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Reviews for A Series of Break up Fics

By : EmeraldRains

From dragonlady222 on June 01, 2009
Darn, I felt bad for Anzu. I lost where I last reviewed but I loved all the stories, just got caught up. I hope you can find another job. Good Luck.
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From KuroSakura on May 31, 2009
Whoo, for break up fics~
I can't recall if I've reviewed before, so I decided to do so again, especially since I've reread some of them. I think my favorite so far is What Hurts The Most. As a request, I'd like to see a Bakura/Seto. Please?
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From ANON - Rella on May 31, 2009
I'm just glad to see you're back because reading each new chapter is a nice highlight to my mornings. I wish you the best of luck that things will work out soon! Oh, and I'm not sure if anyone answered to Ryou and Malik height question so here it is: http://www.absoluteanime.com/yu-gi-oh/bakura.htm and http://www.absoluteanime.com/yu-gi-oh/marik.htm. Ryou is 5'7" and Malik is 5'11". Hope that was helpfull.
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From jeazard on April 21, 2009
Hmmm, love the stories! =D

And maybe you have use for these songs?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PBe22HYEbe0
"What about us" by John Barrowman. =)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GLr_RcOS8Aw
"Between" by Vienna Teng

Also, you write Seto really well! ^_^x *thumbs up*
Keep up the great work!
~jea
~jea
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From jeazard on April 20, 2009
"Breakdown"
GOD, this is so awesome! So wonderfully messed up and freaky and WRONG and just right!
I'm so glad you did another one in this line. =)
~jea
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From jeazard on April 20, 2009
"Beautiful Disaster"
Since every chapter is so drstically different, they kinda all deserve seperate feedbacks. XD
I LOVED this chapter, it's way awesome. The style was beautiful, the story complex and full of secrets with a nice twist at the end. Poor Yugi.
I'd actually love to read more of this. =)
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From jeazard on April 20, 2009
"Before he Cheats"
I like the chapter in general - idea and writing are good - and the previous chapters were great as well. Just one thing:
I think Yami wouldn't react like this; he'd face things, not run away. In that situation, I think it would hev been very much like him to just walk into that bar and wait for Yugi and Seto to come back from the bathroom and confront them. He'd have this air of superiority about him, even if inside he wanted to cry. After he resolved things he might still have left for Egypt, but the car thing is a little heavy. =/
Still, great stories, gonna read the rest now. =)
~jea
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From dragonlady222 on April 03, 2009
Good story. Poor Yugi looks like he is second best to everyone. Yami really wants Seto but will take Yugi and Seto wants Yami but not Yugi and will take Joey insted.
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From ANON - Teania on March 29, 2009
Well...
It was...

...Really nice.;) I liked it. :) the ending wasn't exactly what I was suspecting, but I did like it alot.I kind of had in mind that while they were on the phone, Yami would get into the accident and they would reunite at the hospital and get back together or yami might die or something, but I did say not to be a deathfic, so yea. I still liked it very much. Thank you for writing it for me
I didn't mean to make it drain you or anything, but thanks for sticking with it! :) I really did like it alot and again, Thanks alot! :D
-teania
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From catti on March 28, 2009
Yes...Tae wants Yami but Yami wants Yugi and Yugi wants Yami...BTW...love the whole Yugi-Bakura-Ryo psych series cannot wait for an update..bows to the master on that one..if you ever want to collaborate let me know...love to write a short storie or one-shot with you...catti
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From catti on March 27, 2009
Hey!..just me, catti again...how about another?...this time maybe Jou and Seto?...work it girl...song by Papa Roach....

"Forever"

In the brightest hour of my darkest day
I realized what is wrong with me
Can't get over you. can't get through to you
It's been a helter-skelter romance from the start
Take these memories that are Haunting me
Of a paper man cut into shreds by his own pair of scissors
He'll never forgive her...he'll never forgive her...

