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Reviews for The Breaking

By : fyrbyrd074

From ANON - RayeMoon on October 09, 2007
Evil, wicked, cruel, horrible...awesome! Oh, sometimes cruel endings are just as good as happy ones. So evil, poor Yugi! I like this a lot, I really do! I like how Yami, even though he betrayed Yugi, could not bring himself to touch the Puzzle pieces and Seto had to do it. That shows some sorrow on his part, but not enough to stop! I disagree with whoever said it was way out of character. For one, this is your story, and two, Yami does betray Yugi in the series. He allows his dark side to overcome him and uses the Oricalcos, leading to Yugi being briefly trapped in another place--whatever it was--and then his soul taken later. Whatever, it's still great. Jaa! (I seem to be realizing that I've read most of your stories and reviewed none. I am so sorry! This must have been back before I made an account for myself. Sorry!)
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From ANON - dragonlady222 on November 08, 2006
Poor Yugi. Seto is an evil ass and yami is a naive jerk. Good story.
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From ANON - dragonlady222 on October 18, 2006
Seto and yami are just too cruel.
How could they do that to poor Yugi. I hope they get what's coming to them. Good story.
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From ANON - cladissa on December 21, 2005
I can't help but say that that was really cruel.
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From ANON - Amy on November 26, 2005
Oh, so angsty! There's sequels?
Hurry up and post them.
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From ANON - CrystalWish on November 26, 2005
Hi!

Really original. I liked it. I never expected Yami to betray Yugi like that.
I'd love to read the sequels; especially if it involves Yugi coming back taking revenge.

Ja ne!
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From ANON - burgundy@cutey.com on November 26, 2005
Wow. Do the world a favour, and never write again.
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From ANON - Camille on November 26, 2005
That was cold! How could he? I feel sorry for Yugi. Now his soul will never be released.
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From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on November 26, 2005
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