another who suffers a lot.
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  • From ImmuneSys on November 20, 2008
    Goodness me, I don't think I've reviewed the last three chapters. My bad. I blame school. >> The Mokuba/Bakura/Marik pairing was certainly interesting. I kind of liked the distance of it, in Mokuba's mind. Very interesting. The Yugi-as-therapist thing in the chapter after was similarly interesting, as was the kind of in-depth into the emotions that ended the relationship. And then this chapter...ah, more mindfuckery. I'd almost say that the mindfuckery was even more convoluted than in its predecessor. The ending threw me a little--Yugi just doesn't seem to have any chance at normalcy anymore. I'm not even entirely certain of what completely happened. The whole of the thing made me a little bit sad, honestly, kind of a clouded sadness that I'd imagine this incarnation of Yugi to be quite familiar with. All in all, nice work. Sorry for the late reviewing. ^^;

    And yes...mindfuckery is a very fun word. I think all people should keep it in their vocabularies. >>
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  • From tinkletimekelly on November 19, 2008
    Re: Breakdown,Did ya haft a hide it here? Nearly missed it, for Petes sake! "Beautiful Disaster" and it's second Chapter "Breakdown' should be standing on it own, not under a general title (preferably continuing on). Anyways awesome, so far!
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  • From YamiKuro on November 17, 2008
    Beautiful and Brilliant! I loved the end...and who does Yugi think Bakura cheated on him with?

    And i LOVED the end!!! Brilliant!!

    Loved it.

    Kuro
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on November 17, 2008
    Poor Yugi. I wonder just what Malik did with the Millenium Rod and what happened to Bakura. I feel bad that Yugi is still so confused but happy that now he is actually loved and not mistreated like he was with Bakura. Great job.
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  • From TheUltimateToken on October 31, 2008
    When I first spotted this,
    I skipped right over it.
    However, anytime I saw it again,
    I'd linger over the link before moving on.
    Finally, my curiousity got me,
    and I decided to read it.
    When I found they were song fics,
    I became quite anti since it seems,
    no one can write a decent song fic these days.
    But you...you're a dime a dozen.
    I absolutely love these things!
    The pairings are good, different, fresh.
    I could definitely get use to this.
    Also, I say: YAY! For the Beautiful Disaster.
    =D
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  • From YamiKuro on October 28, 2008
    Ah, i finally got around to reading this today. Its beautful. I love it. Amazing job!!

    Love,
    Kuro :3
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  • From dragonlady222 on October 28, 2008
    Yay! I liked this one. Honda is an idiot but then again that's why Otogi left.
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  • From dragonlady222 on October 28, 2008
    Poor Jou and Seto. Mokuba really screwed them up. I hope Seto will rethink it.
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  • From tinkletimekelly on October 24, 2008
    I love chapter 6. Love the end twist. I honestly thought it was joey or one of the phyco twins Marik/Malik. Way to bad it's only a one shot.
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  • From catti on October 24, 2008
    Im not sure about the remix, let me go listen to it...but I really liked this little psycho twist...hmmmm....gives me an idea?...laughs evilly...Ill get back to you...catti
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  • From ImmuneSys on October 06, 2008
    I liked this chapter, a lot. The mindfuckery was intriguing. I think it's my favorite chapter yet.
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  • From YamiKuro on October 06, 2008
    HOw about one where Mokuba is with (somebody, Seto i think maybe?) and sees Seto cheating with Jou, so he goes to be with Bakura/Marik? And I dunno which song XD

    I liked this oneshot alot....Kleptoshipping is fun :)

    Kuro
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  • From dragonlady222 on October 06, 2008
    I loved it! Thanks. I did not see the twist in the eind. So that's ow yami hurt Yugi. Seems like Ryou has some feelings for Yugi too.
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  • From dragonlady222 on September 20, 2008
    I love these little stories. the girl is Kisara, of course. I wonder how Honda will react.
    How about a Bakura/Ryou Ryou/Yugi or Bakura/Yugi one.
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