Because days come and go but my feelings for you are forever
Because days come and go but my feelings for you are forever

Sitting by a fire on a lonely night
Hanging over from another good time
With another girl... little dirty girl
You should listen to this story of a life
You're my heroine-in this moment I'm lonely fulfilling my darkest dreams
All these drugs all these women
I'm never forgiven... this broken heart of mine

Because days come and go but my feelings for you are forever,
Because days come and go but my feelings for you are forever

One last kiss,
before I go
Dry your tears,
it is time to let you go

One last kiss (one last kiss)
Before I go (before I go)
Dry your tears (dry your tears)
It is Time to let you go

Because days come and go, but my feelings for you are forever
Because days come and go, but my feelings for you are forever

One last kiss (one last kiss)
Before I go (before I go)
Dry your tears (dry your tears)
It is time to let you go

One last kiss,
Before I go,
Dry your tears,
it is time to let you go,
One last kiss

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From catti on March 24, 2009
Okay..so yell at me, because I come up with all of these strange lyrics and stories behind it...okay...so we have done boy on boy...heres your challenge...Tae and Yami...now you know we see and read the stories where Tae has this huge crush on Yami so what we want is to break this apart...Yami loving Yugi and Tae crying over it...get it?

"Teardrops On My Guitar"

Drew looks at me, I fake a smile so he won't see
That I want and I'm needing everything that we should be
I'll bet she's beautiful, that girl he talks about
And she's got everything that I have to live without

Drew talks to me, I laugh cause it's just so funny
That I can't even see anyone when he's with me
He says he's so in love, he's finally got it right,
I wonder if he knows he's all I think about at night

[Chorus:]

He's the reason for the teardrops on my guitar
The only thing that keeps me wishing on a wishing star
He's the song in the car I keep singing, don't know why I do

Drew walks by me, can he tell that I can't breathe?
And there he goes, so perfectly,
The kind of flawless I wish I could be
She'd better hold him tight, give him all her love
Look in those beautiful eyes and know she's lucky cause

[Repeat Chorus]

So I drive home alone, as I turn out the light
I'll put his picture down and maybe
Get some sleep tonight

He's the reason for the teardrops on my guitar
The only one who's got enough of me to break my heart
He's the song in the car I keep singing, don't know why I do
He's the time taken up, but there's never enough
And he's all that I need to fall into..

Drew looks at me, I fake a smile so he won't see.

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From catti on March 24, 2009
Okay so Im a sucker for sad songs...but am also a sucker for happy endings so try these lyrics with Bakura and Ryo...they are an awesome duo...thank you so much....catti

Everytime We Touch lyrics

I still hear your voice, when you sleep next to me.
I still feel your touch in my dreams.(my dreams)
Forgive me my weakness, but I don't know why
Without you it's hard to survive.

'Cause everytime we touch, I get this feeling.
And everytime we kiss I swear I could fly.
Can't you feel my heart beat fast, I want this to last.
Need you by my side.
'Cause everytime we touch, I feel this static.
And everytime we kiss, I reach for the sky.
Can't you hear my heart beat slow...
I can't let you go.
Want you in my life.

Your arms are my castle, your heart is my sky.
They wipe away tears that I cry. (I cry)
The good and the bad times, we've been through them all.
You make me rise when I fall.

'Cause everytime we touch, I get this feeling.
And everytime we kiss I swear I could fly.
Can't you feel my heart beat fast, I want this to last.
Need you by my side.
'Cause everytime we touch, I feel this static.
And everytime we kiss, I reach for the sky.
Can't you hear my heart beat slow...
I can't let you go.
Want you in my life.

'Cause everytime we touch, I get this feeling.
And everytime we kiss I swear I could fly.
Can't you feel my heart beat fast, I want this to last.
Need you by my side.

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From ANON - Teania on February 27, 2009
could you do Yami and Seto? or Seto and Joey? or Seto and Yugi? either one of those with the song "Lips of an Angel"? Also make it like, really sad, don't do a death fic, but maybe get close to it, like one of them getting hurt?

-teania
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From YamiKuro on February 23, 2009
That was sad...but i could see Seto being just like that.
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